Reviews For The 3 chances
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Reviewer: Foot Shrinker Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 6:37 AM Title: 1st chance

This is by far the best story on this site, I have enjoyed it so much! You are planning on finishing it, right?

Author's Response:

Yes, last chapter is up. 

 

It's finished now I hope you like the ending. 

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 09 2014 2:08 PM Title: 1st chance

Great story! i love how you write in 3rd person and him dying and coming back to life is a cool aspect too. the grammar could use a little touching up but nothing too major. 

Reviewer: Bobhighcap Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2014 10:18 PM Title: 1st chance

So...he will become a foot-slave, or go the heaven...sounds like a win win...

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