[Report This]Date: July 30 2016 9:41 PM Title: Planning Ahead
Wow! You weren't kidding about the 3 chapters in one night! This is awesome!
One thing I noticed in this story is that each giantess doesn't have much time to play with Drake or Ricky. It seems like one thing, and soon they are passed onto the next person.
Kaitlyn got Ricky good. There is no way he can escape like what Drake did. And wow, did Ricky get humiliated. That's some intense fucking right there. Also, doenst Kaitlyn feel a bit weirded out that her boyfriend's cum is dried on her ass? That sounds uncomfortable.
Yeah, I'm going to miss Chrsitine. But it looks like a new milf will join the fun. Jessica's mom could a new character to have some fun. Imagine, sweet Jessica protecting Drake, but then her naughty mom shows up and takes him. Now that would be a fun transition.
Is Jessica the first nice girl in the story? Kaylee doesn't count becuase she played with her own brother.
Haha! Rachel just made fun of Jennifr! I love it! I keep forgetting that Jennifer is only 16 and it was funny that the one rule made was basically all Jennifer wanted to do. That was funny.
Will there be a naughty teacher in this story? Since Drake and Ricky are passed around a lot, maybe one of them, (more likely Drake) can spend some time in private detention.
Of course Jennifer would lose Drake, a bra is noting compared to panties. Panties are literally a prison. Bras are like a tent. If any of these giantesses really want to keep a tiny safe and secure, then you gotta go with the panties.
I'm still hoping Chrsitine shows up soon. She is still my favorite giantes. I would love to see her get Ricky again.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well if you remember, Jessica made an appearance in Chapter 2 very breifly. So her character has already been introduce. As far as the possibility of her mom also getting into the mix, we will just have to see.
So far this story is going to take a bunch of different turns.
Date: July 30 2016 8:28 PM Title: Wake up bro!
I want to see Drake's mom's reaction when she finds out she had sex with her son and that she is not any better than her girlfriend.
Author's Response:
Well, she may be horrified that's for sure. Although, it will be interesting to find out how she handles it. The real trick is finding a method of trying to write in that she finds out.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2016 7:56 PM Title: Sleep Tight
Wow! That is pretty low. Being farted, shat on, spat on and also sleeping inside a condom inside an ass? Now that's intense.
I think I'm going to prefer Chrsitine as my favorite giantess at the moment. I love how horny she is and she gives off such a sexy vibe.
Rachel seems to enjoy her ass a little too much. I thought she would be the crazy horny person but instead, she is just crazy with creative ways of torture.
In the end, you made it seem like Jennifrr seems worse than Rachel, the way you phrased that he had no idea what was going on tomorrow. Well, I think it's probably better than what is happening now.
Man, I really hope you do 3 chapters a night. I kinda doubt it becuase even 1 chapter a day is really difficult to maintain. I don't expect 3 chapters a day, or even 2, but you bet I will be glad to see that.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I agree, that is pretty low lol
Christine might not see some action until later so I am sorry for you having to wait xD But I suppose when she does come back into play, it'll make the contnet so much sweeter for you.
Also, I am still kind of trying to find out how Jennifer will be. I am trying to find ways to make her worse that her mom but after this chapter, it's kind of hard to top that. Especially when she forced Drake to be fucked by his own mom.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2016 8:15 PM Title: The Lion Sleeps Tonight
Yay! You're back! And with nice chapter!
I loved how it was action packed and there is lots to talk about.
To get this started, that's a long nap that Ricky had. I bet if it weren't for that alarm, he would be snoozing until next morning.
When Ricky got the thumbtack, I just knew it was going to be used on a human. Animal? Unlikely. The real danger are the giantesses for Ricky.
Did you see that? Drake wanted Rachel to find Ricky so he can be free instead. How selfish! Drake totally deserved this. And the best part...Rachel gets to keep him even longer.
So Chrsitine gets fucked by Rachel and then Chrsitine fucks Ricky. Interesting to see Chrsitine be the dominant and the submissive. Rachel on the other hand is completely dominant and I love that.
If I was Ricky and I saw Drake on that strap on, I would have just watched have sex. I mean, these are two horny milfs about to go at it with a tiny with them. That's quite a show.
Wouldn't it be funny if Ricky was still in Chrsitine's ass and then Drake and Ricky could have a little reunion? Then Drake is pushing Ricky deeper and deeper inside Chrsitine.
Wait, how is Kaitlyn there? Didn't Kaylee tell Ricky that Kaitlyn was out all day? Or was I mistaken? Also, why didn't Kaitlyn go after Ricky in the closet? It felt unlike Kaitlyn to just let him hide in there.
"Well what do you think we should do then Ricky?" I thought Kaylee was thinking about having fun with Ricky. The way that was phrased made me think that she was anxious for some more boy toy time and this time it wasn't her brother.
Ricky going to spy on Chrsitine? Haha! I have this awesome feeling that Ricky will blow his cover and Chrsitine will find him. I can't wait for what she has in store for him since she lost him the first time. You know now she won't let him out of her sight anymore.
