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Date: June 14 2013 8:05 PM Title: Ch. 3 Night Watch




[Report This]Date: June 14 2013 8:05 PM Title: Ch. 3 Night Watch
Well, you misspelled: "enormous;" "arousal;" "intoxicating;" "odor;" and "perspiration." But, aside from all that?
It was an awesome new chapter. :-)
Author's Response:
Wow, thet ar a hole binch of 'E's, an 'I's in them are 'word's of thet kin of spillin err's Huh? Damn, I need a 'spellcheck' or sumthun...
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Date: June 10 2013 4:46 PM Title: Ch. 2 a Footprint in the Sand




[Report This]Date: June 10 2013 4:46 PM Title: Ch. 2 a Footprint in the Sand
Suitably spooky!
Author's Response:
Ah, Yes. and rightly so,...