[Report This]Date: March 24 2016 5:34 PM Title: Janine
I don't know why, but I just don't like how the younger Janine is taller than Jess and Lina. I feel like Lina should be the tallest and Jess should be next. I guess I just like older women to be taller, I guess.
Janine seriously thinks that Tom wants him becuase of that wink? Haha! I bet Tom's wink was more of a "Hey beautiful, remember me? Yeah, enjoy looking at me while you can princess." I'm pretty sure Tom doesn't want to go back with Janine. If she does get her hands on him, I bet Tom will fear for his life.
By healing, does that mean a part 5 of Cassidy vs Tom is coming up? Some healing from the pretty nurse always helps.
I'm really curious about Lina's thoughts on getting Tom back. We got a lot from Cassidy, Janine and Jess, but I want to know about Lina's strategy and how she will play with Tom.
If Tom is just going to stay with Cassidy, maybe a certain teacher can, let's say, pick him up and give him some private lessons. Hehe, since he won't be going to school for sometime. Unless, Cassidy hires some teacher to take Tom to school and that teacher can hide him you know where and give him detention everyday.
Ok, I just can't stop thinking of Miss Harwood. She is bound to make appearance soon, and I just can't help thinking about it.
While we wait for that, I prefect part 5 of fun is coming up next.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We already know Tom is drawn to Janine. In the first chapter he states it's his destiny to wind up in her panties. There is certainly a bond there destructive as it may be. Eben if the wink was intended to tease he was sending her a message. The question is how does Cass feel about it?
Date: March 23 2016 7:18 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment
@TomSpeedy: Only in the strictest masochistic sense, though.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2016 4:37 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment
I think they will not be able to hide it in front of mom. The school will contact her anyway asking why Tom is not in the school - especially Miss Addison who knows about Tom may try to revenge and contact Tom's mom asking why he is not in the school ;-)
Janine was always the most creative to get Tom. So I am curious what is her cunning plan to relief her 'physical ache of want between her thighs' :-)
Btw: it is admirable performance from you to be able to write two excellent stories in parallel. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2016 10:49 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment
I might have guessed this, in an earlier review. But, I think Janine will try to bribe Cassidy into coming to work for her...as Tom's "private" nurse. As for Mrs. Wentworth's alleged over-protectiveness? Tom might not be exaggerating, all that much. When it comes to injured only sons, some mothers can over-compensate faster than Donald Trump can say "George W. Bush _bought_ his first term as President!"
By the same token, Tess might not be exaggerating, either, when she claims that Mrs. Wentworth might make her the scapegoat. Indeed, Tess seems to be thinking like her mother, already! What with her half-serious consideration of betraying her brother's blind faith in her for his own "good." *
*I won't say "trust" as way too many people mistakenly think those two words are synonymous. Whereas, in truth, "faith" is what's offered automatically, if not unconditionally. While trust, like respect, has to be _earned_ before it's given.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2016 10:06 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment
That makes sense, though the way he was refusing to let his mother know made it seem like he didn't like her, but i'm guessing that's not the case, he just wants his freedom.
Anyway, i do hope Tess tells their mother, especially since people are already planning on taking him away and they probably will need her help and i get the feeling their mother can come up with a better cover story for Tom's "absence".
[Report This]Date: March 22 2016 1:46 AM Title: Cassidy's Apartment
Tom not wanting his mother to find out is starting to seem illogical at this point, especially since he probably would be safer then her.
Plus their mother is a scientist, for all he knows she could probably find a way to reverse his condition if he knew.
Author's Response:
There is presumably no safer place for Tom. Tess knows it Cassidy knows it and even Tom knows it. But Tom also knows if he is with her all of the adventures he has been having will be at an end which is why he is protesting so strongly against it. Despite some of what hes been through he still wamts to play while waiting to get restored. Tom's mother is an Italian fashion model and his father is a businessman.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2016 7:19 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment
Does this mean that Janine is going to bribe Cassidy for Tom?
I just can't see Cassidy giving Tom away like that. Cassidy is even jealous and taking money from her makes Cassidy look even worse. I don't think it will work out.
Yes, please don't tell their mother. The story is already so complicated.
Enough discussions and lets get to part 5. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: March 21 2016 5:28 PM Title: Cassidy's Apartment
Man! I just loved chapter 71, how Cassidy was on control of Tom and use him in a dominant but gentle way and Tom like it, like he was born to be her sex toy for all life, seriously Cassidy deserve to have Tom only for herself for now on, hope Tom stay for like a month or two "or even more time" in Cassidy's apartament so they can have fun all day like in the chapter 71 or chapter 65 when she shove him all the way in her vagina, I just hope Janine don't steal Tom from Cassidy, is not that I don't like Janine...but it's just that Tom and Cassidy are the best combination in my opinion ^^
Author's Response:
The consensus session to suggest Cassidy is the best fit for Tom but there are still others with am interest in having him. Should be interesting when things start heating up
Date: March 19 2016 1:18 PM Title: Serena and Lina
interesting
please more
Author's Response:
As you wish
[Report This]Date: March 19 2016 9:36 AM Title: Serena and Lina
There is really something sexy about the idea Lina legally "owns" Tom.
