Reviews For Micromage & Awesome-Girl
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: Showdown At The Teen Choice Awards!
Date: August 13 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: Showdown At The Teen Choice Awards!
Another old classic brought out of the metaphoric mothballs. Excellent!
If I could officially award you _eleven_ stars, I would. :-)
Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Origin Of Micromage!
Date: August 10 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Origin Of Micromage!
Thanks for pointing out the ratings mistake, I corrected it.
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Origin Of Micromage!
Date: August 10 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Origin Of Micromage!
It looks like a good idea but chapter 1 seems to move a little fast and there are a lot of different scenes in just the one chapter.
How can a story contain inappropriate material for certain audiences but be appropriate for all audiences? That's how you've labeled your story by the way.