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Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 01 2015 3:56 AM Title: Karolina

Well it's sure nice to see Tom get a brief reprive from his earlier days of 'torment' 
Though I reckon he seems very much like a self-destructive protagonist, exposing himself like that but more importantly, refusing or denying a phone-call to his sister to come rescue him Xd

Eventually he or Lina is gonna go one action to far leading to circumstances where that Phone-call home may no longer be an option for him xD



Author's Response:

Hindsight is 20/20 and sometimes the wanting is better than the having...sometimes

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 8:41 PM Title: Karolina

i'm afraid Maximus and I will have to agree to permanently disagree. All of us readers, here, have an inner masochist we embrace to varying degrees. Otherwise, we wouldn't read these stories in the first place! But, there is _undeniably_ such a thing as too much of a good thing. And, that includes masochism!

Hence, to paraphrase Sean Connery at the end of HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER: "Sometimes, a little gentle giantess-interaction, every now and then, is a healthy thing."

And, to quote his favorite aphorism in THE UNTOUCHABLES: "Here endeth the lesson."

Author's Response:

"He pulls out a knife you pull put a gun. He put one of yours in the hospital you put one of his in the morgue. It's the Chicago way of doing business."

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 8:37 PM Title: Karolina

Yessssssssss!!!!!!

Finally!!!!

I love it! Nice and slow and the best part was the mention of her husband! We all know what's coming soon.

I rarely say this, but I don't want any super sexy stuff in the next chapter with Karoline (panties) (nipple play) (mouth play). I prefer more talk with Karolina. Let's develop this relationship a bit more. We could have cleavage, a kiss, and perhaps some sexy talk, and then in the later chapters she can escalate it a bit.

I agree that Tom should be passed back to Janine, but not yet! Maybe after 8 chapters of Karolina! Man, her words are just seductive even though the dialogue is not sexual at all.

So you went with the Karolina doing her own thing and Tom getting her attention. I like it, especial Lina's response.

Oh yeah, good move by nicknaming her to Lina. It rolls off my tongue better. Lina is easier to type than Karolina anyway. (I bet that's why u changed it.) Ha!

Peeping Tom! Beautiful! I didn't even expect that! Good one.

We start off sexy and gentle and finish off sexy and sort of gentle. (Of course we expect Karolina to get naughty soon, as she realizes what is in her possession).

I feel happy...............yep. I don't know why. The sexy stuff hasnt arrived but I just feel good about this chapter. That's the power of Karolina.

I really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Told you :P I'm not done yet 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 7:43 PM Title: Karolina

Knew that was going to happen, was hoping it wouldn't and that Janine would get him back first but figured you'd have interaction between Lina and him. Not my cup of tea, I hate gentle but still very well written.

 

I'll just have to hope Janine is clever enough to get him back! Curious to see where you go with this, still have something cooking with Sam too I think.



Author's Response:

Janine is very clever and now motivated. We'll see if Sam gets a shot to play with tiny Tom.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 6:35 PM Title: Karolina

Yay for Tom!



Author's Response:

For now...the eye of the storm

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 5:11 PM Title: Karolina

That was very well written and, in my opinion, exactly what Tom needed. Lina seems very understanding and wasn't mad he saw her change but seemed to take his compliments in stride. I really hope that we see more of her in future chapters. Even though I think she's neglected by her husband I don't think she'll abuse Tom sexually for her own gain, at least not with him all bruised up. How he fell asleep was very sweet and actually didn't seem sexual at all even though he is currently sleeping on her giant tits. The 'worst' thing I see her doing is pleasuring herself while he's asleep. At any rate I'm really interested to see what Lina has in store for Tom.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback on the writing Tom is the author of his own circumstances so we'll see how things develop between Lina and Tom as he embraces his new situation.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 10:50 PM Title: Tess

Perhaps, if Tess were to pretend she was coming out of the closet (with regard to Janine's implied bisexuality), it might lull the latter into a false sense of security. Long enough for Sam and Tess to drag her into a real closet...

...and strip search her!*




*This message brought to you by Off The Wall Suggestions, Inc. Providing unwanted advice since August of 2015.

Author's Response:

Always good to have options and sometimes off the wall is right in the mark ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 9:42 PM Title: Tess

Hold on a second! There is no way that Sam just thought of that! That lightbulb stuff was some bs, I mean, that idea seemed to be like 1 in a million and she guessed it? Seems a bit unrealistic, but I will let it slide.

Trying to catch Janine? Hmm. That requires strategic planning, or a bit of luck.

