[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
First of all great story. I'm glad I found it.
I don't know why but I love Jessica and Hannah's relationship after Hannah discovered the tiny people. I guess because having a giantess ordered around by a tiny is such a welcomed change. Also liked when Jessica told Mark to mind her or else she'd just tell Hannah to squish him(that's very erotic).
Cannot wait to see what happens next and I hope their mom is still normal as well as gets involved in this story(maybe at her office)
Anyways, love the characters and the dialogue. Keep the chapters coming.
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think the 'side stories' are extremely essential to the overall story. The slight deversion from the central plot, helps draw the reader more deeply into the fantasy, building up an image of everything thats happening all around them,... drawing them in even deeper...
Hanna, is quickly becoming more, and more attractive! And, when she finally gets her wits together, and tells her 'Big' sister to shut the 'F' up,... She's going to become so 'powerful' she'll be elevated up to 'Goddess-like' standards!
.....so gentle,... and yet, so Gigantic!!!
* but, yeh,... more side stories, I think they really help to paint a picture.
--- poor Mark, gassed to death, and then,... 'Squished,''' between two massive walls of sweaty force'.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Jarred you prick. I thought you were kinda okay but now you're on my shit list. This is exactly what Jessica was afraid of has been afraid of since the begining! She has no choice but to be controling her sister's the fricken sun compared to her, now more than ever! She has to act like Hannah just to get guys! That's the ultimate conceit don't you see?! What Jessica's doing isn't nice but she's acting in her own self interest and I can't fault that. Hannah's younger, prettier, works out apparenty, and was probably taller before the shrinking. She could of ran over Jessica a long time ago.Now Hannah has you and Jessica has nothing.
Poor one arm Jessica. It's over. It was over when Hannah was born. Sure they'll placate you for awhile but it won't last. Your only alive but for the grace of god and that god's name is Hannah. At least she's nice she probably won't kill you.
Date: January 04 2015 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
great story so far
Date: January 04 2015 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
This series is a lot of fun with a unique dynamic
Date: January 04 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say i do like the dynamic of Jessica the speck being in charge (though when she gets what is coming for her i dont think many people will miss her)
Kinda makes me wonder if the rest of the world is stuck tiny and Hannah is the only one left at normal size
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Are you kidding me Jared?! Jessica is the best! She's less than an inch tall, has ONE arm, and is still being a bitch. You want someone who when shrunk to the size of a bug decides now's the time to read a magazine! You know what she is. You fell in love with her for a reason. You better lock that shit down.
Also the only reason she's being a bitch to you is cause you've been making eyes at her sister since you first saw her. It's probably really hard having a hot blonde for a younger sister, she's probably super insecure about it.
#TEAMJESSICA!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Your descriptions and writing are amazing. You've pulled off this genre extremely well with the unaware scenes etc. Very well written for your first story :)
[Report This]Date: January 04 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'M GONNA SQUASH THE LITTLE BITCH MYSELF! WHO DOES JESSICA THINK SHE IS?! GOD?!
Date: January 03 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh man... I can't wait until Hannah finally snaps... It ain't gonna be pretty for her sister. I also find it hilarious how Jessica constantly calls Hannah a whore even though Hannah's the more chaste of the two, it's like, bitch have you even looked in the mirror at all, EVER?!
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks. I hope the wait isn't too long but it'll be worth the wait (I hope).
[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really like this story especially the unaware part! Let's hope there's some booty action in the short future or some more accidental entrapment. Anyways, good stuff!
Date: January 03 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really solid so far. You have a great knack for writing the mechanics of action and for choosing which details to describe.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. This is my first story and your encouragement is extremely appreciated.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
....as I've said a hundred times before, I'm really not into the 'micro-sized' story, but this is really good!
Great set up. Jessica getting shrunk was a shock! I instantly assumed that she was going to become the/cruel & gigantic 'goddess! And, the unaware Hanna is some really great stuff! - (I do like 'unaware', and this was great!)
Your writing is excellent, very easy to follow and the discriptions are perfect too! I only wish that you had made them 'doll-sized', and not so small that they would be hard to see,.. but, it's still a great tale, amazing work! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I really appreciate your encouragement and when i finish this story, I'll consider writing one with doll-sized characters. Thanks again.