[Report This]Date: March 12 2011 3:54 PM Title: Studying With Brianna
You're getting to be just as sadistic as Brianna and Tiffany. By so cruelly prolonging the anticipation of his eventual shrinkage, I mean.
;-)
[Report This]Date: March 11 2011 7:27 AM Title: Change of Plans
So, it's a _fourth_ party who handles the actual shrinking? Interesting variation!
[Report This]Date: March 09 2011 9:44 PM Title: Change of Plans
interesting... looking forward to the shrinking though. =p
aaron
[Report This]Date: March 02 2011 7:43 AM Title: No Days Off
Heh! I have a strong feeling Nick's luck is going to run out at the end of the next chapter. ;-)
Author's Response:
It does, but in a very surprising way.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2011 6:21 AM Title: No Days Off
really great chapter. wonder if brianna knows that tiffany can shrink you...
at any rate, cant wait till she does shrink down to a couple inches or so.
aaron
[Report This]Date: February 28 2011 8:22 PM Title: Daydreaming
I think this a great story although the speeches that Tiffany and Brianna make are a bit over the top. I'm curious as to when he shrinks only Tiffany toys with him or Brianna joins in as well.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2011 9:36 AM Title: "F" & "A" Students
looking forward to see where this story goes... its getting very interesting.
aaron
[Report This]Date: February 28 2011 9:07 AM Title: "F" & "A" Students
Brianna better be careful. Tiffany might decide she prefers doing shrunken _couples_!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2011 6:03 PM Title: Daydreaming
Promising start!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2011 10:06 AM Title: Daydreaming
looking forward to the next chapter. love the foot play an the characters are kinda cliche but im a sucker for predictability(an senual foot rubs)
only wish that the teacher wasnt such an... idk... 'extreme feminist'. but hopefully youll explain why in the chapters to come.
aaron
ps are tiffany's toe-nails painted, if so what shade?
Author's Response:
The reason she's an extreme feminist is simple. The guy who commissioned this story wanted the teacher to be an extreme feminist. No other reason more than that. She just thinks the male race are insects compared to the female gender.
The toe nail thing will be completely up to your interpretation. I never talk about it in the entire story and the story has already been finished. I just haven't uploaded the other 8 or so chapters because that stuff hasn't been proof read yet.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2011 12:56 AM Title: Daydreaming
There's something about certain authors who write this sort of thing that allow them to instill a very powerful sensuality into their writing, even with very few words. I don't know what that thing is, but you certainly seem to have it.
If you don't get many comments on this story, don't assume it's because of some fault of yours, and then become discouraged. We all just finished our guilty pleasures before we got a chance to review it.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2011 6:09 PM Title: Daydreaming
OK. Good start.
A well-written story.
Please continue.
Author's Response: It'll be continued. The story is actually already finished. I just haven't proof read the rest of the stuff, so don't worry, this won't be an unfinished story.