It's a interesting read. It's a shame it's so short though. As for the ending, no deity, at least in monotheism, is merciful in my opinon. The deity watches as people squirm in hell knowing they did nothing to stop them from ending up there. Those in heaven know of the plight of those in hell. Even on this Earth I worry for those less fortunate than I am. Hélder Câmara once said: "When I give food to the poor, they call me a saint. When I ask why they are poor, they call me a Communist." 

Apprently those in heaven aren't supposed to worry about those in hell. Why is it a crime to ask why good people suffer? How can a loving god send so many people to hell? They are victims of the circumstance, born into the wrong religion or affected by choice and chance. I do good things because I want to and I don't expect a reward and yt nastier people than me may end up in heaven simply because of a choice they made? That doesn't seem fair to me.

I'm sorry for getting sidetracked. Including religous themes in my stories has got people moaning at me in the past but in my opnion, if somebody is religious enough to care then it feels like a contradiction that they should be on what could be classed as a porn website. 

I did notice a couple of mistakes:

Here:

I decided to continued my cat and mouse game. 

You mean: continue

Here:

"See I love crushing little men but I hate the mess you make when you pop and

I think it could do with a comma after "see" but I'm not sure. I suppose it could work find without but it helps break up the sentence better.

Hopefully you'll contribute more in the future. The more you read and write the better you'll become.

Short, but sweet. I can tell this story came from the heart. Thats what makes it special.

Good work Anez.

P.S

tell Deelann I said Hi

Good first attempt. My tiny advice (tiny, get it get it) is more "foreplay" more of that kicking him across the room, bat him around a little more, would have given the story just enoiugh length to be acceptable for a short story and given the reader a fun scene :)

Good job though!

It was really short so it didnt cost me any time at all to read it. But I still think it should of been longer, more descriptive, etc. Its a start though, just keep writting and Im sure your stuff will get better and better.