[Report This]Date: April 17 2014 8:16 PM Title: Manhandled
"If you can manage to imagine all that first off props to you"
I can! thank you very much, but only because of the kick ass descriptions you gave me earlier.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2014 8:11 PM Title: Movie Date
You know the best part about writing in the first person is all the witty banter you can add to the story and have it be totally natural.
Man. I am really loving this story. Sorry for review bombing btw.
Author's Response:
I'll happily take any and all reviews lol. Glad you're enjoying it so much
[Report This]Date: April 17 2014 8:02 PM Title: Family Talk
Good show my friend.
I like the use of technology. An app that amplifies tiny voices lol, thats just plain clever.
I must give you the highest praise for showing how a person would deal with being shrunk on a societal level. I found the talk on The DSBS, and the registration to be genuinely interesting.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2014 7:54 PM Title: This is My Story
Just started reading this and I can't help but wonder...
if people shrink when their "bad", doesn't that mean that good and evil are completely objective in this universe?
I sure do hope I'm not overthinking this. Its a good story so far.
Author's Response:
I'd like to think it isn't but it's something people use to arbitrarily make that distinction.
Date: April 17 2014 11:37 AM Title: This is My Story
Love the Jaz dynamic.
Author's Response:
Then you'll probably really love the next few chapters I have written out
[Report This]Date: April 16 2014 9:00 AM Title: Downtime
Ah! I can see it now: he falls out of her purse or whatever and becomes "Prisoner of the Giant Cheerleaders" (rated PG-13).
;-)
Author's Response:
Believe it or not I was debating on that for the longest time lol
[Report This]Date: April 15 2014 9:56 AM Title: Manhandled
Definitely a five-star chapter. Now, where'd I leave that ice water?
[Report This]Date: April 15 2014 8:10 AM Title: Manhandled
One friend down, two to go. It looks like that relationship is over. Sad. I'm very sympathetic. We can only hope that he can carve out some kind of acceptable life, even as those who care for him most doubt his honesty and believe him to be some kind of closet criminal.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2014 1:17 PM Title: Movie Date
It would've been more appropriate if the two of them had been watching some version of "Frankenstein." Because, I think Robby has just created a "monster!" ;-D
Date: April 10 2014 1:12 PM Title: Movie Date
This story has been well written throughout and obviously this latest chapter only further intrigues me. Im loving his interactions with his girlfriend and how they're both adjusting to his new size
Date: April 10 2014 10:06 AM Title: Movie Date
Hey, great chapter. Nice to see that society's attitudes on shrunk people seem to vary.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 9:45 AM Title: Registration
First, again? I love it!
I also love how his friends seem to be taking this in stride...so far. Of course, human nature being what it is, curiosity will return to the surface. And, one or two of them are bound to ask him the same thing his mother did.
"What did you do to get _this_ small?!"
I can only hope his new cellphone has a polygraph app.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 4:52 AM Title: This is My Story
I know it's a common occurence in that world, but seeing as how the fact that you're a criminal or bad person of sorts when you shrink (usually), his friends seem to take it pretty casually that he shrunk down to 2 millimeters. Especially his girlfriend.
Great chapter though, looking forward to the next one.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2014 7:52 AM Title: Family Talk
I can just hear those DSBS'ers now:
"Welcome to the first day of the rest of your life...without parole."
Date: March 26 2014 6:04 AM Title: This is My Story
My thoughts are similar to Carycomic's. THe title could be a little misleading. All 3 are his "best" friend and each probably has had a crush on him. I bet all 3 will find a away to be his "master". I gather his friends are "good" people, so I'm hoping there won't be much in the way of abuse. Maybe just the awkwardness, embarassment, and struggles of an obvious power shift. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Ah, sorry if the title seems a little misleading. To be honest that was probably the part I struggled with the most before I finally settled on that. I'm still thinking up stuff on the fly but if you're worried about abuse popping up don't be. The worst is probably a possible unaware scenario I'm considering.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2014 3:11 PM Title: Back Home
Hmph! I have to wonder if he was shurnk because Karma (or whatever) has misinterpreted three unspoken crushes on each of his female school mates as "lust" in his heart. If so, it would seem that shrinkage is no longer just a punishment for evil deeds. But, "evil" thoughts, as well. Emphasis on the sarcastic quotes!
Author's Response:
Could be. Not sure if I'll actually try to get into why he ended up small but it's a fun idea
[Report This]Date: March 17 2014 7:00 AM Title: Meet The Cast
"Grace and even elegance..."
Similar to what Gene Wilder's character displayed at not instantly reanimating Peter Boyle's character in YOUNG FRANKENSTEIN (lol!).
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had a bit of fun with that. Glad you liked it. Btw I love that comparison. Wilder and Boyle are some of my favorites
Date: March 16 2014 12:27 AM Title: This is My Story
Very well written, and a neat twist.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2014 10:26 PM Title: This is My Story
Very creative take on the giantess story scene. You have my attention.
aaron