Kaylee asking Jennifer? For what? You already know that Drake is with Rachel or with Christine. If I was Kaylee, I would keep my friendship with Jennifrr and not ask such a daring question. Kaylee already knows that Jennifer is a liar anyway. So why bother asking?
Wow! Great writing! Sending Drake back where he came from inside Christine. Also, when Drake wanted to stop, but Christine wanted more, I was laughing. That was a good one.
That's embarrassing Chrsitine. Your best orgasm was with your son. Haha!
Wow! Not even Christine was able to make Rachel stop when she wanted. You must very scared for Drake becuase you know Rachel isn't done with him tonight.
Wait, was Rachel trying to get Ricky? Or was she just trying to make Drake suffer? Both? I'm pretty sure Rachel just wanted to fuck Drake relentlessly and she even forgot about Ricky.
After that event, Rachel should have out Drake in her panties to let him know that she wants more and that she is done for the night. Drake could then feel her getting wet as Rachel is thinking about it.
Rachel giving Drake to Jennifer for a moment? What? Knowing Rachel, I thought it would be 24/7 detention with Drake. She should be taking him to work with her. Jennifer will probably lose Drake. I have this feeling that Jennifer won't give Drake back to Rachel when she gets him. Instead, I hope Rachel changes her mind and decides that when she says that Drake is hers, then she really means it and will keep him with her at all times.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate this review. Well really I appreciate all of them but you pointed out a clear plot hole that I accidentally put. You are right. Kaylee did say Kaitlyn was out of the house for the day. Of course that would add to Ricky's surprise being that he didn't expect her whenever she pinned him down. I'll go back and add in some dialogue with Kaylee and Ricky of him getting a little pissed that Kaylee told him Kaitlyn was going to be there and her being wrong.
Also you make a good point about a few things. First off, what I had planned would have placed Drake back in Kaylee's hands. It wouldn't be a pleasant reunion though. Whis is why I wrote in that Jennifer may get Drake. Also, Ricky still has some snooping around to do when Kaylee is at school. But do you know who doesn't have school or work? That's right, you guessed it. The next day is only going to be Tuesday in the timeline so Christine is going to have work as well as Rachel. I could write that Rachel takes Drake with her. Or I can keep it the way I am going. Either way I'll think and brainstorm on it some more. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter though. Had unwilling and unaware incest in it and I think that's a common favorite among us tinies. It being unaware and all. Anything forced is sexy to us since we are submisive little bastards xD
Date: July 23 2016 10:23 PM Title: Wake up bro!
I cannot wait to see how this story unfolds. I wonder how Rachel will.introduce Drake to Christine? Like the previous reviewer hypothesized, Rachel may disguise or make Drake unrecognizable. She could attach him in some manner to a toy and then be used unaware (heart skips a beat thinking of it). Last but not least, Christine could hand Ricky over to Rachel for some rough play. Once Christine turns around to accept Ricky, Rachel swaps the boys out. Ricky goes into Rachels purse as her desired shrunken man and Drake is in for one hell of a ride. Either way my anticipation is growing for the next chapter. I appreciate your clear warnings regarding the male interaction. While it's not my thing, I can appreciate that others enjoy it and I won't stop reading your wonderful story because of it.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2016 9:53 PM Title: Spider's Silk
I like the chapter title. Describes this scene perfectly. She is a spider and Drake got caught in her web.
Drake got everything from her; stepped on, blowjob, mouth play, insertion, and now ass trap. Sums up Rachel quite nicely.
I'm guessing next chapter, Rachel goes to Christine's house and they have their fun. Interesting that Rachel knows that Chrsitine has Ricky and that she prefers Ricky over Drake.
Rachel said that she will give Drake to Chrsitine. Is this a trade I see? Will Rachel trade Drake for Ricky? While that is a cool idea, it would be wired for Christine to get Drake. I mean, Christine isn't going to play with Drske like she did with Ricky. I don't see a trade happening.
I think it's best if Chrsitine keeps Ricky and Rachel keeps Drake. That way both women can use their tinies as they please.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2016 5:20 PM Title: When Lambs Become Lions
I don't mind the delay, but the change from a sexy chapter to a plot chapter did make feel a bit sad, especially since I was expecting a Christine vs Ricky domination to happen.
Instead he winds up with Kaylee and does some secret agent spy scheming with her. While that's cool, I would rather see Ricky being fucked persistently by Christine. I felt like Christine this chapter. It was going to be awesome, but then Rachel ruins it and Ricky escapes. When Chrstine yelled in the house, I was thinking, "yup, join the club."
Good news is that I am excited to see that Rachel has captured Drake. I'm also glad that you will write up a chapter describing that encounter. I would love to see the look of Drake's face when he realizes that Rachel was the worst idea he ever thought of.
I thought Ricky was kinda of a goofball. He gave me the impression of that low esteem guy that cannot think outside the box. He said he hated the "ass" and got punished, which was a poor move, but here, he was able to figure out that Rachel might have Drake and that Drake may have escaped Jennifer and asked for Rachel for assistance. Seems like Ricky read this story like some cheat codes. I really doubt that he was able to just think of all that. It just seems unlikely.
