[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 51: The Interesting Stuff
*double checks to make sure hes still in reality*
Ok it appears I am which means I can comment here.
Welcome back somewhat and kudos on making our teen titaness a little more human for the moment.
Author's Response:
Thanks much for reviewing
Date: August 30 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 51: The Interesting Stuff
She'd better at least go to jail for this. She seems like one of those "If you don't give me what I want, then I'm going to take it" types. On another note, if that one girl loses her baby I'm punching a hole through my wall.
Author's Response:
Careful now, you don't want to be giving me any ideas...
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 51: The Interesting Stuff
Okay; that does it. I want chapter 52 up and posted by the time I get out of my ICE-COLD shower!
;-D
Author's Response:
Well, then, I'd suggest taking a very long shower... perhaps several days long, in fact.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2013 5:18 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
If you are out of ideas, may I suggest going back to where Julia was extremely violent and cruel, like with Jim and Beth? That was a favourite thing of mine to read, and what got me hooked right from the first chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm actually not out of ideas, the ending is planned out, I'm just on a hiatus right now.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2013 7:50 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
It's been 5 months since the last chapter from my favourite story :(
Date: August 11 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 50: On Her Good Side
Love this story, can't wait for it to continue.
Author's Response: Thanks! It will eventually
[Report This]Date: July 26 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 50: On Her Good Side
I really love this story and hope it is not dead. Please continue it. I also hope jack gets feelings for Julia and that they fall in love.
Author's Response: Thanks for your interest. Due to a combination of insane real-life busy and some slight burnout on fetish writing, I've been dragging my feet on this one. However, I do guarantee it will be back at some point; I'm not one to leave tales unfinished, especially since a lot of people have been very supportive of this particular one.
Date: April 04 2013 3:45 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Well, this is a bit of a surprise. Where is Jack planning to take this?
Author's Response:
well, besides Julia's nipples, he's planning to take it to [spoilers]
[Report This]Date: March 25 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 50: On Her Good Side
Awesome to see this updated.
Author's Response:
thanks man
[Report This]Date: March 25 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 50: On Her Good Side
You're probably six of one, and half a dozen of the other, Jack.
LOL!
Seriously, though: could he be getting a case of that Stockholm Syndrome?
Author's Response:
i sincerely hope he isn't, though one surely couldn't blame him for it after the things he's seen
[Report This]Date: March 25 2013 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
Reviewer's response to author's response: Yes, it does! :-)
[Report This]Date: March 25 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 50: On Her Good Side
"Were you uncomfortable in there? Just having the bra pushing on you?" _ "yeah, sort of"- Yeah Right! Ha! ;)
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing, man
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
The plot thickens....
Author's Response:
that it does, sir. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
That could be the biggest mistake of his life. Lets hope he gots strong knees because hes in trouble
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
Julia needs to use a little muzzle, or a ball-gag ! Ha,ha,,
Author's Response:
you just put a horrifying/fun image in my mind. yikes.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
damn good story. one of the best
Author's Response:
thanks much sir
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
Great new chapters I love your writing style and topics. I must say it would be a shame if you ever quit. This has to be the best story I have ever read Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you very much for the review. i'll keep writing as long as there is interest and giantesses stomp through my fantasies, hehe
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
*Too convulsed with laughter to review intelligently.*
Author's Response:
*stares blankly onward, hoping this means the chapter was done well*
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 49: Booby Trap
Ha loved that chapter. Not only is it very hot but the thought of Julia being ostracized for that moaning display is hilarious and beautifully written might I add. I can't wait to see what Jake does next.
aaron
Author's Response:
thanks for the review man
[Report This]Date: February 12 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 48: Flesh Sin
Jeez... story is brutal. I like it though. It's a more realistic take on what would actually happen in this situation. Like kind of exploring what the character and mental state of people would have to be for a) the perpetrator (julia) and b) the victims.
Someone mentioned comic relief and another questioned Jack's sexuality... I'd say after the chapter with Beth getting viciously murdered, any chance of comic relief at this point would feel forced and out of place. As for questioning Jack... Um... I can't imagine any reasonable human being finding any sexual satisfaction in the acts he's being forced to do, especially considering he is the only one that can affect the outcome of his friends' lives. I'd say, his actions are perfectly normal. It would be odd if he didn't react in such ways and kinda paint him as being a bit psychotic too. Which actually brings up a good point. If you're going for a darker ending... Could be that none of them get out of this and Jack kind of loses a bit of grip on his sanity and is forever captive to Julia.
PS: Deleted my previous comment because I forgot to rate and put it on the wrong chapter. =P
Author's Response:
thanks for reading/reviewing. i'm glad that you like the tone i'm using here, and that you get my reasoning with avoiding explicitly comedic stuff. as i continued writing this and found it getting bleaker and bleaker i decided my best bet was to just go all in and make it a darkly depressing slog of giantess content. while i don't want to give away the ending, it's probably no secret based on the previous chapters that the conclusion won't be the prettiest thing