Date: February 05 2013 4:16 AM Title: Morning
I think people are getting a little scared at the length of time since your last update. I absolutely wouldn't want to rush your creative process. Take as long as you need to write the next chapter(s), but a response to any of the recent reviews saying that you are working on the next chapter would put me (everyone?) at ease.
Please don't abandon this work, you have a superb start and I can't wait to see what more you have planned for this story.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thanks for the kind words.
I really want to continue, but it's been crazy busy the last few weeks. I expect to be able to start writing again somewhere next week. But rest assured, this story is far from over!
In the meantime, everybody can always send their thoughts about where this story should go :)
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 3:23 PM Title: Morning
Brilliant story - maybe one of the most intoxicating stories I've ever read on here. But it's been distressingly long since the last update. I'm not sure how much longer I can last! Please continue!!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 6:17 PM Title: Morning
Top, top story.
Date: January 28 2013 8:51 AM Title: Morning
+1 for me
You must continue this one! it's an amazing story!
Date: January 22 2013 11:29 PM Title: Morning
Love this story, I hope you didnot forget about this great piece of writing.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2013 11:17 AM Title: Morning
This story is spectacular, and you can't even tell that English isn't your native language. I'm not usually a big fan of incest, but there's just something captivating about this story. Please keep at it, I can't get enough!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2013 5:51 AM Title: Morning
Your English writing skills are better than that of most native English speakers, and your storyline is captivating. I'm eager to read more from you as soon as you can produce it, but please don't rush your creative process. I think you are doing a great job so far, and this is, without exaggeration, my absolute favorite gts read of all time.
I like that the sister teases the brother without being cruel/violent. I also like that the brother is annoyed some of the time, but still mostly a willing participant. I'm desperately hoping you'll include a vaginal insertion chapter.
Date: January 12 2013 4:43 PM Title: Morning
i really hope to see this story continue i was eagerly waiting for the next xhapter and wish u well
Date: January 12 2013 4:43 PM Title: Morning
i really hope to see this story continue i was eagerly waiting for the next xhapter and wish u well
Date: January 12 2013 4:41 PM Title: Morning
i really hope to see this story continue i was eagerly waiting for the next xhapter and wish u well
[Report This]Date: January 11 2013 7:30 PM Title: Morning
I'm guessing you're bogged down by work/school, hopefully you'll pull through without losing your head. :)
The chapters you have here are really well done. Do you (or did you) have a larger story arc planned for this?
Also, guessing from some of the things I've read from you at writing.com I'm guessing where you are heading with this. If it is the case then I'm pretty excited for the future chapters. :D
Date: January 10 2013 9:03 PM Title: Morning
it's wondrous. I love the teasing. my one critique though is that you are spendign an awful lot of time with her mouth, and it gets boring after a bit. although the 9th chapter... hoo. wow. nice one.
please continue though, you really do have a gift and your english writings skills are improving by leaps and bounds.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2013 10:13 PM Title: Morning
Yes. Yes! YES! YES!!!
Best story I've seen in months!
I want to give you all the stars this site has to offer, but sadly I'm limited to a measly 10.
Great story!
Date: January 02 2013 5:46 PM Title: Little game
Floored again by yet another wonderful chapter! Definitely well worth the wait, as this is probably the best one yet! That sister is just so mean, teasing, naughty and... just perfect in every way! And I do just love her last words.. how she loves how her brother volenteered for this! Despite the wild fear I too would be feeling, I wish I were stan too!
Oh, keep up the good work, you seriously have a tallent at capturing not just the actions, but the emotions behind them. This sister seems so real, every aspec abot her is just so perfectly done! I can't waitto see what games she has planned next.. and to also see just how long this story will be!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2012 2:03 AM Title: Morning
This is a really excellent story. Looking forward to seeing future chapters! Extremely well written, especially considering English isn't your first language! I have seen people whose first language IS English who are weaker writers. Fantastic work.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2012 4:50 PM Title: Morning
i totally agree with kovukun, it's one of my favorite too!
don't stop writing! :)
Date: December 27 2012 2:28 PM Title: Lunch
Wow, I am absolutely LOVING this story so far! By far one of my favorites yet! I found this story when there were only 6 chapters, so it was quite a tease to read chapter after chapter with only hints of what was to come, but your descriptive writing style, the relationship between brother and sister, and how well you have kept them close has made me always coming back for more! And this latest chapter.. Oh.. it definitely delivered same standard the other chapters were leading up to!I LOVED just how naughty the sister was with her tiny brother, and even moreso, how not 100% willing he is now to his situation.I love the good mix of willing and nonwilling you have going here with the brother.
Best of luck to you with the rest of this story. I don't know about anyone else, but I've been checking back once or twice every day since this chapter came out to see if another one has been added! ^^; I hope you're having a good trip... but I also hope you come back soon! I"m dying to see what comes next! (Personally.. I'm looking forward to that scene where the brother is strapped to her toothbrush... If it's played out exactly how the sister described it.. oh my... ^o^<3)
[Report This]Date: December 24 2012 10:27 AM Title: Morning
can't wait for chapter 9 !!
this story is amazing!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2012 4:21 PM Title: Morning
Wow, 8 chapters so far... I really like the way this story is headitng to... And YES more butts are coming in this story. Best incest story ever!! I'm glad you are exist XD Thank you!