Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 3:17 PM Title: The Apple Doesn't Fall Far From the Tree

Yeeahhhhh! Now this is what I was waiting for! We get to see Jessica's show up and have her way with Drake. And wow, she is incredible.

As soon as she said "not so fast boy", I started smiling. I knew that at that moment, things were going to escalate and he fun was about to begin. I love her aggressive nature and how she is super confident in herself. She knows she is sexy and knows that Drake can't resist it.

Please Patricia! Don't return Drake to Jessica. Despite how sexy Jessica is, I think Patricia just passed her and she didn't even do anything yet! I hope Patrica keeps him in the front of her panties all day and as long as how Kaylee had Ricky in her panties.

I also love how she is horny, but also smart enough to demand "pin point accuracy" and 3 orgasms. She knows what she wants and is smart enough to use Drake in ways that Drake beer thought was possible.

I think the best part is that Jessica has absolutely no idea that her mom has Drake. Imagine Jessica trying to look for Drake and Patrica just smiles to herself, patting her crotch knowing that she has Drake the whole time. That would be awesome.

Drake's story just got so much better! I think Patricia might be even better than Christine or even Rachel. You convinced me lately that Christine with Ricky was a good combo, now I hope you convince me the same way about Patricia and Drake.

I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 2:37 PM Title: Wake up bro!

Amazing Story your story was what got me into this website in the firstplace and i have never looked back Keep up the amazing work

 

5 stories one day!!!!!! so hyped

Author's Response:

Woahh really??!! Like, my story got you hooked on this site? That's amazing! I'm so happy that I helped you explore yourself more and enjoy your fetish with others like you. Keep exploring! There are tons of stories that are way better than mine and start with Duggernaut and Jack Smith. Those two are some of the best writers on this site. 

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 12:26 AM Title: Wake up bro!

I'm enjoying the story. I do however thi k the five chapters in a single day is a bit dumb if I'm being honest. Just do one mega chapter if they're all going to be in one day, it's pointless to do them separate

Author's Response:

Thank you for your input! I am glad you are enjoying this story.

I do understand your suggestion completely, but the reason I am doing 5 chapters in one day is because I have been alternating chapter between Ricky and Drake and while doing one massive ultimate chapter would be perfectly okay, it could get a bit confusing not just for the reader, but also for me writing it if jumble all of them together in one big chapter.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 3:46 PM Title: Dammdable Glue, and the Inconvenience of Inconveniencies

Never enough butt!

 

If you really want to torture ricky, this time have kaylee catch him and think I trusted you your just a pervert and have her put him in a situation with rachel.

 

Also you should check out Inconvenient Coincidence.  Love the whole basis just wish it wasn't so foot centric.  Maybe it will give you ideas for future chapters or stories.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 9:37 PM Title: Dammdable Glue, and the Inconvenience of Inconveniencies

Hmm. 11 days without a chapter. I don't blame you for all your moving in stuff. I'm in the middle of that and I got to pack the rest of my stuff to take with me this week. Also, campus wifi sucks so I was thinking that maybe you had the same problem.

I have been checking everyday for a new update and I'm glad I didn't give up. A new chapter for a new day.

I cometely forgot that Ricky was with Kaylee. It was only until the middle of the chapter when you mentioned Ricky noticing her being aroused that I had my ligtbulb moment. (Maybe you could recap a bit since you had a big break.)

I remember when you uploaded once a day. Good times. :) of course, as you said, when life happens, it has priority over this story.

Ass men? Lol! I guess I'm a pussy man then. I'm still waiting for a Milf to get either Ricky or Drake and shove them inside it for pleasure. I can see it happening to Jessica's mom soon. (Crossing fingers.)

5 chapters in a single day?!! Whoa, don't go overboard. How about you do like 2 chapters on Friday and 3 on Saturday. Or 1 on Friday, 2 on Saturday and 2 on Sunday. 5 chapters in one day can take a toll on you.

For Ricky, how about he escapes, and Kaitlyn finds him again and this time, tapes and gags Ricky to Christine's panties! Then they can have a little reunion. Now that would be awesome. Chrsitine can discover him there and then decide to keep him there. She will finally have her fun with him. Last time, Ricky freaking escape and I have been waiting for Ricky to be with her. Man, that's what I'm anxious for.

