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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 28 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story. But I think she should have tormented him much longer. Oh if he woke up naked she couldn't dangle him by his shirt. Thats a mistake in continuity.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmmmm.

"When he came to, he found himself naked" If he was naked, how could she dangle him by his shirt?

Too short...

 

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