Date: January 12 2016 9:44 AM Title: Tom's Story
@TomSpeedy: Because she's being gentle and botheredto check if he was alive and well. She's also not being mean in anyway.
Author's Response:
There was some quote somewhere about still waters.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2016 7:14 AM Title: Lost and Found
I really hope Nurse Cassidy Lane turns out to be another Lina. Or when Tom comes to he tells her to get a message to the patient's mother who in turn would tell his sister just so that these people who care about him most won't worry. Or maybe you've got some sexy plans involving Cassidy and Lina becoming partners in crime(by hiding Tom) and in the bedroom. A long shot that sounds sexy as hell, lol.
aaron
Author's Response:
We shall see the type of giantess Cass makes for better or worse. Unfortunately for Lina her hubby is going to be around for a bit but maybe Cassidy s apt might make for a nice place to spend some uninterrupted time with Tom. We'll see how it plays out.
Date: January 12 2016 12:36 AM Title: Lost and Found
She SEEMS nicer, but I know you like to play with expectations so I'm not holding my breath for a gentle giantess.
Author's Response:
Not me, I'm innocent I tell ya. There will more about Cass soon.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2016 10:42 PM Title: Lost and Found
Ok, so that really made the most sense that a nurse found him. Id have to imagine Cassidy is nice, she is a nurse after all and also, its really the most logical way Tom gets returned to Tess, and yes, it would be Tess, Im sure Tom knows he is putting his sister through all sorts of emotional hell, can't imagine him requesting Cassidy return him to Lina.
Or, maybe, if Cassidy is indeed nice, Tom falls for her and asks her to bring him to Tess just to put her mind art ease and tells her he wants to stay with Cassidy.
Of course, it won't matter in the end, Janine is sure to figure out what happened and get her little prize back ;)
Author's Response:
I thought it was the most plausible tact. Who knows yet what her motivations are. How will Tom respond? How bad is he hurt?
[Report This]Date: January 11 2016 9:57 PM Title: Lost and Found
I don't know why everyone thinks she is going to be nice. Her curiousness like a school girl is just out of utter fascination for Tom and her smile at the end of the chapter gave me a feeling that she is going to be evil.
Sure, as a nurse she will most likely take care of him, but this time it's an exception and we can't tell how she will treat him.
I thought she would return him to Janine soon, but it looks like she is going to keep him for a while. I bet Tom is tired of answering all these questions.
My next thought is...how is Tom going to get back with the main characters? It has to be the result of convincing Cassidy to return him. Ohhhh. I think this is a way for Cassidy to return him to Lina. Tom will tell Cassidy to return him to Lina and not to Janine. He will tell her about Janine's cruel tactics and so on. It makes sense now.
This crash is like an escape valve for Tom to get away for Janine. Well, it was also Janine's fault for her reckless driving. Or...... Maybe Tom started the whole crash by drving Janine crazy. Haha! Perhaps Tom is the genius!
Cassidy gives us a nice impression, but her intense interest in Tom makes me think otherwise. Imagine she is like a psychopath who will dissect Tom and analyze him. (I hope not.)
I hope she is very nice like how everyone else is predicting. I also hope she gives him a show.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
There are so many ways to play this. Could she be obsessed or simply curious? Is she lulling him into a false sense of security? Or is she genuinely concerned for his well being. All will become clear not next chapter but the one after that...maybe
[Report This]Date: January 11 2016 8:29 PM Title: Lost and Found
Cassidy sounds fabulous. Especially, as she sounds like she might be the gentlest giantess, since Tiny Dann's Lexie, to ever encounter a shrunken man!
But, of course, sounds (like appearances) can be deceiving.
Author's Response:
Don't you think our poor little protagonist deserves someone nice? The scars Janine makes transcend the flesh and perhaps he's wisened up some. But... he is Tom after all...
[Report This]Date: January 11 2016 5:53 PM Title: Lost and Found
She seems nice enough. Though this won't help Tess and the others and they will end up fearing the worse.
Author's Response:
Cass has dedicated her life to helping others she couldn't possibly be mean. Could she?
