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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 7:56 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday

Yeah right Janine, yeah right...Your sister Jessica is the danger, not you, suuuure! For all we know Jessica might be much gentler than any gts so far, Janine on the other hand we know exactly what she'd do if she got her mittens on Tom!



Author's Response:

Lol, because the readers know what depths Janine has explored doesn't necessarily mean the other characters do. Maybe she was telling the truth about Jess? the best prevaricators often mingle in enough truth to be convincing... ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 7:24 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday

What? Janine is already better? I thought she was going to be stuck in that hospital for a month. Well, now that she is back. The chase for Tom is back!

Damn Jess! I never thought you were this interested in Tom. I mean, yes, you were curious about a tiny man, but you seem desperate now asking all these questions to Janine even when she is not completely better.

Why is Tess so gullible? You know Janine just wants Tom back. I mean, really? An apology? That's it? Tess should've sniffed this lie out from her. Tess should've demanded like a present or something. (I'm not talking about sex.)

And the school is sad for her.... wow. All us readers knows she's like the villiain now, so it's amazing to see them feel sorry for her becuase this students haven't witnessed the brutal carnage that she did with Tom. I would've laughed if some random voice among the crowd just yelled "Is Tom still inside you!?" Janine would freak out, haha.

Janine's like "Just a bump". More like the bump that Tom created while pleasuring her and now she misses that.

Wow, all this mess created becuase of Janine's poor driving. Boy, she did it this time. Now it costs her the chance to get Tom again. We know she will eventually get him back, but now it's going to be challenging.

Let's get back to the sexy action with Cassidy aka Cassexy! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Tom likey Cassie. Very few at school know about Janine and Tom. could you imagine 20 or 30 of them fighting to gets thier hands on him? 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 6:41 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday

Awesome chapter, in almost every way/shape/form. For starters? There's Janine's analysis of Jessica. Considering what the former did to Tom (and secretly and unrepentantly _still_ plans to do to him), for her to describe the latter as potentially dangerous is alarming, indeed!

Then, there's the mysterious and sinister phone call Lina made. If it wasn't to her lawyer, Serena (or some version of Paul Drake occasionally employed thereby), then who was ordered to dig up dirt on Cassidy? And what will Lina do with such info?


Furthermore; if Jessica does manage to grab Tom, ahead of her younger sister and mother, where will she flee with him to (ab)use him in private? Her college sorority? A mountain cabin? Maybe even out of the country?

Last, but not least: if the latter, will Jessica try to recruit Serena to her cause, in exchange for some not-so-flagrant dilecto by Tom?

To paraphrase the Platters: "Only youuuuuuuuu...can make our puzzlement light."

My one nitpick with this chapter, though (and this is where the "almost" comes in), is use of the phrase "very unique." As the latter word literally means "one of a kind," then use of the adjective would be meaningless. As there would be nothing similar (let alone, identical) to justify the use of descriptors like "very."

Author's Response:

Thank you for the input and the feedback. Nice use of the Platters. Spot on about the very unique - either it is or it isn't. Brings to mind the term, irregardless...:)

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 4:49 AM Title: Disciplined

hehe Cassidy vagina is hungry?
Something he feels the vagina Cassidy toma swallow whole and alive?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review bartek21, my apologies for the late response to your review. By now, you will have seen Cassidy has fed her hungry kitty, :)

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2016 2:40 PM Title: Disciplined

These are very hot stories. I like them very much. I like if a gentle woman shows her dominant side e.g. when Cassidy used Mr. Reliable and Tom could do nothing about that. In this chapter I liked the moment when he saw the hairbrush and maybe realized how weak and helpless he is :-)

Of course I would not like to influence your story but I would love to see more such moments where Cassidy unleashes/enjoys her power and slowly changes from a gentle woman to a gentle dominant woman who step by step turns her little man into her toy. Training him to live as her pet and slave :-)

I cannot wait how this will continue. Thanks for very nice story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I am absolutely horrible at responding but am trying to be more conscientious about it. Janine has certainly left a few psychological scars on tom that will probably stay with him for the rest of his life. I attempted to try to create the giantess you mention - gentle to dominant in my story Sophie. Agsain thanks for the review and hope i can contiinue to keep you interested in these characters.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2016 4:53 AM Title: Disciplined

More please!

Author's Response:

As long as people keep reading it, there will be more

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2016 9:02 PM Title: Disciplined

Wow! Part 3? I'm impressed. Usually you would jump to the next scene, but this time you extended this sexy scene. I approve highly of this. Also, I bet everyone enjoys it too.

Interesting to see Tom get scared of a hairbrush. Makes me wonder what other items will make Tom scared.

Cassidy seriously has the sexiness that I have been waiting all this time for. Lina is gentle sexy, Janine is cruel sexy, and Cassidy is naughty sexy. My favorite.

Perhaps we can get a part 4? Or is that too much? Haha.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2016 5:50 PM Title: Disciplined

Can't review. Got to drink some ice water.

*Sound of refrigerator door opening.*

OK! Who forgot to refill the f-----g pitcher?!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29 2016 3:01 PM Title: Tom and Cassidy, Aftermath

Tom is definitely your most compelling character. Even at three inches tall, he's as irrepressible as ever and holds such power over women 24 times taller than he is. This last bit with Cassidy has been a delightful transformation, from innocent and unsure what to do, to equal partner in the eroticism.

