[Report This]Date: January 10 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good Story, Very unique. I like how he submits right away. i usually draw it out.
Author's Response:
It's not so much that he's submitting. I'm not entirely set on what I'm going for but we'll see what happens.
Oh and I like your stories on writing.com, so thanks for the kind words!
Date: January 08 2011 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow amazing, more please
Date: December 22 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hope you continue this - its a fantastic story and you are developing a most interesting dynamic between the two characters.
Author's Response:
That's what I was going for, something you don't normally see between the two parties. So thanks!
Date: October 25 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far a great story. I am really enjoying reading it.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
hope to see more...
[Report This]Date: October 25 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is extremely well written, full of spot-on description! I actuall see these characters. The tension between the mother's playfullness and her cruel actions, work pefectly. The son is simply being overshelmed into accepting the power of his mother's bodies and odors to control him. Keep this up; it's one of the finest stories I've come across that deals with this theme!
Author's Response:
I was really chuffed to get a comment from this guy, so there you go. Look up his stuff if you haven't, it's a lot darker than I'd like but really good.