These girls think that Tom still lives in underpants? (I think panties is a sexier word). Well, I think Tom should be placed in another set next chapter! :)

Sam reminds me of Sophie, especially when she described the feeling of a tiny in her bra and panties. She sure enjoys the thought. We know Tess does also, when she was on that airplane ride.

Even though I like this Tess investigation, I've been aching for Tom's next scene, especially with Karolina. There are so many ways to execute this chapter.

She can find him, ask what is he doing and stuff, then wonder if he was spying on her, and that could easily lead to a "you enjoyed the show" kinda thing and things will escalate fast.

She can walk around the room as Tom tries to avoid her, but Marolina keeps reaching for stuff that Tom is on and one by one, Tom dodges her, but eventually is caught.

She can walk toward the bed, and look at the mirror while she is posing. Tom gets distracted and walks toward the edge of the bed. Karolina suddenly sits down completely naked on the bed. She decides to put some panties on and Tom gets stuck in them.

She could also sit on the bed on Tom and suddenly get up wondering what she sat on. Then after seeing Tom, she wonders if he is ok and wants to take care of him.

She can also spot him and wonder what it feels like to have a tiny man under her control. She first asks if he wants it, and soon decides it's for the best that she will protect him if he agrees to please her.

She can find him, ask him about her daughters actions and gets aroused by each idea that Tom describes that he went through. Then Karolina decides to do some of this stuff in her own special way.

She can spot him and ask what happened. After learning about Janine's cruelty, she decides to hide Tom in some special spots that Janine will never even think of reaching into to get Tom.

Just some ideas in case you were still wondering on what to do. I'm pretty sure you have already decided, but just in case. (It's a really fun chapter to think about. Many things can happen!)

I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Karolina is the next chapter :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 8:48 PM Title: Janine

I agree with Carycomic, Janine is a freaking genius!

For most, if not almost all giantess stories, when a giantess looks for a tiny man, I always had an idea that if a giantess checks a spot in a room, the tiny could just run over to the place that has already been checked. That way, the giantess won't likely check back there again.

The way she taped up the door was a smart idea. This is her house, so she knows how to use it to her advantage. If Tom was in there, and knowing Janine, she probably would've locked him in there.

But then Tom has to think. Is it better to starve to death, or stay with Janine? Hmm, I think this is a tough choice, becuase that way Tom doesn't have to suffer much with Janine, and can spend a week in the office by himself which might sound better to him. Then again, with Janine, you have another chance of escaping. (Personally, I would chose Janine because her punishments are super sexy and redefines the meaning of sexy and cruel.) Tom probably would've came out and went with Janine rather than starve to death.

I hope Janine doesn't find Tom right away. Tom needs a breather. Sure, she can find him later, but after some time. In the meantime, I bet Janine will come up with some clever twists to put on Tom.

What interested me the most was when Janine was pondering what might happen if her mother found Tom. Of course that got my attention. Janine said 2 things. First is that Tom would recall his last and Karolina might say that he might have started it. I hope that is the case, becuase then she will think that he might enjoy some things that Karolina might do. :) Also, Janine thought that Karolina would give Tom back to his family, which I hope never happens. However, Janine never thought of her mother keeping Tom to herself and hiding him from Janine. Janine has never considered the possibility of her mom having some fun with young guy. (I guess that's what family members think. They never expected a member to do something sexy.)

Totally forgot their was a housekeeper. I hope Tom doesn't get in her hands right away. Would love to see Karolina have a turn, or at least as many turns that Janine have. I mean, Janine did like 8 things to Tom. She kissed him, locked him up, taped him to a brush, inserted him inside her, put him in her panties, kept him in there for an entire school day, orgasmed on him, put a chain, collar on him, and probably a lot more stuff that I forgot. I can't wait to see what kinky ideas that Karolina has!

I really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It's coming Tom ;)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 6:46 PM Title: Janine

Oh fuck. I am dying to know what happens next!



Author's Response:

Shit is about to get real

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 6:10 PM Title: Janine

This girl has the smarts of Sherlock Holmes. Or, should I say "Prof. Moriarty?"

Author's Response:

Elementary my dear Watson

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 1:44 PM Title: Tom's Escape

Something tells me Karolina will having a nice catch of her own, pretty soon.

Author's Response:

Sweet Caroline doot doot do, good times never seemed so good - to quote Mr. Diamond

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 1:43 PM Title: Freak on a Leash

@Duggernaut: GOOD ONE! :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 12:23 PM Title: Tom's Escape

Ooh. Someone's mad.



Author's Response:

As a wet hen, who also happen to be as big as an apartment building

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 9:12 PM Title: Tom's Story

That review took so long that it timed out, and I had to login again and copy and paste it back.

