[Report This]Date: June 11 2026 11:20 AM Title: Full Story
Absolutely LOVE this story. It's very original and creative! I thought she was gonna be unaware the whole time and eventually break her piece or something, but I love how cruel she was after she found out about him. The way you describe the scale and difference between them is amazing too, it really puts into perspective just how powerless he really is. I really hope you stick to one offs like this because I love your writing.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2026 6:17 PM Title: Full Story
Thanks for the story. Always a big fan of your writing and Delaney is just the best. Very excited to hear there’s more stories coming this summer.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2026 12:59 PM Title: Full Story
very nice work. enjoyed the concept
[Report This]Date: June 05 2026 2:04 PM Title: Full Story
This was a very good story and honestly waiting until you completed it before uploading really is a great decision, you make really good stories but they almost never get completed. I would happily take a longer wait time for your stories if it means they come out complete.
Date: June 05 2026 5:56 AM Title: Full Story
I really loved the story.
I would have liked it if he had remained unaware, and perhaps Delaney had broken a few of his vertebrae with a powerful yank, leaving him paralyzed.
I look forward to future stories and hope that maybe a full "unaware" story comes along :)
[Report This]Date: June 04 2026 9:53 PM Title: Full Story
I read your story and genuinely loved it. It left a lasting impression on me and stayed in my thoughts long after I finished reading. The world building is amazing, and as I went through the story, a few questions about the characters came to mind that I would really love to ask you. Would it be possible for us to continue this conversation on Discord? I normally don't share my personal Discord with anyone, but I truly enjoyed your story and wanted to discuss it further, so I'm making an exception. My Discord is dizzysketchie I'll be waiting for you there.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2026 5:05 PM Title: Full Story
Very cool and unique! Liked it a lot.
Just to be clear, is Grace an older sister or their mom? I might have missed it but I don't think she was introduced.
A story a week sounds cool. I would love to see Delaney do something like set him up to be stepped on or eaten by Alexis too. Like he says he doesn't want to be anywhere near Delaney's gross feet and so she punishes him by dropping him into Alexis's shoes and inviting her on a jog.
Would also love to see Delaney do something like drop Chase in her own pants, then pretend to "find" him in front of Alexis and act like he intentionally shrunk himself to sneak into her pants. Then Delaney could helpfully take over the role of punishing him by say dropping him back down the back of her pants before a workout class or something.