Perhaps, Jessica is the kinky one and after her shower, she lets her mom have some fun and they have a threesome and she lets her mom keep Drake have him for the night and he can sleep tied up in the front of her panties. Obviously, you know which direction I want the story to go. All I can do is wait and hope you go that way too.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Haha I do intend to reward for 5 chapters in a single day. I am still kind of deciding what to do with Ricky at this point. Poor guy has suffered alot. But honestly I kind of like making him suffer as the writer lol. I am such a horrible person I know. We will have to see what happens. Next chapter will involve Drake and Jessica and that's going to be a fun one to write for sure.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2016 12:26 AM Title: Life is Full of Surprises (And Lemons)

Before I get started, a pizza party this Friday means that you should have a chapter on Friday as well. :)

Back to this chapter. This one felt very real to me. I feel like I'm in the friend zone with a few girls who always seem to be friendly but not too friendly or flirty. This chapter made me think about them. While some of those friends don't seem like 10, you honestly can't tell becuase they dress up so formally. I'm not kidding, Jessica really reminds me of them.

Now Jessica is saying that she was friends with Drake just becuase she liked him? Wow, I bet you know what I'm thinking. Do the girls that I am friends with actually like me? I'm not going to test it, but I will keep this in mind.

Jessica is very refreshing. She didn't even care that Drake puked in her hand, or even was staring at her crotch! Most giantess stories would have the girl be pissed and punish the guy. I found this alternative a nice touch.

What I like about this story is how fast everything goes. So much action and there is so much variety. There is the stepsister, stepmom, classmate, sister's classmate, sister's classmate's mom, classmate's mom, and what they do to each tiny is different! It's amazing how so much has happened to these guys and it's never the exact same thing. There is always a little variation of it which keeps things interesting.

Also, you don't focus on one giantess too long and I think it really makes it unpredictable since we have no idea who will get Ricky or Drake next.

I always love shower scenes. I love the cliffhanger in the end about her being dirty. This story could use more awesome cliffhangers like that.

I wonder how Jessica's mom will be. I know you like developing character, so you got another chance with her. I'm curious to see what giantess she will be like too.

Good point about the sperm thing. Most people don't even mention it since its kinda awkward to talk about it. For me, I'm not skipping anything. You can count on me reading and reviewing every since chapter you post. (I think you knew that already.)

Funny you mention Duggernaut and I in the end notes. Duggernaut kinda dedicated Tom's story to me since he liked one of my ideas and he decided to make a story based on it. We never knew it was going to be one of the most popular stories on the site, but people kept reviewing and reading it. It actually turned 1 year old about 3 weeks ago.

Good chapter. I love the new Jessica. Also, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you felt some since of reality and also relation to this chapter. Jessica is going to be a surprising character for Drake. She seems to hold confidence where she normally doesn't hold it. A Friday Chapter may very well happen lol. I should most likely have time to do it.

Reviewer: JTH2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 8:37 AM Title: Wake up bro!

I will admit that I'm starting to get a bit confused with all these names that begins with a J. I keep having to remind myself which character is being used which is quite annoying.

However, take nothing away from you, this is a great story with all the right ingredients to it. It is definitely one of my favourite stories on this site, and the best story that's being written at the moment. Please keep this story going as I feel that you've gotten started! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. 

 

Allow me help you. So far, the only J named characters or Jennifer, and Jessica. Jennifer is Kaylee's friend, and Kaylee is Drake's younger sister. So you can associate Jennifer with "young" since she is around the same age as Kaylee. 

 

Jessica you may remember from chapter 2. Her character was very quickly introduced and we haven't seen her until very recently. She was one of Drake's best friends. So she is the same age as Drake since they are both in the same grade. 

I hope this helps! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2016 11:43 PM Title: Trust Issues

Yeah man, I got school in 2 weeks and I wish summer was longer. I'm glad that you are back. It will make these 2 weeks much better.

I really like what you did with Kiatlyn. Im not sure you planned this from the beginning, or if you planned it from the break you just had, but I like her change in demeanor.

They way she just lured Ricky was awesome. Even though her reaction to Ricky's comments were genuine, she still had doubt if Ricky really trusted her. It's funny that she doesn't even give Ricky a chance to prove himself and just decides to punish him anyway.

Seriously, though: what is with Kaitlyn and her putting Ricky in unaware situations. She never fucks Ricky by herself. Every time she gets him, she just gives him away to someone else. I like the variety, that she does it with different people, but I feel like there is one on one with Kaitlyn.

Kaitlyn put Ricky on Kaylee's panties, then she put him in Christine's shoe, then inside Brad's ass, and now back on Kaylee's thong. While I love what Kaitlyn is doing by putting Ricky in these situations, it's always Kaitlyn and she does kinda similar things all the time.

One thing I do like, is how creative you are with stuff to hold Ricky down. You mentioned tape, glue, and a few other things which I don't remember.

Kaylee has the biggest ass? What about the milfs? I thought they would have the bigger asses since they have naturally wider hips. I know Christine is a model, but I still think that her ass is bigger.

