Reviews For Tom's Story
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 9:26 AM Title: Fit to be Tied

Tom may feel differently. But, I think this is turning out _better_ than his dream!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2016 5:45 PM Title: Fit to be Tied

I get why you didn't make Miss Hardwood into a disciplinarian,  Miss Addison kinda fills that role already. In fact, i hope he tells her he's been with Addison. 

 

By the way, how does Miss Hardwood know when Tom needs to come out for air? She's clearly careful.



Author's Response:

Yes, she's careful. hopefully she doesn't lose herself to the passion of having him buried inside her

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2016 5:25 PM Title: Fit to be Tied

Once again, another erotic chapter!

I was very surprised you made the previous chapter be a dream. Then again, Miss Addison already had that dominatrix type down.

I think Miss Harwood could be the teacher's pet person and treat Tom like a servant and not a slave. (But a sex slave would be awesome.)

Every time you have Tom tied up, it's to a dildo. (Or a hairbrush.) I was wondering if Tom can be tied to someone's panties. Like sew some string into the lace material and use 4 loops of strings to get his wrists and ankles tied to it. He can face her vagina 24/7 and the giantess gets to take him wherever she wants while getting constant pleasure. Hopefully a sexy giantess does this soon. (Doesn't have to be Miss Harwood but it would be a great choice since she can take him to school all tied up like that.)

Miss Harwood behaves similarly to Mirielle from Michael's story. I hope Miss Harwood becomes a bit more sophisticated and has some tricks up her sleeve.

Katie should gag Tom too. With a cotton ball, piece of dust, piece of gum, tape, tissue. Perhaps Tom could be helpless as Katie uses him.

Miss Harwood needs to talk more during the foreplay. Talk more dirty. She should talk about her detention, tutoring, after school help, lunch break, school daycare, physical education, sex Ed.

So many options for her and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Tom, Tom, Tom, I'm just getting warmed up...

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 9:57 AM Title: Teacher's Pet

I like the idea with the crop. As Katie used it to flip Tom and then later on tethering him to the crop and dragging him along her leg - really very erotic idea. (These creative ideas I love very much in your stories.) She demonstrated her power over him and he was completely helpless and could do nothing about that.

I am not sure how to address it but I missed certain spirit of Katie you created in the previous chapter. As if this chapter somehow discontinued from that. I am not sure why I have such feelings but something did not match (maybe she because she acts like a professional dominatrix? .. maybe her leather dress? ... I am really not sure why).
I have a feeling like Tom fall asleep (he was very tired anyway) and this chapter was just his dream. Now he will wake up (maybe still on the Cassidy table) and Katie will tease him about what she might do with him ... Then putting him into her purse she as leaves Cassidy to go home. And then at the home she would bind him to the riding crop (without leather dress), teasing him a bit and turning him into her little slave and pet for her pleasure and amusement.

I wish this chapter was just a dream or return back to that sensual domination you indicated in previous chapters :-). 

Please do not take my comments wrong.

I really like your stories and cannot wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I appreciate your input. All I can say is wait for the next chapter to see where this goes :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 9:55 AM Title: Teacher's Pet

@Ancient Relic: Lol! Jessica Lindholm is the only one of those women who HASN'T had sexual relations with him!!*



*As yet, anyway.

Author's Response:

Jessica is a Lindholm and we've seen how determined and crafty they can be. So as of yet is a fair comment.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2016 7:48 PM Title: Teacher's Pet

Ohh! So that's what that whip is called! I have seen that whip many times but I never knew it had a name.

Miss Harwood is a dominatrix? Wow...just wow. They say the teachers know the most and boy does Katie feel like some sex goddess with all her toys and equipment.

Yes, bondage! Love how he was tied up. It truly shows who is in control here.

Speaking of fifty shades of gray, will there be another movie with the genders switched? I hope so.

I was expecting a stand alone chapter for "the night". I thought he would wake up on her bed and then they have sex and then they go to sleep. But a chapter full of foreplay?!! Yes!

Hopefully next chapter is more foreplay and things get real intimate. I hope she takes him to her dungeon and sentenced him to detention for life!

Man, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know your thoughts on the teacher/student interaction, but, we'll see what happens in the next chapter (if I don't bounce it over for a reflective chapter on Tess, or Lina, or Cassidy without Tom, or maybe Raphaella - now that would just be cruel. ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2016 6:35 PM Title: Teacher's Pet

He wanted to sow his wild oats with Ms. Harwood? Now, he's about to harvest the crop!

Author's Response:

Nicely played sir!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2016 6:26 PM Title: Teacher's Pet

I'm surprised Tom wasn't more afraid of that crop. I mean, at his size it could really do some damage.  Though by the end he can at least be sure she won't "spank" him with it.



Author's Response:

Wait for it...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 2:36 PM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

Grandpa: Tess, does anybody else know?

Tess: Janine Lindholm, Carolina Lindholm, Jessica Lindholm, Miss Addison, Sam, Cassidy Lane and Katie Harwood, all of whom have had sex with him at his current size, and a lawyer doesn't know about him but is now laying the legal foundation for de facto ownership of a shrunken person, and now I'm thinking about shrinking and effectively enslaving another man for my own sexual pleasure, and...Grandpa? Are you all right?



Author's Response:

Garndpa: Funny that you should ask that...

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 11:46 AM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

Amazing chapter!