Long reviews are a good sign. It means that it was a great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks tom, glad I still have your attention and am still following the path you set down

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 8:58 PM Title: Tom's Escape

Oh Boy! It's getting interesting!

Finally Tom escapes Janine's clutches and he winds up in what I think is arguably the best place in the house. Her mother's room is a safe zone! A perfect spot to rest and not fear Janine getting near him once in a while.

It felt like Janine knew that Tom was in Karolina's room. The way she called Tom out, it made me wonder if she checked all the rooms, I mean, this is a big house right? There's probably a bunch of rooms in that hallway.

One thing that I think is key, is that Karolina caught Janine in her room. Imagine if she sees Janine back there again.....she won't! If Janine left before her mother came, then there is a chance that Janine may sneak in the room. Now if she sneaks inside, her mother will be even more pissed off. Perfect!

Now begs the question whether Tom decides to escape, or think that Karolina is the better option.

I pick Karolina. Why? Well, who else does run for help? Tess? Yeah right. Janine will make sure of it. However, Janine can't make sure that Karolina can't help Tom. Otherwise, Janine will be caught guilty if her mom questions her behaviour. Janine won't risk it and will leave her mother alone. Tom can't escape because of all the dangers outside their house including bugs. His best chance is with Karolina, and I think he doesn't mind that at all.

In addition, Tom now finds Karolina attractive. He doesn't find Janine attractive anymore. He has fear when he looks at her. Now the feels that he used to have for Janine, are now placed on Karolina. Also, I bet Karolina looks like another Janine with better curves in all the sexy places.

When a girl decides that she wants to tie you up and stick you inside her ass, well no matter how sexy that sounds, it's probably what hell is with a giantess.

Good move by Tom to escape. I bet Karolina can't be any worse than Janine. It even shows in their behaviour. Janine can get guy she wants, but she can only have one tiny man, and she wants to get all the pleasure she can, because she is use to being able to get away with things. Even when she talks to Tess, she has leverage so she can do anything she wants. However, Karolina is elegant. The way she disrobed, the master bedroom, the way she told her daughter to follow the rules and not force her out. Karolina makes things equal and is the only person who can stop Janine from getting everything she wants. Since Karolina can stop Janine, Janine on the other and cannot stop her mother. Meaning that if Karolina gets Tom and the two have an arguement over who gets him, my money is on Karolina.

Karolina is going for a bath. Tom is hiding and peeking. You something good is about to happen. Will she find him, will Tom get an unaware moment? How will this next scene develop?

Will Karolina slowly walk out of the bathroom toward her bed and Tom stares so much that he trips and squeaks? Or will Tom get stuck somewhere and Karolina sees him and she gets a clever idea? Man I can't wait!

I wonder if she's thinking about her husband and wondering how long it's been since she had someone ....to......give .....her pleasure. I can picture Karolina being this gentle and sexy giantess. She should be in control, after all, she is the lady of the house. She runs this place. A person serving her would relieve her of some stress. She might even be horny, and I think Tom would be glad to serve her.......for some time. :)

A fantastic transition chapter, from one giantess to the next, in a very entertaining segment where Karolina basically is telling Janine, "this is my territory, everything on it is mine" then she pauses "including your cute friend over there".

We can say that Janine doesn't think that her mother knows about Tom, but when she does, Janine is done for. Tom will be "rescued" and Jane might be punished. I say "might be" because Karolina might keep Tom as a secret if she finds him. Or she could just blurt it out to Janine that she has Tom. Janine can't get Tom from her mother the way that Tess couldn't get Tom from Janine. A great cycle. Tom gets handed from powerful woman to even more powerful.

I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Wow big review, but you got a pretty good grasp to what's coming down. Next step, phase two

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 7:03 PM Title: Tom's Story

Tom bought himself time , at least until Karolina finds him or she leaves the room. 



Author's Response:

For now...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 4:51 PM Title: Tom's Escape

I think you meant to say that Karolina "grabbed a couple" (presumably soap chips). Other than that, this chapter was flawless. The escape sequence being especially white-knucklish!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the heads up, fixed, nice catch!

Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 3:13 PM Title: Freak on a Leash

Great!

Continue good work

I'm anxious

what Tess going to do?



Author's Response:

Thanks, soon there will a chapter for Tess

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 2:40 PM Title: Freak on a Leash

Does this mean Tom and Janine are now engaged? Because, she certainly wasn't giving him the "brush-off!"

Author's Response:

She was just helping hi 'brush-up' on his cunning linguistic skills, ;)

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