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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hey! That would make a great alias for them, if they ever went to a motel for a weekend vacation: Joe and Diane Tucker.

Seriously, though; this was a great story, in general And, this particular chapter was suitably...climactic.


:-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

lol great ending. i dont whant it to end...

aaron

ps do you have any future stories planned?

Reviewer: Canaan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a completely delicious story!  Hoping for more, and that you continue with it soon!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 14

what an incredible chapter... this whole scene was inspired. an finally he has 'food'.
cant wait to read the next chapter

aaron

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing so consistantly, your input has been inspiring.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

This chapter truly moooooooo(!)ved me.

X-D

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've got to say, I'm really loiving the way the relationship between the characters is developing in this story. Because as it stands, it's a real refreshingly unique twist from so many other GTS/SM tales. And you better believe I'll be looking forward to each new chapter you post. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment, I hope you continue to enjoy character's relationship.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

lol for some reason i love the relationship they have.

aaron

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Date: March 19 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

what an intese scene...

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

Uh-oh! Looks like this might be the final chapter for poor little Joe. :-(

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

It's nice to see this future classic of yours continued so promptly. I guess Ed Sullivan was right.*

"The 'shoe' must go on!"

*Sorry: Baby-boomer reference. ;-)

Author's Response:

Hahaha I caught it. I'm glad you're enjoying this story as much as I am.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

Talk about a chestful of surprises!

:-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

had some funny parts too. great job. love this story

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2011 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 10

An interesting title for a sequel.

"DIANE; GODDESS OF COUGARS."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sorry. But, I've just got to say it.

This was the most tit-illating chapter, yet!

;-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

hell i wouldnt wanna go back either...
but is gonna be given an ie of what her 'punishment' might entail...

aaron
ps awesome job, i really am feeling like this story plot hasnt been do before(i could be wrong though), at any rate its remarkable

Author's Response:

Thank you greatly for all your positive responses.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

wow... this story really does keep getting better an better.
congrats on yet another stellar chapter.

aaron
ps i love his size as well as the way she cares forhim an talks to him.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

love the fact that in the beginninghes still scare shitless of her... love the 'massage' too.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

This keeps getting better and better. In fact, at this rate, it could rival GREG'S BIZARRE EXPERIENCE for pedal-erotica!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

awesome ending. short an sweet. love her character, shes so life like its unreal. great job. cant wait to see where the next chapter takes us...

and hes getting smaller... thats fantastic.

aaron

Author's Response:

I often wonder how realistically I'm portraying the character's personalities. Thank you for the feedback.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

Only if he goes below, say, 3-6 inches. Otherwise, I think it safe to assume that he'll survive to receive a lot more mothering in chapter eight.

:-)

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