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Reviewer: Ankan Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2020 8:14 AM Title: A new perspective

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Reviewer: Loverofgames Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2017 5:49 PM Title: Close encounters

Chapters 16-18 are blank, why is that?

Reviewer: roister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 1:40 AM Title: The Private tour

wonderful!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 5:09 PM Title: Epilogue

High school? Uh-oh! That can only mean one thing, down the road.

GIANT CHEERLEADERS!!!!

(Insert icon of Timmy Turner's science teacher, here).

Seriously, though: this is the best Xmas present from this site, yet! A truly happy ending for both the shrunken man and his equally shrunken girlfriend. Thank you, and have a Happy New Year. :-)

Author's Response:

thanks, and you as well!

-Jake

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 9:36 AM Title: Homecoming

Insert touch-down dance icon, here.

:-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 9:34 AM Title: Death of a Hero?

Whoa! How...? When...?

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 10:55 PM Title: Epilogue

great ending. an great story. thank you for posting it.

aaron
is the sequel gonna be about school an home life with his mom? an michelle in there somewhere..

Author's Response:

I defibetely plan on using a highschool as the setting, he'll definetely have some incidents with his mother as well, as for michelle, i'm not sure yet, we'll have to wait and see :P

Reviewer: Cheezo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 2:27 PM Title: Death of a Hero?

Was that the last chapter? Or are there gonna be several gentle giantess chapters now? If this story is done, please finish your music box story, its very interesting.



Author's Response:

there will be at least one more chapter to wrap things up, but thank you for the compliments on the music box, i'll be restarting that one soon enough as well

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 8:36 AM Title: Death of a Hero?

You've more than made up for it with this spectacular chapter. I was so pissed at those three giant bitches I forgot about Michelle, an then here is the cops with his mom. Worked out perfectly. They were caught red handed. I just hope that you have more than one chapter planned next. I love where you are taking this story. I should've had more faith.
Great story.

Aaron

Author's Response:

thanks, unfortunately I do plan on ending this story soon, however a sequel is a definite possibility

Reviewer: Cheezo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2011 5:29 PM Title: Strange Dreams

Brilliant story! I honestly almost cried when I finished the last chapter. Please don't stop writing this story like 75% of authors on this site do :P



Author's Response:

wow! thanks, I honestly didn't think it would have such an effect, but I do plan to finish this one :)

-Jake

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 25 2011 3:48 PM Title: Strange Dreams

Whoa; what a nightmare! Jake's Xmas certainly isn't very merry, is it?

:-(

Author's Response:

unfortunately no :/ , but hopefully soon he'll catch a break

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2011 9:32 AM Title: Strange Dreams

Holy shit wtf... This chapter is weirding me out just a bit.. So I'll not give a rating because it will be biased.

Aaron

Author's Response:

I can understand, the dream sequence was a bit of a far stretch from the path the rest of the story takes, sorry for any confusion

-jake

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2011 7:10 PM Title: Girls Night in: Round Two

great chapter. love the pace an hope to see more.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2011 4:37 PM Title: Girls Night in: Round Two

Uh-oh! Looks like Nique is going to be a widow before she's even a common-law wife. :-(

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2011 9:07 PM Title: Can't hold it in

holy crap... why would her friends want to play with them now? gross..
an when will jakes mother be making a heroic appearance an stop this wicked alaina? or will michelle have to sneak them outta this hell-hole somehow... oh well no point in guessing. ill just stay tuned.

aaron
ps good if not disturbing chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm planning on giving michelle the role of the hero, she'll be there soon I think

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2011 7:24 PM Title: Can't hold it in

Oh, I will SO applaud when she gets a dose of poetic justice!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 9:02 PM Title: Double trouble

Whew! I'm off to get some ice water.

Reviewer: KageTengu Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 11:28 PM Title: Close encounters

Keep it up this is awsome. She's so brutal an cruel!!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 8:13 AM Title: Close encounters

I'm a little confused. Is it "Alaina," "Aliana," or "Alian?"

Author's Response:

alaina

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2011 9:44 PM Title: The Private tour

lol thought that the popping sound was a nice touch. hope to read more.

aaron

Author's Response:

thanks, though I suspect it may have been used on this site before somewhere

-Jake

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