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Reviewer: Some_Dude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 4:31 AM Title: An Introduction

Great story! I hope you finish it!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2013 5:45 PM Title: You're just a bug

Great story, hope she discovers josh soon and decides to torture him.

Reviewer: Benny57358 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2013 10:29 PM Title: An Awakening

Please dude, love the story, but continue it!

Reviewer: Benny57358 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2013 10:16 PM Title: An Introduction

Keep the story coming!

Reviewer: emufossum13 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 10:19 PM Title: An Introduction

Hello everyone, I'm sorry for the long wait for an update.

I was in a serious car accident and was in the hospital for a week.

I've only gotten back into things just yesterday. I will continue to update the story as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 2:29 PM Title: An Awakening

Nice so far. You think you could put in some breast and foot stuff too?

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 11:43 PM Title: An Introduction

Snowball effect, when a story gets one great review, then others will want to read and review. Just don't update TOO often, or it's too fast. I learned that personally. But it's a good story, keep it up.

Reviewer: emufossum13 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 11:39 PM Title: An Introduction

Thank you everyone for the kind reviews. I didn't expect this story escalate in popularity like this.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 10:33 PM Title: An Introduction

Me likey!

Reviewer: Intention Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 10:06 PM Title: An Introduction

A satisfyingly simple start to a story. Since you have established a back story between the characters, I don't have much criticism for this. Keep the chapters short and to the pojnt like you have been and this will be a fine, enticing tale.

Expecting more to come.

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 9:49 PM Title: An Introduction

This story has a great beginning. I can't wait to see if Tonya is unaware, or will find them and goethite them... Maybe you could do both.

Another idea could be having another not-so-kindhearted girl come along, then have Tonya save them somehow, as she IMO really doesn't seem like the torturing type.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 9:37 PM Title: WHAT THE HELL?

Ahhh, I assumed Tonya shrunk them and would torture them! Guess I was wrong! It's unaware, and who knows, maybe if she does discover them, it will turn into 'that typical torture story.'

Great start, nice to see a bit of history shown before the actual action comes. If there is a discovery scene, the knowledge that they were best friends should be nice to know. But if it's solely (foot joke) an unaware story, then I say, Keep on dishing out them chapters! 

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 9:13 PM Title: An Introduction

Ahh, a typical one of 'these' stories. Refreshing to see an author decide to write a torture story such as this. I will follow this.

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