[Report This]Date: September 03 2026 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Lindens
I may be biased, but this story is everything I wanted. The constant dread and peril caused by dogs just being dogs is so palpable. I love the distinct cast of dogs and their various specialties when it comes to effectively wiping out a bloodline just because they became a few feet shorter. And some of them doomed their owners lovingly. You can’t be mad at them, they’re doing exactly what they’ve always done.
I can’t wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response:
ah, hello there, glad to hear it, yeah, i did put some tought on adding that dread feeling that they do feel when their own dog do those things to them.
I do am working on a similar commission project, but it isn't my usual type of story, but hey, any idea that you find interesting, send me a DM, I´ll be happy to talk about it.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2026 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Lindens
I really liked the story and the fact that were defined by their distinct breeds, animal nature and instinct. The casual unaware cruelty and the hunting behavior of the dogs was really well done. The dogs being portrayed as a range from being confused, unaware and eventually giving in to their instincts was really good as well while utilising all of their senses especially their noses and smell.
Even though this was a commission, I wish there was a short disposal scene at the end as well as descriptions of the dog's insides and how the people were being digested.
Author's Response:
Yeah, i kind of skipped that one, commission requisitions focused on other... "aspects" of the story, but hey, if you're interested on these things or want something like that, i'm open to commissions and totally could work something to your liking.