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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 3:46 PM Title: Found

The plot Thickens!! *insert dramatic Music*

I rather liked this chapter. Nothing like a good old fashion 'honey I shrunk the kids' style near vore to end this arc of the story.

I wonder what kind of girl Kari really is? Oh I so hope you give me a hint.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2014 7:01 AM Title: Please Answer Your Phone Mom

This is what happens when we cease to communicate with each other...even on a cellular level.*

*Sorry! Couldn't resist. ;-)

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2014 6:54 AM Title: This is My Story

Great job so far! Loving every chapter, particularly now that unaware has been added. Would be great to get that kind of thing with Kari or Kristen(?). Looking forward to future updates.



Author's Response:

I'll keep it in mind ^^

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2014 1:39 PM Title: Early Morning Hi-jinks

New reader review, I like your story set up so far.
Jaz is either the best thing in the world to happen to him, or a total asshole. I'm not convinced she's a 100% in either direction. That she can hear him in her ear is a plus, but he really needs a safe word/gesture he can signal when things get too crazy. Seriously, he jumped off the spoon in panic, or accidentally sucked in with a breath.
Right now, if I were Rob, I would quickly text my friends the situation, than try calling house phone, her cell, the other friends while moving to an object for shelter or at least out of foot rest territory. But I have a feeling that's not the story this is going to be next chapter.

Author's Response:

She's nothing if not unique. 

 

As for the speculation...Well I won't spoil it but I did put some consideration into a lot of those things you mentioned ^^

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2014 10:52 AM Title: Early Morning Hi-jinks

"Did Mom know I was there?"

I will guess...not!

:-O

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 9:17 AM Title: Roleplay

Jerry Seinfeld said it best: "Women know what men want. Men know what men want. What do we want? We want women!"

Reviewer: Tunes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 12:10 PM Title: This is My Story

Hey Asterisk, I just started reading through this one, and I have to say that you pull off the stream of consciousness tact very well.  It's hard to do and it definitely brings your story to life.



Author's Response:

Thanks. This is the first time I've ever done a major story from this sort of perspective before and it's definitely a little challenging but glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 1:25 AM Title: Mountain Climbing

This is artwork. Continue please

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2014 2:25 PM Title: Mountain Climbing

Like it ^_^

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2014 1:31 PM Title: Mountain Climbing

To paraphrase Carol King:

"Jazzzzzzz-girl! Take Bob's blues away."

LOL! Nice, playful chapter.

Author's Response:

That is strangely appropriate. Jaz, Rob/Bob, Blues. I like it.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2014 6:03 AM Title: This is My Story

Good chapter.

 

Considering the title of the story, does that mean Kari and Kristen wont be as important anymore from here on?



Author's Response:

They'll be back. Jaz is the first girl to get a ton of screentime but ideally I want them all to. Won't say much beyond that.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2014 2:35 PM Title: A Moment With her Feet

From bottom to top in nothing flat (and Jaz's top is _definitely_ nothing flat; lol!).

Reviewer: RandomStoriesHQ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 1:02 AM Title: A Moment With her Feet

Aww please don't make this sexual!!! Haha

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2014 12:30 PM Title: Intervention

Ah-ha! Now, the picture starts to get a little clearer. If this isn't the work of Karma (or whatever), then maybe there's an ultra-oonservative branch of the FCC that shrank him. For hoarding photo-captures of feet!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 9:24 AM Title: Homebound with Jaz

Next chapter: "Guess Who's Gonna Be Pretend-dinner?"

;-D

OK! Being serious, now. It's very nice to see Jaz being so mischievous, yet genuinely caring at the same time. She's sort of like...an African-American Bianca!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 21 2014 9:54 PM Title: Homebound with Jaz

Yeah, I can tell things are getting better or more intense.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2014 8:37 AM Title: School Days

A refreshingly gentle chapter (for this kind of subgenre, in general). Bravo!

Author's Response:

Was it? Lol, to me it's not that much more gentle than most of the other

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2014 7:37 PM Title: School Days

I'm loving this stories focus on how people would handle someone else shrinking.

With most gts stories its either enslavement, death, or pity. However, you have characters treating the main like an actual person, and learing to live with his new condition.

There are not many stories that explore giantesses from this angle.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2014 3:25 PM Title: This is My Story

Since I'm not into micro/nano stories I'm not really into the story; I just wanted to see how you'd define good and bad. What you said is interesting, and I thank you for your extended reply.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2014 2:59 AM Title: This is My Story

I like the story so far, and you've touched on who can be shrunk which is good. However, who defines who can be good or bad? This is of course a very profound question. What it comes down to is whether human morality is objective or subjective. In my opinion human morality is influenced by the environment, scientific advances and culture.

Humans tend to do what is best for their survival (or at least that used to be all their brains were useful for, since our brains are now so great we don't just need to use them to survive anymore). Evolution is clearly a contentious issue in some parts of the world, but the truth is morality is different in different parts of the world and is constantly changing as societies change.

I think I may have gone into too much detail but I'm thinking that if the main character is accidentally shrunk, this could be the reason. The difference is culture between countries can be unnerveving for some. For example, in the United Arab Emirates kissing in public is seen as a crime. I assume a quick peck wouldn't matter so I think they refer to more blatant displays such as French Kissing, which I wouldn't want to see in public myself.



Author's Response:

Personally, I think there are any number of possible explanations. I general idea behind the world is that people use size as and end-all be-all for basically deciding a person's worth and trustworthiness. Even though people are considerably more complicated than the generic terms "Good and Bad" people wanted to adopt these notions for simplicitys sake. Also I'd like to note that I have almost entirely focused on an American point of view so it's more than possible you still have this difference in how things are handled between cultures. Perhaps the shrinking somehow varies. Perhaps the same types of people shrink all across the board, which could theoretically leave a nation with a culture and morals so different from a Western set that it could be a reverse with the "Bad" being big and the "Good" being small. 

The primary idea I started off on is that no one knows how or why people are suddenly shrinking. They only attached some sort of explanation to a phenemonon that realistically is not remotely understood. They can be entirely off-base with these ideas but until there's hard evidence demonstrating that they'll go for the explanation that makes them feel most comfortable. IE "Everyone who is a threat is smaller and weaker than me."

And the story of course finds it's basis in a single person who may or may not be totally innocent and how he's trying to adapt to his new size and live his life. 

Personally I'm surprised people are putting so much thought into this concept of how people shrink but I'm glad to see a post like this. It means at the very least I have your interest lol. Glad you've enjoyed the story thus far. And thanks for the food for thought

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