Man, you just love ass, don't you? Now it's kinda funny. At first it was getting repetitive, but now I think it's a good laugh becuase we know that Ricky was going to be punished and the ass is the best way, especially if you are glued to a thong.

I'm really excited for this Drake chapter. Jessica seems very nice, but I think this kind relationship won't last long and soon Jessica's mom might have something to say about that. Maybe she hasn't found the right lover for her and now with Drake, she can live out her fantasies. (This is just speculation as long as Jessica's mom is naughty.)

I think that it would be funny that Kaylee thinks that Drake is safe with Jessica and that Ricky is safe with Kaitlyn even though both of those guesses are mostly like going to be wrong. Ricky is already in a sticky situation. (Get it?) and Drake could get into some trouble wth Jessica's mom.

Once again, glad to see that you are back. I hope the next chapter is tomorrow. And I can't wait for that next chapter!

Author's Response:

Kaitlyn is a classic Sadist. She would have no concern for Ricky's well being, and she also shows it by humiliation. That's the kicker. She knows it's humiliating to throw them in these situations  of course Ricky isn't necessarily shoved up Kaylee's ass either. He is simply a passenger that is along for the ride. Keep in mind that I never said Kaylee had the biggest ass. Just that of there was any ass to trap someone in, it would be Kaylee's which would suggest that her ass must be pretty good for her age. Plus this is the first time Ricky has gotten into a situation like this with Kaylee. So it could be interesting.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 10:29 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Sorry about not reviewing been really lazy. Doesnt stop me from constantly checking here every hour to see if you added though.  I'm really obsessed with this story, I really love it.  Haven't read yesterdays chapters yet.  Kind of curious whos written more you or tomspeedy lol.  Even though people aren't reviewing you can rest assured that everyone loves it, Read Count: 70662!

Author's Response:

Haha it's no biggy. I am so happy you are enjoying my story. I sometimes question if I wrote things right or not. But Hopfully I won't dissapoint :D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 1:04 AM Title: A Brief Moment of Sincerety

That was such a weird chapter in my opinion. I felt like the change was too sudden. I don't think that those reasons that Ricky said made sense when he explained why he trusted Kaitlyn.

If she wanted to punish him, yeah, she could have done it, but Ricky's story was so fucked up even on Kaitlyn's standards that she wanted to listen to it. For her, it's like listen to some erotic story instead of fucking Brad. Both are amazing to her and she likes this new story from Ricky.

Also, for his second reason, she heard him out becuase that's what every single giantess also did on this story. Kaylee, Jessica, Chrstine, and Rachel all asked about Ricky or Drake's story. (O don't remember one from Jennifer though.) Point is, Kaitlyn isn't the only one that heard him out. Even Rachel heard him out so does that mean Ricky trusts Rachel? Probably not since Rachel is more cruel, but Kaitlyn and Rachel have punished Ricky the most in this story so I found it surprising that he all of a sudden trusts her.

I think Ricky was being nice to Kaitlyn so that way she doesn't mess with him. I think all that "I will stick with you, you are cool, you are great to talk to, you aren't have bad either" is just a bunch of bs that Ricky is saying just so he can be on her good side.

Cmon Kaitlyn? You buy this shrunken dude's compliments? He is just trying to be nice so you don't control him. I find it odd that she isn't thinking that Ricky's comments are sarcasm. I mean, someone give Ricky an Oscar, this shit is hilarious. I mean, there is no way a girl like Kaitlyn just melts down after one conversation.

Hold on a second! First she was mindblown about Ricky's story, then she felt happy that Ricky was being nice, then she felt horny was ready to fuck the shit out of him, and then seconds later, she ain't horny and has to process her emotions??? What? Its like I'm watching the movie "Inside Out" and her emotions are switching every paragraph. Haha!

I hope a Jessica chapter is next. Drake is in new territory and we got a new character to meet next time with Jessica's mom. I hope she will be like Chrsitine, but maybe more smarter and won't lose Drake like Christine did with Ricky. I'm anxious to see what kind of giantess she will be. I know you got something special for her.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Well remember two things, one is that girls will ALWAYS be complex characters in any story. In real life, girls are very complex people. And most of them would agree. I don't mean emotional, I simply mean complex. So if it strikes you as weird about her character, then good! It's supposed to make you think like, "what the hell?"

Also keep in mind that Ricky is genuinely a bit on the polite side. Just think about how he has yet to snap on anyone of the captors he has had and he barely snapped at Kaylee when she was wrong about Kaitlyn being home. 

Oh and just keep in mind that just because Kaitlyn needed time to think to herself doesn't mean that she stopped being horny xD I was nervous about writing that chapter, but just keep an open mind to it and you'll see where I take it. These passed few chapters have been a lot of plot and story development.