Date: January 08 2016 8:54 AM Title: 911
I think that no one knows where tom is
please more
Author's Response:
;)
Date: January 08 2016 7:49 AM Title: 911
If it turns out he _was_ found by a nurse, let us not forget who was the _very first_ to make that guess. back in the reviews of chapter 51? ;-)
Author's Response:
Duly noted.
Date: January 07 2016 10:31 PM Title: 911
I think Tom must be in Janine's vagina.
Author's Response:
Very Clever thought considering the narrative was directly everyone to think externally. I'm not saying that's where he is or isn't, but I do appreciate the the ingenuity of the thinking, ;)
[Report This]Date: January 07 2016 9:16 PM Title: 911
I don't think Jessica has Tom, becuase that seems way too predictable. The fact that she was with Janine when she woke up, and also goes to the restroom before meeting with Dad.
Then again, she just nonchalantly says Tom as if she doesn't have him. However, when Lina told her that Tom is a boy from school, I bet Jessica connected the dots and went to the restroom with an unknown little boy she found. Despite all these clues, Duggernaut likes surprises and I think he wants us to pick Jessica.
When Lina showed up, I was going to claim it was her, but then she started thinking about Tom's whereabouts and that eliminated her from these choices.
My guess would be some nurse who put the catheter inside Janine. She probably put it inside and felt something tug it, therefore finding Tom.
I don't think Tom is dying by the car remains. That would seem unlikely and the main characters would probably not find him.
I almost forgot, but where did Jessica come from? I thought Janine was an only child but you actually did a great job hiding her. I wouldn't mind Jessica taking Tom, but I still prefer Lina above all.
Now Tess is coming too? It's going to be a mass character party soon. Every single person will be at this hospital and it feels like something big is about to happen.
I might do a later review becuase there is much to speculate. Either way, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I know you are a big Lina fan, and yes everyone who knows seems to be gathering to try and find our wayward little protagonist before something awful happens. Funny, no one yet has suggested he might snuck out of Janine's bed on his own and is hiding in the room somewhere, could be, secretly spying on all the Lindholm women all at once. Tom is a sneaky little rascal after all, :)
Date: January 07 2016 8:49 PM Title: 911
Tom has been getting tossed around like a rag doll in this story hasn't he? I'm wondering if it's possible a nurse found him in Janine's panties or something and snatched him away. I guess the posibilities of where he could be at this point are limitless! But I hope this guy catches a break, really ANYONE that he ends up with who's a semi-decent person will be better than Janine. Despite being a beauty and all, she treated him horribly (probably the worse of anyone so far), of that theres no arguing...
Author's Response:
Tom has been the author of a fair portion of his misfortune, getting in over his head, literally and proverbially. We shall see what direction his fortunes take very shortly. Janine is a force of nature, much like a cyclone, awe inspiring to look at, but suck the wind right out of your lungs if you get too close!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2016 8:16 PM Title: 911
Hmm, was hoping there was no accident even know I knew there would be. Its always sad when Janine loses control of Tom :)
I was going to suspect a nurse may have Tom, and perhaps one does but not sure if you can keep introducing new people who want nothing more to kidnap Tom for themselves.
Likewise, dont think Jessica has him or if she does, I dont see you having her whisking him away to her dorm, to close to Michaels story being passed around as a plaything. Of course, would not complain, can never have too much of that!
So perhaps Tom is still in the car? Dangerous predicament if true.
Eagerly await the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol, you've made no secret you are in Janine's corner as she methodically goes after and gets what she wants. There are parallels between the two stories for sure, however the sibling relationship is WAY different. Tom has an ally, Michael, well, hmm, hopefully he has a happy place...
[Report This]Date: January 07 2016 7:34 PM Title: 911
Whoa! I'm 301st? Yay me!!
Seriously, though : This was a suitably dramatic cliff-hanger, in so many ways. Especially the plot twist of introducing a college-age older sister for Janine! This raises the possibility of Jessica finding Tom before anyone else. And, perhaps, keeping that discovery to herself until she gets back to her college with him!
