[Report This]Date: September 14 2013 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 33
Well-well-well! A happy ending for this sequel. But, a suspenseful segue' into the next one. Which raises the question: who might these co-conspirators be? The female sounds a lot like Eris, goddess of discord. But, the male has me stumped. It could be Aphrodite's often-bemused husband, Hephaestus (a.k.a. Vulcan), blacksmith of the Olympian gods. It could be Ares, god of war (and, according to some reference books, Eris' brother). Or, it might even be Hermes (a.k.a. Mercury), chief messenger of the Olympian gods! After all, he was also regarded as a trickster-figure. The god of thieves and merchants.*
*Which makes me wonder if some ancient Greek customer got over-charged for something and, so, thought of them as two different names for the same thing.
Author's Response: I guess I did my job then! I wanted to really make the reader wonder who the two talking were. I decided to go with no clues whatsoever to make it more interesting. You'll have to wait and see in the next story my friend! Thank you for all your reviews! I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: September 14 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 33
I was wondering when you'd do this. I reasoned a long time ago that if there was one Greek god, then where are the others? And how long before they intervened? I have to admit that last game really had me worried. I guess it distresses me when a parent could do something like that to their child. On another note, I'm still waiting for the one girl that WILL remember after the conclusion of a game. Hoping it will be one of the gentle giantesses that remembers.
Author's Response: Well, I did tell you about something about that a while ago. I still plan on delivering on that. Also, I plan on adding more Greek mythology to the next story. Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 32
It figures Aphrodite would renege on her end of the deal, after Jon kept his by helping Bridget escape.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 31
Sounds like a good plan, Jon (lol!)
[Report This]Date: September 09 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
Uh-oh! Looks like Dr. Frankenstein isn't the only one who created a monster. ;-D
[Report This]Date: September 06 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
*Reviewer's eyes glaze over as he has a precognitive vision.*
Bridget eventually escapes and re-enlarges. Only to keep Jon-jon small, for her own podiatric pleasures!
Author's Response:
Anything can happen, right? :P
[Report This]Date: September 05 2013 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ingrid "shoe" lost her temper, that time.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
In the immortal words of Wm. Fakespeare: "Vanity, vanity; thy name is Ingrid."
[Report This]Date: September 05 2013 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
"I'm sorry, Bridget."
Don't be so modest, Ingrid. You're more than sorry. You're pathetic!
[Report This]Date: September 05 2013 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
Does Aphrodite have _no_ respect for the modern church?
;-)
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
And this chapter gives new meaning to the phrase: "Slipper he when wet."
X-D
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
Man! Talk about your "sticky situations."
;-D
[Report This]Date: September 02 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm! Well, I doubt that he's going to seek the aid of Bridget or Melanie. For one thing, with her newly acquired power to shrink things, Ingrid is probably going to make Brigid Jon's fellow prisoner, anyway. Which would naturally make Melanie too scared to try and help out her sister!
In short (no pun intended)? I'm going to have to wait for ch. 23, to see what happens. But, at the rate you're presently going, I don't think the wait will be long.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yes, it does, Jon. And before Aphrodite grows bored with this round, you are going to wish you had never lost your temper. Especially if (repeat: IF) Bridget gets shrunken, too!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2013 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
YAY! I finally win. :-D
Author's Response: Yep! I felt bad I never got to answer your other bets in time, but for this one you were right on the money.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
OK, this bet I _have_ to be a cinch to win: he gets shrunken in the middle of his talk with Ingrid. Instant foot-slave for at least a week!
Author's Response: Alright, it's a bet! We'll see who wins later today ; )
[Report This]Date: September 01 2013 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, at least she ended his "vacation" on a good note. Or, should I say, "foot" note?
;-D
Author's Response: Yes, you could haha
[Report This]Date: August 31 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
And, it will be at this point that Killjoy Aphrodite ends Jon's recreation period, I'll bet.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm curious about how Jasmine feels about all this. I noticed she didn't give him food or water, bath him, or let him do his "business". And I'm concerned that Jon isn't concerned about this. Its just something I noticed. Not sure if its a mistake or is intentional. Otherwise, very nice.
Author's Response: It was somewhat intentional. Aphrodite makes it so Jon doesn't need to eat, drink, or do his business. However, he can if he wants to. He doesn't have to.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
The soccer girl gonna "sock" it to Jon.
LOL!