[Report This]Date: June 13 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
rating to offset the closed-minded dull-whitted asshats that have rated despite being forewarned of the content.
Will read and re-rate later.
Date: October 01 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
If I were max, I would bottle up the lake water for future use. Maybe it has a fifferent effect on humans.
Date: September 19 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
I thought the story was fine. I'm also of the opinion that whether it contains furries (or what have you) or not doesn't make or break the quality of the story. Thanks for sharing it, sir :).
[Report This]Date: August 23 2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
I have to agree with some of the other reviews here, this is not the place for this story, i come here to read GTS stories not furry stories. There are plenty of furry sites and you don't see GTS stories on them do you?
Judging from your responses to reviews you really don't care that others think your story does not belong here, well that fine but don't be surprised when this story and others you post like it get bad reviews.
Author's Response:
im fully aware of the bad reviews I will be getting. This story is probably just going to keep going though
Date: July 10 2011 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 2: Metalic Justice
Ok so I'm finding the story hard to follow because of all the huge spaces between lines, could perhaps sort that out? Coud you add more description also. As someone who doesn't normally read furry stories I don't know what a humanoid cat looks like. I'm sorry for being Mr. Gruble. :/ I actually feel bad now. What I would suggesti looking at the 'writing tools' section of giantessworld. That will really help you. If not then you can send me a message I'll give you come tips. If you'd like I can e-mail you instead but I don't want to prempt your response. I hope I can be of use and maybe you could take a look a some of my stories for insperation.
Author's Response:
I am looking into the Line issue as we speak :3
Date: July 10 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
I think this could be a good story, assuming it has a good enough back story. I was thinkin to myself, oh another furry story, but actually it's alright. I really like cats but the only problem I have is a spacing issue between likes. There's so much blank space. It could just be me or maybe it's giantessworld but sicne coming back this is the second story I've seen with this issue.
Now I'm not sure if I'll be able to contribute but I'll keep you in mind, however, I don't think allowing just anyone to contribute is a good idea as they might deviate from your original intentions. Basically, they might not keep everyone in character or keep to the story effectivly, but perhpas I can take a request. It's the summer now so I should have more time on my hands since I'm not back in college until September.
P.S. Are you really a giantess. There are so few it's hard to believe.
Author's Response:
Not really :( and contributors E-mail me the chapters they want imput first so I can look over them :) and I will look into the line issue
Date: July 04 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
lame story
Author's Response:
Why do you say that?
[Report This]Date: June 27 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thanks!. You can always email a chapter to add on to
gtsmoe@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: June 25 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1A & 1B: The start
Too weird for me. Look at what this page is about please. Then think is this the right place for this story? I wont be readinging other chapters.
Author's Response:
It is exaclty how i have it labled. It is just a slow story
[Report This]Date: June 22 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2: Metalic Justice
A 50/50 mix of cat and human?
Weird.
Author's Response:
yepp. human body with cat ears, paws (feet) claws(hands) fur and a tail. 50/50 cat and human