[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 8:26 PM Title: Lazarus
Well I can safely say that Janine is the most dangerous girl that Tom has encountered so far. She's a complete sociopath, devoid of any empathy or care for anyone else but herself and her own fun...Dangerous to the nth degree, Tom would be better off with anyone else at this point! I'm still wondering how this guy is sane after all he's been through!
Author's Response:
Tom is pretty resilient, but this latest round has certainly make him take the situation more seriously.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 7:31 PM Title: Lazarus
As my parents (the Foxwoods gambling addicts) might say: "Long shots almost never pay off. And this was definitely WAY outside the 'almost' category."
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 7:09 PM Title: Lazarus
My goodness, Tom is really on thin ice now. He better focus on pleasing Janine to the best of his ability for the immediate future. The dark turn this story has taken is great, very well written. You can feel Tom's fear right now.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2015 5:15 PM Title: Janine
I really really like where this is going. Tom is a freaking badass.
This twitch that we all witness is a sign that he was faking the whole damn time. I bet after all that time with giantesses has given him time to learn some new skills.
Like two chapters ago, Tom was already making a plan to escape. We never knew how, but this time, he is using Janine to get out. It looks like he is going to make Janine choke right there on the stairs and only her mother will see this becuase Francis is in the car.
Janine will probably say that she is choking on something and won't give Lina a hint that it's Tom. Or Janine immediately coughs up Tom, and Lina sees a slobbered Tom get spit out. Lina takes Tom, Janine goes with Francis and Janine's whole plan backfires with Francine taking Janine out of the house instead of Lina. Freaking perfect idea Tom!
I doubt Janine will let Tom go all the way down to her stomach. She wants Tom more than anyone else. She sacrificed so much to get him. Now is she going to let him die, heck no. She would rather embarras herself by vomiting in front of her mother than let Tom die inside her.
I can picture it. Tom twitches, she swallows, Janine's eyes light up like deer in headlights. Lina is thinking "wtf up with her now." Then Tom pops out of Janine's mouth. Lina is shocked. Then awkward silence. Janine decides if she should put Tom back in her panties. Lina then demands for Tom and threatens for almost killing him.
Then we have 3 endings, I believe. Then either Janine runs away to the car with Tom, and Lina chases her. Or Lina gets the best of Janine and convinces Janine to hand Tom over. Or, some deal happens where they schedule times to have their own fun with Tom.
It's a cliffhanger, but we know something big is going to happen next chapter. Let's see what happens. I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: December 12 2015 4:51 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Duggernaut,
I think I was too early becuase I saw you updated "Michaels story" and the "Nefarious Nine". I reviewed those probably like minutes after you posted them. Then I went offline becuase "Tom's Story" wasn't posted yet, so I didn't check again last night.
Now I see that you did post Tom's Story yesterday and I was too quick to recheck the most recent page. Well, now I know.
@Carycomic,
I enjoy reviewing first becuase that way others can reply to my review after they read the story since I tend to break down the chapter. Part of me just doesn't want to be late to the party.
Author's Response:
And I added another chapter (5) to the nefarious nine after you reviewed chapter 4 :)
[Report This]Date: December 11 2015 10:21 PM Title: Janine
Yes! Swallowed! Now my only question is what does Janine do now? Panic and rush past her mother to the bathroom and vomit him up? Shrug her shoulders and get into daddys car? Starts feeling sick and vomits him up once they reach their destination? Guess he wasn't faking!
[Report This]Date: December 11 2015 8:31 PM Title: Janine
Oh, shitsky! Now, he really _will be_ kaput! :-(
But, at least I got to be first reviewer, for once. :-)
Author's Response:
I updated twice yesterday and I think I might have deked TomSpeedy out letting you get the first shot at the review, :0
[Report This]Date: December 09 2015 10:45 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday
This chapter was weird, like the writing style changed a bit and I thought someone else wrote it. Either way, I liked it.
I like how you took it slow this chapter and made Tom just think for a second. Usually I'm all in favor of nonstop action, but his thoughts about his position and escape bring up many more possibilities for the future which I always enjoy.
