Date: July 13 2013 6:09 PM Title: Prologue
This story is awesome, recently raed through it to finish.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Gadget I hope I can count on your support for the sequel
Date: July 13 2013 12:39 AM Title: Prologue
i like the way you use descriptions, makes for an immmersive read.
Author's Response:
Thank you sizescribe I love being able to provide a vivid picture for the reader
[Report This]Date: July 12 2013 9:23 AM Title: The Graduation Gift
Angela's organization sounds like every cadre of super-villains I've ever read about in comic books ("Magnet's Brotherhood of Mutants," for example):
"The so-called 'normal' humans have ruined this world. It's time for Homo superior to ascend!"
But, if mixed couples like Angela and Josh can get along with each other--maybe even truly love each other--the improvement of our world in your stories need not be a totally violent one.
Thanks for sharing all this food-for-thought with us. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing again Carycomic and I'm glad you enjoyed the ending as well.
As for Angela's organization (which is actually part cult, part corporation) it is very powerful and our two heros, one of which is of considerably smaller size than the others will have to work hard to bring it down.
I look foward to your support in the next part of this story.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2013 9:04 PM Title: The Graduation Gift
Bravo good sir!
I really liked it.
Author's Response:
Thank you AdamX and let me tell you I am really happy that you do
[Report This]Date: July 07 2013 8:06 AM Title: Showdown: Priya Vs. Angela
Oooooh! A mysterious cliff-hanger? I love those!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing again carycomic.
I took a good long look at the entire story and created a moral I feel will best sum up this story as well as guide it for its upcoming sequals.
And it is all thanks to you. because without your warning I would have never re-evaluated my work.
So thank you very much. I hope you enjoy the next chapter I really worked hard on it
Date: July 06 2013 9:19 PM Title: Showdown: Priya Vs. Angela
Interesting story. Hard to follow and wth a lot of unexpected twists at every turn, but still good. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Welcome back Ghost254 I'm glad you find my story enjoyable.
I have really worked to improve my writing and after this final chapter I feel everything will be a lot clearer
[Report This]Date: July 06 2013 9:03 PM Title: Showdown: Priya Vs. Angela
Looking tremendously forward to it.
Author's Response:
You AdamX are probably one of my best supporters.
Let me tell you as I am writing this I am putting the finishing touches on the final chapter. And god I am nervous. I hope this final chapter will be a sucess so that I can continue writting with these characters.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2013 8:28 PM Title: Prologue
I like Angela the most. For varying reasons of course.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing again Dude.
Well Angela is likely to be the most well rounded of this stories characters I would say. Personally I think its only natural to like her considering the other girls are terrible in there own ways.
But I think I know why you like Angela in particular tee hee
[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 7:09 AM Title: Are We Alone Kevin?
Heather seems to be more of a "Jacqueline Hyde." First, she beats the crap out of him. Now, she's nice???
Author's Response:
Heather doesn't know that our main character is the same person from her high school. She, along with everyone else believes that Josh is dead and that he is now Kevin.
Her behavior would have been a lot different towards him if she was able to recognize him as Josh.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 9:33 PM Title: Prologue
lol now that i saw gadgetmawombo's review he might like this story a little more than me lol.
now I know why Priya is such a bitch, but Angela remains a mystery to me. Im looking forward to whts nxt
Author's Response:
Angela's motives are a lot different than Priya's I can tell you that. Mainly because
Priya never saw Josh as a person. she only pretended to be his friend when he was normal sized.
Angela on the other hand actually hade affection for Josh. For reasons I can't explain now.
Date: June 09 2013 9:09 PM Title: Prologue
Dont think that nobody is interested cuz I am VERY interesting in this story...I WANNA KNOW WHY KEVIN/JOSH'S GENES ARE A THREAT, AND I WANNA KNOW NAO!!! *huff* *puff* *wheeze* Im sorry about that...Im done.
Author's Response:
Such enthusiasm!
anyways I can't quite reveal that information yet, but rest assured it's going to show up either in an upcoming chapter or the sequal to this story.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2013 10:20 PM Title: Are We Alone Kevin?
Given some stories dropping off this and Titan are my front runners for story of the year.
Author's Response:
Wow thanks AdamX I didn't think my story was having that much of an impact. You are one of my best supporters and this compliment coming from you means a lot.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2013 7:39 PM Title: To Worship A Friend
The internal dialogue was a tad prolonged. But, better than another overdose of vicarious foot odor! ;-)
Author's Response:
The internal dialogue should be a little more spread out in future chapters. I lengthened the internal dialogue because that part was intended as an erotic scene and I have a tendency to rely on dialogue tags in order to add details. Sorry if it got a little wordy.
You'd be happy to know that the next few chapters (which are also the last chapters until the sequel comes). Will be more plot and less content oriented.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2013 11:48 PM Title: To Worship A Friend
Right, this was a really great chapter. I liked the internal conflict raging on in his mind between what seemed like Josh and Kevin.
It reminded me of Lord Of The Rings with Gollum and Smeagol.
Author's Response:
I think I'm going to have that little voice on the inside of his head carry through the entire story It seems to really add to his character.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2013 10:29 PM Title: To Worship A Friend
I love Paige.
Author's Response:
Then you would be happy to know that, 1) Paige is going to be a major character. and 2) Paige is getting her own story, but its going to be when she is in high school so Idk if you would still like that.
[Report This]Date: April 04 2013 9:37 PM Title: Unlikely Friendship
the detail you put into her socked feet and cleats was something I have not seen in a while. I love how he accepts being her pet and then starts to feel the pain of the risky decision he's hastily made.
Whatever your plans are for the future I look forward to them.
Author's Response:
Thank you Mr E for commenting I have always been a huge fan of soccer girls particularly the destructive power of their feet, so there will probably be more of that from Paige. And also I'm glad you caught my idea about his decision to become Paige's slave as well. But I can't say he doesn't deserve his punishment. After all he traded the little liberty he had left for a little security so he deserves neither. :D
Date: April 03 2013 4:54 PM Title: Unlikely Friendship
Sorry I misposted on Carycomics review I was meaning to say that the plot will continue on chapter 9.
Author's Response:
shut up Amateur Wordsmith you moron
[Report This]Date: April 03 2013 10:27 AM Title: Unlikely Friendship
The foot-fetish thing was a little off-putting. Because, personally, I don't find _anything_ erotic about b.o. (from any part of the anatomy)! But, at least Paige is being half-gentle.
See you @ chapter 8. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for being an excellent supporter Carycomic. I should probably warn you though that the first part of the next chapter is all bare feet so I'll put a warning in bold before it starts and after it ends so that people don't have to read me rambleing on about things they don't want to read.
And on a second note I'm going to start moving the plot along in chapter 8 so... yeah just figured i'd let everybody know that. I just need one more chapter to finish things up with Paige.
Date: April 03 2013 4:49 AM Title: Unlikely Friendship
Make it Nasty and sadistic
Author's Response:
Done and done
Date: April 03 2013 4:48 AM Title: Unlikely Friendship
Make it à little Nasty
And sadistic
Author's Response:
I think I have added a lot of nastyness expecially in the latest chapter and as for sadism don't worry Priya will return with a vengence.