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Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

After 3 years I'm still here, waiting for the next chapter. WHAT THE FUCK.

Reviewer: kol868 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Please please finish this its soooo good

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please keep posting!

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

Please continue this, I love it! Living in a city protected by 10000 foot high goddesses is a dream come true for me.



Author's Response:

Probably won't be updated for a while, sorry. :(

But, that doesn't mean it won't!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Where is the part 5? O.o

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

I really liked the interview segment. I like the rock climbing idea too.

Although allowing the people to choose their own rooms seems like a very disorganized way of doing things. And what if there aren't enough rooms left? Then what? Can they communicate with there keepers?



Author's Response:

Accidentally deleted one of your review questions sorry! About that though they were re-enlarged because not all the people on the plane were going to the micro-city. I don't think I made that clear enough. Yeah, for the room plot you found a plot hole.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

How come they keep being refered to as goddesses when they actually normal humans? It seem rather odd because they don't have any god-like powers, and they aren't the ones doing the shrinking. The machines do that if I'm not mistaken.



Author's Response:

I was just referring to their all-encompansing size. I know that Gods are supposed to have powers, I just like the word I don't know what else to say.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

For all of you who like this story a lot, read 'A Game of Life' by Hedin. Probably the best Microcity story on this site.

But this is nice too. Don't get me wrong.



Author's Response:

Hedin is one of the best. 

Reviewer: kwekelien Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. i love micro city stories.

There are far to few of those.

Thanks for writting it

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