When he describes being trapped in Jane's panty drawer, I thought it was cool that he remembered that it was her that made him began this journey.
I also liked his analysis of each giantess. Janine and Sam want to cruelly play with him, Lina, gently play, but Tess just wanted to keep him safe. I admire that way of Tom thinking so much that it feels almost unlike me. I like how he said that he couldn't trust Lina because she had her own agenda. It made me wonder if Lina is going to keep Tom with her at all costs and might even be 'controlling' like her daughter so she can keep Tom. Everyone getting naughty and dark. I like it.
I think Janine is jealous of Tess's beauty. Think about it. Tom is fancied by girls and women, and Tess has had her own marvelous looks. It must be the genes and Janine wants Tom not just for herself, but probably to make Tess feel bad too.
Always lacy panties, haha.
I don't think calling out for Francis would help. Janine would be like "this kid fucked your wife, so I'm punishing him". Then Francis might even agree or suggest some cruel torture methods. Tom should only call out for Lina or Tess.
Sure we know Janine is a genius. Lina is smart, as well as Tess. Tess is not an idiot and so is Tom. That's right, they are all freaking smart and outplaying each other. My point is that Tom is probably faking all this to make Janine concerned for him. He is probably a gymnast or contortionist of some sort. Nonetheless, I think this is a all an act created from Tom's brilliancy. This is the plan to escape, now it's time to execute it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2015 9:43 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday
Oh well, if anything is broken, just duct tape it and and shove him down her panties so she can get on with her plan ;)
I like how such a simple act of pressing her hand down him could have such a devastating effect when all she was trying to do was imobilize him. Wonder if that will make her feel bad or awaken even something darker in her. My money is on the later.
Also wonder if you plan on anything sinister between Sam and Tom, little forshadowing there maybe? Would be an interesting twist, everyone thinking Janine is the threat but turns out Sam is the wolf in sheeps clothing.
Great work!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2015 8:20 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday
Uh-oh! Tom ist kaput? :-(
*Insert "Taps" recording, here.*
[Report This]Date: December 09 2015 7:15 PM Title: Aftermath Saturday
So did she kill him? I don't think so or this story would end here, but if she hurt him badly maybe she'll treat him a little better from now on? Ah who am I kidding, I doubt Janine is gonna have any character development, she's too spoiled and seems to care so little about anyone else. More likely, she'll just toss him into a trash can and get on with her day. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, it looks like this story just got a little more interesting! I was getting tired of the "pass the dildo boy to the next girl" scenario you had going on, so I'm glad for a bit of a mixup!
[Report This]Date: December 03 2015 8:06 PM Title: Playtime
"Guess we'll just have to start over", haha, love her! Definitely my favorite current Giantess. When I heard the knock at her door I was like nooooooooo, go away Lina! I had no idea they were still there, Janine just couldn't wait for them to leave, such a naughty girl *weg*
Date: December 02 2015 9:19 PM Title: Playtime
Damn! This is getting better and better! :)))))
Thank you so much for the fast updates! Janine is really going for being the most cruel and sexy character in any gts story ever here.
Also as TomSpeedy said I really hope Tom is going to make her scream (and of coure I hope even more that she is going to make Tom scream ;)))))
[Report This]Date: December 02 2015 7:44 PM Title: Playtime
WOW! And I thought Tiffany Billingsley-Croft was the most sadistic nympho-giantess I had ever read about, here.*
*Read FORMULA VERSION DOT ONE by B.C. Weir. A classic (if sadly incomplete) piece of gts-lore.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2015 6:24 PM Title: Playtime
Sexy chapter!
Once again, another great example of cruel and sexy.
We got to see some of these tools in action. The dildo, floss, and we got hints of the straw.
Turns out that the Gatorade was just for Janine's thirst after all. I thought she was going to use it for some torture, but not this time.
I like the use of furniture. Like the bed and the chair along with all these tools that Janine used. It's these little things that make these scenes memorable.
Close call with Lina. Does she know? If she does, she hasn't revealed her reaction.
