Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 20: Quality Time

I'll bet it concerns a performance at Carnality Hall. ;-D

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 18: Little Taste

holy shit.. that was an intense chapter. well done. wonder what will happen now? will julia cancel 'school' indefinately? even if not, there has to be some sort of punishment for making julia look powerless.. but i hope not i hope this makes her like/love jack all the more for 'standing up' to her..

aaron
ps are you adding new chapters to this or are they still the ones that have been already written?

Author's Response:

these are still the already written ones. once we reach the end of what i already have, there will probably be a break in this story for a while

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 18: Little Taste

Wow!

:-O

Reviewer: QMajor Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown

Great job on the last few chapters.  You did a good job handling the juxtaposition between Julia's absolute physical supremacy and her immaturity/emotional vulnerability.  Them having to participate in her terrible art made me laugh.  I started to feel sorry for her a little bit until she started being a bitch to Gina again.

 

I really didn't see this last bit coming, though.  I mean, I get that Jack started to feel safe and all but goddamn is he pushing it. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 17: Oral Showdown

Whoa! I never would've predicted this not-so-little plot twist.

THANKS for GIVING us such a brilliant new chapter, so promptly. ;-)

Reviewer: Hollow Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2011 8:41 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning

I honestly don't know if I could stand up to julia like that, Jack's got some serious manhood.

-Jake

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 14: Stroking Her Ego

You might say he's putting on the performance of his life. Let's hope he can keep it up!

The performance, I mean.

Reviewer: Atrus Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 14: Stroking Her Ego

Gah, this is REALLY good. It's odd, I haven't really seen this scenario played out before in GTS. Good tension. I feel like Julia's just a really awkward person, so she has no idea how to respond to Jack's "affections". Really interesting.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Job Begins

Oooooh! Good ploy; making her think he feels not good enough to be seen in the company of a pretty giantess. Even though it's guaranteed she wouldn't be showing him off to any of her normal-sized classmates.*

*And, might I add, that's a refreshing change of pace, in itself, from the usual cliche'.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Job Begins

wow, lol. jacks playing with fire

aaron
but what choice do they have