How can Janine criticize her sister after all she's done? She almost swallowed the poor guy on purpose just to see what it'd feel like! She's a horrible person just like her sister if not worse! Anyway, I think Tom should stay far the he'll away from Janine or any of her kin if he knows what's good for him! Maybe Janine has had an epiphany about what a shitty person she is but if I was Tom I wouldn't risk it! Pretty much every girl in this series has been rough with him too, this guy has limits no matter how cocky he gets!

Hey, just wanted to comment on the fact that this story has gone far past the scope of the description, as the party has long since been forgetten.  Not a huge problem or anything, you may just want to update it.  Been reading since this story being about 5 chapters, and I've all but forgotten about the party at the beginning, and the description makes it seems as though the story will take place mostly at a girls only party, not the adventure it has become.  Great story though, and congrats on chapter 100 from a first-time commenter.

My point precisely, Hec, How is Lina going to keep Elle from instituting a police manhunt after a week of no word from Tom? Especially, if she wants to find out what Tess meant by "small?" Short of Lina getting her hands on Grandpa Wentworth's shrink ray, there's no feasible way to keep Elle a virtual prisoner in the Lindholm residence. Ergo; abduction of Elle en route to same

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Interesting discussion, tee hee

I'm so happy Raphaella is finally getting involved. I guess Lina underestimated her love for her son. 

Also, it seems like she'll learn about Tom's condition sooner than Lina wanted.

Here it is. The legendary chapter 100!

What I was impressed about was the length of this chapter. Hoping to see longer chapters in the future. I don't expect it, but I would be glad to see that.

Yeah. You are right. I was one of those people expecting some super sexy showdown but it turns out that it was actually a "who gets Tom" showdown.

Wow, this chapter made me agree with licktoy's review. Jessica does seem childish. It's like she found that toy that she never wants to let go. (Insert "Let it go" song.)

I didn't expect Jessica to be that desperate to hold Tom. She seems almost crazy. At first, she was asking for permission to touch him, then all of a sudden, bam! She grabs him with no regard for Tom's life!

I thought you are going to describe Jessica beautifully but instead you downplayed her by instead complimenting Janine as she stands next to Jessica. Was this to make us like Janine again? If yes, it worked. Despite Jessica's age, she lacks the maturity that her younger sister has.

So Tom is airborne falling to the ground. The next desperate person is Janine so I imagine that she will catch him. Then Cassidy sees Tom in Janine's hand and is worried that Janine may take Tom away. Then, to Cassidy's surprise, Janine hands back Tom to Cassidy. I'm guessing Jessica will be too scared to do anything realizing that she almost killed Tom. Might even apologize a bunch of times. Expecting a lot of sorrys.

Are Donatella and Raphella supposed to be based of the ninja turtles? Lol, I can't believe I never noticed that before.

Seriously Lina? You are trying to separate a mother to her son. Not as easy as you thought, huh? And that story was so bizarre anyway. Btw, I miss the Lina that was one step ahead of everyone.

Now Tom's mom is coming soon. Oh boy. And Tess, you got some explaining to do. Also, Tess, just say that "small" was a typo. Just take that word out and it's a normal text. No biggie. Yet she screws up by not answering. Just txt her now Tess, says its a typo! It's not too late!

Speaking of typos. I thought "je nes sais quoi" was a typo. I have never, ever heard that word (or phrase?) in my life. Had to look it up to understand it.

Well, deep chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

I just can't wait for the anniversary chapter 100!

I am really not sure about Jessica. She is kind of childish which turns me off. But maybe we will be surprised.

I'm at this point where Janine just fell off the excitement list. As Tom waits for Janine, I think his time with Cassidy and Miss Harwood showed him what real women like to do with him, and not teenage girls like Janine.

I think I am more interested in Jessica and her reaction. Does she know who Tom is? Does she know how attractive he is? Will he fall under the same spell as her mother and sister?

Then there is tonight. Wow, your writing made last night feel like it was a one time thing becuase you had so much detail and had 2 chapters describing that night. Now we get round 2!

I love how they say that they will get creative and use some toys. The only thing that I feel hesitant to judge on is how the toy will be used. Everytime, it is the same thing, Tom gets tied to it and it goes inside a woman. While that is awesome, it's getting a bit repetitive.

Maybe a threesome with a toy will be better than I think. Perhaps there is a double sided dildo and Tom can be inside both women at the same time.

I think they should get like gummy bears and tease Tom by playing with the gummy bears beforehand. They can lick it, chew, and even shove it inside them.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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You're so close to where I was going to go with this threesome but alas next chapter chapter 100 will not be that installment. Sorry. Doesn't mean I won't unless it a little later though Muwahaha 

Uh-oh! Sounds like TW-1 has become quite the little masochist during his captivity. Indeed, I often tell anyone who asks (and, more often, even when they don't) that--unlike Major Nelson--I would've VOLUNTEERED to spend life without parole in a birdcage surrounded by harem girls and belly dancers! But, I guess that's just me.

OK! Being serious, now. As overused as this word might be, "brilliant" is the only way I can think of to describe this latest plot twist. Tom's namesake grandfather was captured by his mother's horny sister?! I truly did not see that coming. I'd privately assumed he was in some top-secret government lab. "Protective custody" granted by the same Feds for whom he might've developed the shrink ray (as, say, a forensically undetectable weapon for "terminations with extreme prejudice").

This is one of those rare instances I'm glad I guessed wrong.

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I too think I may also volunteered. From the outset I had Tom Sr a victim of his own invention and falling into the Hans of whoever found they only thing I vacillated about was who. The sister of Tom's mother provided my an opportunity to tie this up. It is good to veer from expectation and surprise once in a while. Talk about assisted care living...

Although I did not comment recently I love how the story continues and I am very curious what comes next.

I would love to see Cassidy and Katie will step-by-step increase their superiority and dominance over Tom. Using him for pleasure, making fun of him, teasing and denying his orgasms, making him feel helpless and ignoring his whimpering and squirming. Turning him into their little obedient servant too and punishing him if he displeases them. More dominant and demanding they will be more aroused and satisfied he will be - maybe Tom could experience sub-space?

Just one question: is that "buffeted" as in "Jimmy Buffet"...or "free buffet?"

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Margaritaville