Date: February 17 2014 12:11 PM Title: Prologue
Hi, I gave you my blessing in a response to your review of my story "Empowerment." When I wrote that I hadn't really looked at your story yet. I didn't realize that you had lifted entire chunks of text from my original work. It's one thing to write a story that uses the same premise as the one I wrote, It's another to outright copy my text. Please edit your story so that it no longer so completely copies my text. I am also posting this in your thread at Giantesss City.
Author's Response:
This is a rewrite, and there are lines in the original that I thought were just absolutely perfect and needed no alteration. I've been sure to credit you both here and at GiantessCity, I'd hoped what was different outweighed what was the same enough that it'd stand on its own, but if it's still a problem... I dunno, tuning dialog in meaningless ways strikes me as arbitrary, I'll try if it bothers you, but there are parts that are impossible to change because there's no more perfect way to convey those moments.
Let me know specifically what you'd like to see changed via PM or in my thread over at GiantessCity and I'll do my best to accommodate you if I can.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
How big is she? I think she is kind of sexy, I like a gentle giantess and I am calling her one because she is being forced to do all of this, the destruction is not of her own choosing.
I remember this story on GTS city, it was pretty good and if you're doing a rewrite, it should be even better. Can't wait to see what happens next and if the ending is as good as the old story or even better, hopefully she doesn't give in and turn into a mindless evil giantess.
Author's Response:
I'm not a fan of exact figures, but when writing scenes I have her in my mind as somewhere around 700 feet tall for the purposes of interaction/relative size.
I'm afraid you might not get much out of my story as a gentle fan. She's may be gentile at heart, but certainly not in deed. While I have no plans for her to go completely mindless my story follow's the original down a pretty violent path in terms of things she is forced to do in one way or another.
Still, I hope you enjoy the story. Many thanks for the feedback!