So it's hide and seek with Lina. I remember when Lina had to hide Tom from Janine. Now it's the other way around. I wonder if Lina starts snooping around and traps Janine soon.
Start all over?!! Sweet! Another sex chapter! Hopefully Janine uses more tools too.
Now that her parents are gone, she might go the extreme now, mowing loudly and such. Let's see if Tom can make her scream.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2015 7:02 AM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night
HOLY SHIT!! I can't believe this is happening. I'm at least as horny as Janine right now. DAMN. If you add breath play as TomSpeedy implied i'll fucking explode lmao. I'm way too much into mean torture I guess ;)))
But that's why we love Janine, right?
Also its exactly what Tom deserves after all those chapters ~
Author's Response:
That just happened! Things just got real for silver tongued Tom, :O
[Report This]Date: November 30 2015 9:55 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night
I love Janine! This is going to be a fun Friday night... for one of them.
Author's Response:
Yep, and she's had time to prepare...
[Report This]Date: November 30 2015 8:26 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night
"....keeping his eyes locked on the it was a long shot...?"
Super-LOL!
Okay, being serious now; that was a relatively fast update. And one that is much appreciated. I appreciate even more that, horny though she is and vindictive she might be, she's still being somewhat careful with him. Not wanting to fatally injure her living "birthday gift." Just scare him enough to accept that he's never going to see Sam or Tessa, again.
But, then, the question becomes: is that incontrovertible truth...or glorified self-delusion?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the edit, found it fixed it. We shall see what kind of restraint she is capable of in the chapters upcoming...
[Report This]Date: November 30 2015 6:08 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted - Friday Night
Highlight of this chapter: the new toys.
We know that when Tom wakes up, he is going to be tied to one of these things. We just don't know which one.
So first, there is a rubber dildo. She is probably going to put him on the tip by tying him to it and fucking him with it.
Second, the wax candle. This is just pure torture. Not sure how sexy this can be. Especially when that candle is lit, the flame is as big as his head.
Next, the dental floss. Basically to tie Tom up to stuff, or to Janine. Bondage for shrunken men.
Then there is the scotch tape. Similar to the floss, this might serve to tie Tom up and will hurt a lot when that tape is removed. Unlike the floss, the tape can trap Tom against a flat surface like a wall, or a floor, or Lina's favorite chair in the house. :)
The Popsicle sticks seem kinda self explanatory. She will use him like a Popsicle and tie him to an end of the stick and stick him inside her somewhere.
The bendy straw I think is the most interesting of the items. It can be some part of breath play. Does Tom's penis fit inside the straw? Does the straw fit in Tom's mouth. Is Janine going to make Tom suck stuff with the straw, make him breathe thru it? I'm really curious about this item.
In addition, we have the cling wrap. I'm guessing Janine will wrap up Tom just like with the floss and tape.
Next, the superglue sounds scary. I mean, that sounds like the ultimate sticky substance to torture Tom with. Where she will glue him? To what? and for how long?
Then there is the safety pin. Forget that it's a pin, it's a freaking needle. It might even serve Tom as a sword. This is one item not to mess with.
The lighter is to scare Tom. I doubt she will burn him. Also, it's for the candle as well. Won't be fun for Tom.
Finally, the blue Gatorade. Is this supposed to be a pool? Or a hot tube with the candle below it? It's Janine so it probably won't be that nice. More like a fish tank to keep her pet. Still not exactly sure what's it's purpose, but I guess we will soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Sooo many things she can do. I've got to be careful to keep it fresh for this story, but then it's Janine and she makes it pretty easy to be inventive for her
[Report This]Date: November 29 2015 9:04 PM Title: Lina
I have found this story to be quite fascinating, and looking forward to seeing how much longer Tom will have to survive before he can resume his normal size (if ever). And how many additional more female bodies he will have to endure, and to what degree.
Thanks, and keep it rolling!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review this story. Tom is atypical of my usual protagonists and for whatever reason this story is the one that's gotten the most interest. There are undoubted parallels between this story and another I'm working on at the moment called Michael's Story. Given recent developments in this tale things ahead for Tom go from him having fun with his tiny status to him just trying to survive.