[Report This]Date: October 22 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Whew! Once again, he just barely stays on the tight rope.
Author's Response:
Well, when you've got a circus like this going on, that's all you can hope to do.
[Report This]Date: October 21 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Observation: I've noticed that you use the word "doughy" (wrt the texture of flesh) pretty regularly. Definitely unique. I've never thought of flesh as having a particularly doughy texture. It turns red and white, etc. (there are about a million common metaphors for talking about the way the skin turns color, looks, feels), but the thought of its closing like a 'dent in dough' makes me wonder...
Interesting chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I realize some of my word choices at times can feel like a stretch, but I feel like it's a good sacrifice in order to have variety and to explore some of the difficult-to-picture sensations tiny characters experience, such as being surrounded on all sides by a hand.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 7:20 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I feel like this is that story u dont want to read till its done because it is so well written, and when the story is done u want a sequel lol.If this is the final act then we are in for the rollercoster(named Julia) of our lifes. jacksmith5996=Greatness
Author's Response:
Yikes, let's not talk sequel until we're at the end of one story with enough main characters still intact, hmm? Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
I can continue praising this story forever. god she is a big ol bitch, I think its impossible to like Julia
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 4:12 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
This is one of the best GTS/shrink stories out there. Only hope it will continue and develope!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate you reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
Fantastic chapter. I really enjoyed Julia as well as her attitude. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Ps how tall are the little ones? Roughly 3"?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I know somewhere in the story there's an exact height but for the life of me I can't remember. 3" sounds right though.
Date: October 20 2012 12:13 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Sorry got the wrong story mixed up in my post but I kind of imagine Julia is in some way a student at June and Carly's school lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's not a bad theory. Through tiny cameos and references to similar devices in the respective timelines, though, I do have an interconnected universe of sorts for all of the stories I've written for this site, but it's kind of hard to notice if you're not looking for it.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 45: The New Room Order
I know want to know what that school is doing to these young ladies...
Also another brilliant chapter.
Date: October 15 2012 11:45 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
So glad to see Julia stopped by again. This chapter is very Blackmailesque, she's becomming a bit of a foot slut. Curious thing, there could be a very easy oops with a boyfriend in your boot.
Author's Response:
"Foot slut." I love that phrase. And you're certainly right to think that about the boot; that's actually something that will be brought up in the next chapter.
Date: October 10 2012 8:52 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Is there a version of the story where the giantess isn't named Julia? I'd love to read it but you used the name of a family member and it totally kills the story for me.
Author's Response:
Sorry, this is the only version I have; I write it and post it directly on the forum. If the name is a problem for you, one suggestion I'd make is finding an actress or other public figure to associate the face with so the visualization isn't messed up for you.
Date: October 10 2012 2:49 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
Those last two sentences sounded really final. I guess this means there won't be a chapter 45. :-(
Author's Response:
Oh, so wrong, good sir :)
[Report This]Date: October 09 2012 11:22 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
I am stunned to say this but this may be one of your best chapters ever. You really feel hs mind slipping away with each paragraph.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad I still have the ability to up the ante.
Date: October 09 2012 11:17 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
After the thorough way he describes and catalogues everything in his surroundings, I'm leaning toward 'insane.' I don't believe a fully sane person would be able to keep his reason in that situation.
Author's Response:
probably not a bad assumption
Date: October 09 2012 2:46 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Man I've wondered where this story has been, its definitely one of my favorites. Hope it gets finished...
Author's Response:
It will eventually be finished, it's just progressing slowly.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2012 2:44 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
Its backkk!!! Now I wait to let your genius DO WORK! great ch. by the way, I love an author who really gets into the mind of the charachters.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 29 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Is the story going to continue? I really love it!!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2012 1:25 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Dear lord man, the last two chapters have really taken a horrifying turn for the worse. I'm really interested to see how the hell they'll get out of this girl's grasp. (or even IF)
Author's Response:
yes, "if" is a very good factor to be taking into consideration right now. thanks for reviewing
Date: August 29 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Brilliant crush/ vore scene. It doesn't get much more dramatic than watching a psychotic who's imprisioned you torture and destroy a family member.
Julia is too good at this game. The way I see it, her only challenge is controling her own actions. Unless the maid or better yet, her mom, were to accidentally see into her private life. Their disapearance may be very difficult for her to explain.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have in store for Act 3. I really can't imagine how she'll treat her captives if, until now, had been humane treatment.
With Jack and Julia's newly established intimacy I do hope she decides to discuss and explore her fetish with him.
Excellent work! Quite the legendary psychotic you've created, once again. :)
Author's Response:
Acts 1 and 2 will be cakewalks compared to what Julia has in store for them in 3
[Report This]Date: August 21 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
10/10. Good work.
Author's Response:
thanks much
[Report This]Date: August 21 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 43: The People Zoo
Dude all of your work on this site is amazing. I love all of your stories and this one is just amazing. Please keep going
Author's Response:
thanks!