Katie's attitude radiates kind of dominance (which I find very erotic). And although Tom is attracted to Katie he gets a little nervous when she expresses her power a bit - I like that moment very much!

So now she is going to use him as her sextoy. I hope she will have a lot of fun :-).And I am looking forward to every aspect of it. Growing erotic tension and then satisfying her sexual needs by dominating Tom and using him for her pleasure and amusement. And how Tom will be willing to serve her and at the same time he will be sometimes nervous. And how he will get sometimes a bit more as he would desire - but not too much - just to push his submissive buttons a bit further and extend his limits :-)

I think it would be appropriate if Tom is requested to stay respectful to his teacher and address her Miss Harwood instead of Katie ;) Even if she uses him as her ass-kandy; just his head exposed from her anus. (I just love that term you introduced in Michael story.)

I cannot wait how this continues. Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 8:24 AM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

more please!
amazing story!
Only there ..... he does not lose tom he he !!
the tom will be an adult it can successfully work as a gynecologist ?!




Author's Response:

We are still a ways from ending this tale I fear...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 7:15 AM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

You've got me panting with anticipation over the next chapter.

*Pant! Pant! Pant! Pant!*

And when's the last time anybody got two pairs of "pants" for free?

Author's Response:

You, my learned friend are a pant-a-loon!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 6:40 PM Title: Student/Teacher Conference

Oh my gosh! I'm crying tears of joy! This is really happening! Miss Harwood going to spend some time with Tom for the night?!! Yes! Thank you!

And let's just start with her attitude. I love it. It hints at dominance, something Janine always had, Cassidy kinda had and what Lina barely had. Also, I bet she is not as cruel as Janine which makes this completely sexy. I hope she is naughty, big time. I hope she uses her body to dominate him, educate him about the female body as a teacher and perhaps teach him some sexy yoga poses.

I also liked the little fear in Tom's eyes as Katie gets assertive. Also, his smile affects Katie, but doesn't seduce her like the other women. It's exactly what Miss Harwood said, his smile won't save him now.

I hope the intro will be like "Tom, you have been a very.....very.........very bad boy...(she smiles). And I'm gonna....(she starts stripping) teach you a lesson...in detention. And it won't last 1 hour. No, sweety. (She chuckles). Detention with me all night! (She pounces on Tom, and he gasps).

Seriously, doesn't that sound awesome. I e had my fair share of hot teachers, and I would say I would love to be in Tom's position right now.

Next we got the threesome coming up tomorrow. Duggernaut, you and I both know that this is what you did best in your first few stories. I hope it's what I think it is.

Whoa what? Miss Harwood talked to Tess that same day? You mean that chapter a while back was during the same day? Wow! That means Cassidy and Tom went at it like 7 times today. Amazing! (Maybe Katie might break that record.)

Man, do I love fancy women with big words. It gives off that feeling that she is special and Moss Harwood definatly is no joke. She is the real deal and I bet Tom is even intimidated by her.

I really, really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I have almost scripted the next chapter for tom and Miss Harwood, I don't know if you're ready for it Tom. For some reason I went a little off track with our very sexy teacher....

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2016 7:38 AM Title: Katie

One shrunken horny teenager plus two tantric yogi giantesses equals...

...endless possibilities. ;-D

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2016 12:26 AM Title: Katie

This is sooo hot. Please provide the next chapter ASAP :-)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2016 5:29 PM Title: Katie

The suspense is killing me!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 9:15 AM Title: The Wind Up

P.S.---recruiting Jessica to spirit Tom away, to her college sorority house, might be one way to give Serena extra-time to come up with a viable plan of "custodial adoption."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 9:13 AM Title: The Wind Up

Well, at least you proved Tom Speedy's prediction to be half-wrong (lol!).

Seriously, though: I like how the Lindholms mother-and-daughter have formed an alliance of convenience. Correctly anticipating that Tess will break her promise to Tom for his own "good." And, I have to admit...

...I'm rooting for Lina and Janine.

Author's Response:

Each is formidible in her own right, together, oho

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 7:29 PM Title: The Wind Up

I never thought that this tale would go on so long! Not that I would ever object. For me, this is the perfect mix... a fascinating story with lots of sexually related activities.

Keep up the good work!

BTW: Is Michael's Story going to be similar in length?



Author's Response:

I'm too am surprised at the following this story has garnered, delightfully so. thanks for the props. As for Michael's Story, I am honestly unsure of how much further to take that story. Unfortunately one of my biggest weaknesses is I write myself into a corner and then loose focus on a story, (as evidenced by a half dozen unfinished sotires I still have.) That said, I still do have a few ideas for Michael yet.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 7:09 PM Title: The Wind Up

First of all, I was so dissapointed that this wasn't a Tom vs Miss Harwood chapter. I mean, you keep teasing me with this stuff. (I bet next chapter is like Katie driving and thinking about Cassidy and her boyfriend. Lol.)

Although I was initially dissapointed, it actually was pretty good overall.

Yay, Francis is going away so now Lina can come out and play!

Love the detail about Lina getting ready for her bath. Just these details show how elegant and worthy of a woman she is.

I also enjoyed how Lina was in charge of this scene and the conversation. She decided on the plan and refuted Janine's plans despite how successful Janine was in the past.

I can't wait for them both to go visit Tom. (I bet Cassidy will feel jealous of Lina's beauty too.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

You must login (register) to review.