Date: April 28 2016 9:57 AM Title: For A Change
I love this story. There brush with death only to kill others for fun is a great psychological mind **** for Garrett. I only wish I could find a woman like Nikki to marry and do nasty things with. Congratulations on this great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)
Yeah, I wanted to capture just how twisted this couple is, that even though they stared death in the face and got away, they have no qualms with taking away the lives of others just for their enjoyment.
Date: April 28 2016 6:17 AM Title: For A Change
I enjoyed the story. It's not very often you have the man doing the crushing and woman watching so it was a nice change o pace. It is well written and an interesting take on it all. Having the the couple barefoot and stomping on some tiny, helpless people together sounds like a pretty good idea for a story of you ask me. I would love to see more of this cruel couple.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Yeah, I figure that with how I set things up, I pretty much have to write three follow-ups: One with Nikki crushing guys, one with Luke crushing women, and one with the both of them crushing a bunch of people together. That said, I'm not sure if/when I'll do it, since I have other ideas I'm trying to hash out in a literary form right now.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2016 3:08 PM Title: For A Change
Excellent story :) There aren't many violent stories being made these days, and it's always nice to see one come up. ( I must admit that I imagined the couple as both being girls, but hey, to each their own)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if you made your own internal change.
Yeah, I think the demographics have moved past violent stories like the ones I like reading and writing. Sometimes, I feel like I got into the game too late, and I started writing for a niche whose glory days are long gone.
I'll still keep writing them, because it's what really excites me when it comes to macro/micro.