Date: March 28 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see the story starts off as a happy one. Would of kinda been mad if the golems has attacked during the wedding
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 5:24 PM Title: Prologue
Awesome. Great to see your stories again. I can't wait for the action.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll try and not waste too much time in getting some writing done.
Date: March 24 2014 3:53 PM Title: Prologue
Sweet, a sequel! The Vandan series is my favorite as well so I was very excited to see this. Can't wait to see where this goes. An evil prince with an army of ogres reminds me of the Jack the Giant Slayer movie but I'm sure you'll craft a much more satisfying take on that scenario (for us GTS fans at least).
Author's Response:
Well, I hope my tale will be satisfying, since in my opinion that movie was not too good (in addition to being a missed opportunity with regards to GTS scenes). I didn't think of the movie while writing this chapter, but I can see the similarities now (the orb being like the crown, etc.)
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 1:01 PM Title: Prologue
Dont know how this isnt compatible with what i suggested but still great
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 8:44 AM Title: Prologue
Yes! The Vandan series is by far my favorite of your stories. I'm not liking the destruction Argo is planning to cause. At the same time it should be interesting to see the giantesses deal with an actual challenge. This should be good. Also, does the time skip mean we might actually see Belena's wedding?
Author's Response:
Yes, Belena's wedding will be in this story. As will a lot of other stuff ;)
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 8:13 AM Title: Prologue
Yay, another sequel! Children of Vandan felt a little rushed at the back end, hope this one is allowed more time to develop. Argo eh? Guess he still remembers what Belena did to him and is itching for revenge.
He's left out their brother Valdan if that is his name but it might be unwise to underestimate their normal sized sibling. He could prove to be the difference in the coming war since his smaller size would allow him to blend in with the masses and use stealthier methods. Hope Sylvie treats him better after that adventure and Belena is enjoying her marriage.
Author's Response:
Sylvie and Valdan do get along, though not always - but she does respect him a lot more now. Belena isn't married yet, but she will be soon. The reason Argo didn't think of Valdan in his revenge plans is because A) he's never met Valdan and B) he doesn't consider him a threat. But we'll see what happens later...