Not that I expect their affair to remain undisturbed. Tom has charmed a lot of women, and they could well be fighting over a three inch man soon. Janine, Lina, Jessica and Serena when they really understand what's going on.

 

So how long until somebody decides to figure out exactly how Tom shrunk, and try to acquire a shrinker for their own use?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2016 9:01 PM Title: Tom and Cassidy, Aftermath

@Gadgetmawombo: it's Cassidy Lane! Daniel Cassidy is the birth identity of the DC super anti-hero called Blue Devil.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2016 8:59 PM Title: Tom and Cassidy, Aftermath

Uhm! Excuse me a second.

*Sound of ice water being guzzled down.*

AAAAAAAAAAH! Never thought I'd be grateful for brain-freeze. Now, where was I? Oh, yes! Your latest installment. Very erotic, I have to admit. In fact, with Cassidy, Tom seems to have met his match with regard to dominant sexual teasing. But, I don't think she's going to have the (ahem!) upper hand, for long. Any more than she'll continue to vicariously have it from me. I, for one, am out from under her spell!

Spank---uh, thank you for hearing me out.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2016 7:34 PM Title: Tom and Cassidy, Aftermath

Duggernaut, this is what you do best. You take a girl and make her confident and have fun while also teasing a tiny man.

You did it with Selena, you did it with Sophie, and now you are doing it with Cassidy. All these girls were having fun with their tiny and the best part is that they would tease the tiny, give them a taste of what is to come. Even describing in words what they will do is awesome. You kinda did it with Lina and I hope she gets some kinky ideas along the way.

Hmm. Cassidy is playing the sexy school girl who needs to be punished. I would love to see some sexy nurse action, but I don't think that will happen since Tom has fully recovered already.

Well, Tom just taught me that there is a space of air above her vagina and below the cervix. I never knew that. That's probably why many tiny men fear of going inside pussies. They, like me, didn't know that they can breathe back there.

If our worlds does develop shrinking in the future, it gives me confidence that now I can venture inside a vagina knowing that there's a airfilled-heaven at the end of it.

For a second there, I was hoping that Tom can stay inside there for a bit longer. He can do some exploring and learn what's back there. Well, at least in the next vagina he visits, he can try to go back there again.

Cassidy is now my second favorite giantess behind Lina. Even though Cassidy had the most erotic scene, I'm still giving Lina the edge becuase of how sexy it was to hide him from Janine.

Cassidy and Tom make a great pair. If they had closer ages, they could probably be together like a couple. But, since Tom is still shrunken, the fantasy continues.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2016 6:09 PM Title: Tom and Cassidy, Aftermath

Danny Cassidy is so hot! She's definitely my new favorite, before it was Janines mom Lina, I think was her name? Anyway, Tom won the lottery with this one! She's a skilled nurse, sexy, passionate, kind, caring, and even bubbly, all at the same time! She's amazing! But knowing his luck, I doubt he's gonna have this kind of luck for long...

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2016 8:30 PM Title: Cassidy Unleashed

oh I always forgot to rating heres a 10



Author's Response:

Thank you x10

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2016 3:23 PM Title: Cassidy Unleashed

Wow, just hope Tom is okay in there, (then suddenly someone ring her doorbell and Cassidy didn't have time to check if Tom is okay in there, then she quickly clean herself and goes see how is the one that ring her doorbell, and Tom is just unconscious inside her vagina.) "I can dream with that", Well I hope you continue this great story and also I hope the little Tom still interact with older womens like Cassidy, Miss Addison and Lina.



Author's Response:

I highly doubt miss Addison will have another chance at him but Lina? I don't think we're quite finished with her yet :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 7:49 AM Title: Cassidy Unleashed

Nice haiku, bartek. :-)

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 4:49 AM Title: Cassidy Unleashed

I can only say great!
Please  more !!

Tom is alive and well in a safe place just asleep.

It is still deep inside Cassidy.

not quickly go out tom.

cassidy will be able to hear the tom and tom cassidy.




Author's Response:

Not quite done yet between Cassidy and Tom. Talk about cozy though...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2016 7:44 PM Title: Cassidy Unleashed

Dare I say it?

Yes, I do.

"Who else wants peasant under glass?"

Author's Response:

Glass jaw?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2016 7:36 PM Title: Cassidy Unleashed

Super hot chapter!

You know I always loved entrapment usually with a woman trapping a man inside her panties, but this time, Cassidy trapped Tom inside her literally by used a glass dildo like a gate to lock Tom inside.

Still, why would she need that dildo if Tom was that "amazing". I figured that he was enough. However, I love how you included this dildo here becuase I never thought of this idea before. I mean, she basically sealed Tom inside herself during that orgasm.

What happened to Tom? Most likely he crashed into that dildo during her orgasm and got knocked out. I bet he didn't expect that coming. Heck, he might even be dissapointed that she thought he wasn't enough.

Next, I love the chapter title. However, I was expecting some power hungry sex drive or something. Instead of a powerful orgasm, I thought she was going to fuck Tom's brains out. (Actually I think she did. I take that back now.)

Next chapter, I bet Cassidy will play "sexy nurse" while Tom plays the "horny patient" and then we can have round 3! Hehe!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Tom was deliberately teasing her until she couldn't stand it anymore and took it to the next level. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2016 7:18 PM Title: Tom's Story

Totally agree with shiron's comment.

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