Although it will be difficult since Tom has relatives (sister and mother). But who knows ;-).
Author's Response:
Guardianship may be possible but you're right Tom's immediate family may have something to say about it. Hence the lawyer ;)
[Report This]Date: March 19 2016 9:14 AM Title: Serena and Lina
I knew it. I knew it! I KNEW IT!
:-)
Author's Response:
Yep
[Report This]Date: March 19 2016 4:51 AM Title: Serena and Lina
I knew Lina was my favorite for a reason, hahaha.
Really love how this story has progressed and cannot wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Lina's character continues to evolve and we get a deeper understanding of who she is and how Janine was shaped and like her youngest daughter she hasn't given up the notion of spending more time with Tom
[Report This]Date: March 18 2016 8:15 PM Title: Serena and Lina
I always wanted Tom to end up with Lina. But this...wow! I mean, she actually wants to take him under her wing.
I totally approve of this, don't get me wrong. I just expected more like a secret relationship instead.
Also, there is something sexy about the thought of Lina "owning" Tom. I mean, by law, he is forced to be with her since she is the one going to be "caring" for him. I bet Lina will take care of Tom just fine.
This is what Serena should be told. (Serena, Tom is just Janine's boyfriend, that's basically all that you need to know. His profile online shows his popularity among the women and that's probably why Cassidy knows him. Also, since Janine and Tom are in a relationship, it's why Lina has Tess's number, becuase Tess is more mature and responsible that Tom.) Can't Lina just say something like that.
If Lina decides that she is going to be the new caretaker of Tom, Miss Harwood could be the new teacher by law for him. What I mean, is that what if Miss Harwood is does some legal thing to be a teacher specialized to teach Tom everything from physical education to sex ed. :)
So many good ideas developing from this chapter. Especially about this "owning" Tom thing. Seriously, good word choice. I love how she used that term, it gives me other ideas.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you approve thigh there may be obstacles to see this through. We shall see what the lovely miss hall can discover to see if this is feasible
Date: March 18 2016 6:21 PM Title: Serena and Lina
God damn, this is heading in a fascinating direction. Tess is thinking about the shrinker, and now Lina wants to lay the legal foundation to own a shrunken person. If the two were to intersect...
Author's Response:
Sooo many ways to go but I have to be careful not to get lost in it. I have become tangled up in a couple of my other stories which need to be corrected before completing them.
Date: March 17 2016 6:37 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Author's Response:
I was thinking as Tom as a little pain in the ass.
Janine didn't seem to think so.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 11:52 PM Title: Tess and Janine
I actually do hope his mom finds him like this. It's about time she found out what happened to Tom.
Author's Response:
Could prove very interesting. We will see how this plays out.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 9:53 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Hmmmmmm! I wonder if this means Jessica's college sorority is going to get temporary custody of Little Tom?
Author's Response:
That could potentially prove fatal but in all the right ways especially if Janine’s description of her sister is accurate. Time will tell. Or ne I guess.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 8:39 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Darn, I was hoping all this sexy stuff would make you forget about their mom coming over. I just find her visit completely unnecessary and I have no idea where it will be going.
Tom is just aroused by the presence of all these young females. I bet that's why he is in a jolly mood.
Well, I hope Cassidy gets to keep Tom still, they make a great team.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Imagine yourself in Tom's place. Bet your smile would be from ear to ear. I'm glad you can't see where this is going means it will be fresh for you. Let us not forget about Cassidy's friend Selina. Wait have I introduced that character yet? Maybe.
Date: March 16 2016 6:28 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Now there's the Janine we know and love! Unapologetic, scheming and self centered to the nth degree! Anyway, in my opinion Cassidy is the best girl for Tom's sake, she's gentle, sexy, but most importantly she's a nurse who can get him back in good health if something happens to him. From both a logical and relationship perspective, Cassidy is the best fit for Tom. But as things stand, I doubt it's gonna last much longer.
Author's Response:
Muwahaha we know what Janine is capable of while others might be fooled by her turning over a new leaf. Cassidy does seem very compatible with Tom but does she have the wherewithal to combat Janine? Time will tell.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 6:02 PM Title: Tess and Janine
Another great addition. I love how the story feels like it is building towards something. The lawyer seems pretty important, and I want to see where this takes us! I look everyday to see if you update!
Quick question about your other stories. Which are actively being updated and which are finished or dropped?
This time of year is quite crazy for my profession, so I don't know if I'll be updating anytime soon! Probably should have waited before posting the start to my story!
Author's Response:
Thanks beardless bard. I hope that I'm building toward another large event though what is still nebulous in my mind. Any story I've not identified as complete might still be added to though I cannot say with any degree of certainty. I still hope to add to each of them. Because of my two jobs and school my time has become very limited I am focusing my energies on Tom and Michael with peripheral attention to nefarious and Daffyd. I really want to get back into Mo's Story as well. Thanks for the inquiry and your own story. :)