Of course, I realize that high school-age shrunken man winding up with a nymphomaniacal sorority is kind of an over-used cliche' on this website. But, given your positive track record, so far, I've no doubt you'll be able to put a unique spin on such a gimmick.
I eagerly await the next chapter, as I get my booster shot of anti-Tomspeedyitis vaccine. ;-D
Author's Response:
Sooo many different options avaiable to try and redirect this story. I do think the sorority might be a little too cliche, but another beautiful woman can help get people looking in other places, maybe, or maybe not.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2016 9:26 PM Title: Tess
Haha, thats harsh after the cliff hanger you left us with :)
I understand why though and am most curious about Harrison, something doesn't sit right with him.
Seems Miss Addison will throw a wrench in Janines well laid plans. Crossing Janine does not seem like a good career move.
Speaking of Janine, hope she is as adept at driving that sports car as she is cunning.
Author's Response:
That's why I apologized in the preface. Bad career move? Bad all the way around to cross that girl. There will be more from Harrison but not for a few chapters. Next chapter will be a Janine chapter.
Date: January 05 2016 11:42 AM Title: Tess
Postscript: I'm not disappointed with the non-gts interlude. It merely (but delightfully) heightens the suspense!
Welcome home, btw. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reception and the feedback.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2016 11:40 AM Title: Tess
It would seem Miss Addison is about to employ that old battlefield adage: "The enemy of my enemy is my friend."
[Contrary to popular belief, that phrase was NOT coined by the writers of "Aliens vs. Predator!"]
Author's Response:
Kautilya
[Report This]Date: January 04 2016 11:55 PM Title: Tess
First of all, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. It's feels good to say that again. Long time since you last posted.
Second, that authors note made me laugh. Not becuase I expected something like this to happen this chapter but becuase even you yourself knew that people might be dissapointed with this chapter.
Ok, this chapter wasn't that bad becuase the entry of Miss Addison definately makes it a worthwhile cliffhanger. Other than that, when I saw the paragraph title of Tess, I admit I was hoping for some hospital action instead. (Unless they didn't crash. Ugh! Ur cliffhangers are just too good!)
Man, Miss Addison feels so 2015, like that was a while ago since we saw her. I bet she is just going to flat out tell Tess that Janine has Tom. I don't think Miss Addison is like the other women who are curious about how Tom shrank and all that. I think Miss Addison learned her lesson of stealing Tom and may even apololigize for it.
I think this whole "search for the cure/grandpa" thing is getting pointless, becuase I don't see where it can go after this. It might be better to just accept the fact that Tom is shrunk and what's done is done. That way, the giantess stuff can keep on rolling.
While part of me wants to know why Miss Addison is visiting Tess, I still prefer reading about Janine driving over 100 mph in her sports car with Tom igniting her from the inside of her underwear.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom yeah I figured after the break of a couple weeks people would want to know about Janine but I needed to establish interaction between miss Addison and Tess for the chapter that will follow this one. Probably in another day or two.l then we see what if anything happened to Janine. Harrison Kinsley's name appears in another story of mine, but we'll get back to that later. Cheers
[Report This]Date: December 23 2015 3:13 PM Title: That Awkward Father Daughter Conversation
Hmmm, if they crash this might be the best chance Tom has to get away. This opens up a world of possibilities, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It certainly does allow for a multitude of possibilites, who knows?
[Report This]Date: December 22 2015 7:36 AM Title: That Awkward Father Daughter Conversation
Will Janine have an accident? Will Tom be miraculously thrown clear? Or will they both wind up in the hospital? With Tom being confiscated by some sex-starved nurse? Or, even worse (for certain other readers): will he be found among Janine's personal effects by the Lindholm's housekeeper?
All these questions (among others) to be answered, by the author, after the start of the New Year. Until then?
Merry Xmas to all, and to all a good day. :-)
Author's Response:
Hey Carycomic, there exists a plethora of possible directions to take this story, and you are absolutely right, there does seem to be a dividing liune for those who have invested in this tale, should be interesting. Happy holidays!