Reviews For The Conduit
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Reviewer: keky123321 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 12:24 AM Title: Teacher's pet

Keep it up! Looking foward to the next installment.

Reviewer: Ares Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 2:12 PM Title: Prologue

Awesome!! Please continue the story!!

Reviewer: bigmac2345 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2012 1:34 PM Title: Teacher's pet

awesome, please continue with this story!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2012 1:05 PM Title: Prologue

Great story. This is a really cool idea. An I love his size as well as how everybody treats him. hope that there will be more to come. An does his motheran aunt get a check from the government for his condition?
Well anyways I love the characters and can't wait to read more.

Aaron
Ps will there be somebody that becomes enamored with him? Is his math teacher grossily fat or just attractively plump for being so tall?
If it's the ladder I hope we get to see her are feet

Reviewer: happiest_in_shadows Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 6:46 PM Title: Prologue

I'm enjoying the story but given hos important his roll is in the future I wonder why the government isn't taking more steps to protect Jake. After all it probably wouldn't look good if he was killed or taken hostage. The only reason i can think of is the Ashen require that he lives as normal of a life as possible but given his condition that doesn't seem possible. It could be easy to justify having a permenant escort with him just to help him get around.



Author's Response:

that's not a bad idea, maybe i'll add in some new characters

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 1:23 PM Title: Prologue

Oh... the anticipation is killing me! If I know you're writing, which I don't, there's gonna be something dirty in the next two to three chapters. I can't wait!

Reviewer: keky123321 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 8:43 PM Title: A new day

Nice job. Continue soon. Can't wait.

Reviewer: Ddog5456 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 6:22 AM Title: A new day

I'm enjoting the story so far can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2012 9:15 PM Title: Prologue

By the way, not that I mean to pry, but when are you getting back to Distant Relatives? Because THAT was awesome!



Author's Response:

well I honestly sort of hit a snag with that one, I'm sure i'll add to it once I figure out how to proceed

-Jake

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2012 9:14 PM Title: Prologue

Looks good so far. I'm anticipating something juicy in the future.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2012 5:08 AM Title: Prologue

NO idea why no one has not reviewed yet. Very original idea. Love the first chapter. Waiting for the next eagerly :)



Author's Response:

thanks for the review! though I did get some inspiration from assassins creed

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