Why does Rachel want to show Drake to his mom? Wouldn't Christine just tell Rachel that it's not ok for her to use her son like that and that she should hand him over? I think it would be a smarter decision if Rachel keeps Drake to herself similarly to how Christine was keeping Ricky to herself.
You know what I think? Rachel wraps Drake up with some rubberbands/ribbons/tape so Chrsitine cannot tell that it's Drake. Rachel should just say that she found some random guy and decided to play with him. I bet Christine will join in on the fun and abuse Drake as if it's not her son.
Here is my list of favorite giantess in this story:
1. Rachel. Her aggressive nature and dominance just outshines everyone and she wants to be in control. It seems like no one can stop her and she gets what she wants. She also seems experienced, something that makes me believe that she has played with men before and knows how to us them.
2. Christine. Similarly to Rachel, she loves to be in control. I also love her teasing, the way she likes to tease Ricky was awesome. Her feelings for Ricky seem like a weakness and I think she needs to make him fear her again.
3. Jennifer. I know we didn't get to see much of her, but her personality makes it seem like she is always horny and that she must get her desire to be in control from her mother.
4. Kaitlyn. She doesn't give a shit about anything and that kinda appeals to me. However, she lacks the sexiness that other giantesses have. I don't see much emotion with her, but her actions are by far one of the best in this story.
5. Kaylee. She is last. One, her age. Second, it's her brother. However, she is still a giantess. She just needs to find another guy to play with and it will be much better. I love her playful attitude, but when it becomes sexually playful with Drake, it seems off to me. Maybe, Ricky in her hands will change that.
I'm glad that you agree that we Shiism have a discussion here. Im just not sure if it will ever happen. I can see a lot of reads and views. Just not enough reviews to match that. Maybe I'm covering all the points that everyone thinks about. Maybe, no one wants to post their review next to my essay of a review. I remember when I started writing reviews that I felt intimidated to write my review after a giant one from someone else. Or, maybe no one wants to discuss with me, becuase I keep taking all the ideas. Either way, I'm sure more people will review soon.
For the next chapter, I hope Rachel gets kinky with Drake. I hope it's not just a "hey, look a tiny! Yes! Get in my ass!" And that's it. I'm crossing my fingers for some foreplay.
I can't wait for the next chapter! (Will it be tonight?)
Author's Response:
I smiled the whole way through reading your review. Especially when it got to the part of you trying to figure out why Rachel would willingly take Drake to his mom. Let's just say I have certain ideas that I would like to try and make come to a reality and you may have to pick up your jaw from the floor. Well. I mean, it won't be THAT big of an idea.
I've been trying to see if I can do the best I can to prevent seeming repetative and unfortunately as I look back on some chapters, it seems like they follow a formula, especially when it comes to ass. No surprises there since I said at the beginning that I favor ass play. I did intentionally write the ass play in this chapter to be like, "Yep no surprise, been there done that." In this case, her ass is just a transport device for this purpose. And the fact that Rachel enjoys the idea of having her Lover's son shoved up her ass.
I did take your advice to give Kaylee someone to interact with, which is why I pulled Drake away from her. Ricky won't be who she interacts with, I may not give her anything new until way later. Hell I am brainstorming every night and the way it's going, I may even make a series out of this. Don't get your hopes up too much though. I am still thinking about it. Also, Kaitlyn will indeed get more chapters to play. The long male chapter will come back for sure and this time it will indeed feature a real male dick instead of a strap on.
Whether or not it's going to be unaware has yet to be decided.
I am trying to tweak this story as I go and make it the best I can. Which is why Chapter 4 got a rewrite a very long time ago and Drake actually didn't end up being in Kaylee's thong while she was unaware.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2016 12:39 AM Title: Forward Unto the Unknown
Wow! Drake's story just got interesting. For the last few chapters of Drake, they seemed almost like nothing compared to what Ricky went through.
Now that Drake is wandering into a death trap, he will have a taste of what Ricky has been through all week.
Two teenage boys and two sexy milfs. Now we are talking. I don't even know which guy I should be jealous of. Both Rachel and Christine are sexy, dominant giantesses and I love how they just control what they want.
I think what makes me excited about Drake's situation is that Drake has no idea what he is getting himself into. He looks at Rachel as someone who will help him. Little does he know that she may actually be the opposite and is probably more scary than Jennifer.
You would think that when Jennifer orgamsed, that people would notice. I'm guessing people did notice, but you didn't mention it. I just couldn't help think of what others around her will think if they was her wetting herself like that.
I mean, even on a bus too? I would feel bad for the person sitting next to her. (Unless it's some horny dude.) Imagine if all the seats were taken and she decides to just sit on some random guy's lap. Then she just orgasms on on his lap. I wonder if that guy would be considered lucky or humiliated.
Christine and Rachel both are known to be ready to fuck the shit out of their tinies. Now that they are happening at the same time, we can compare them.
I wonder if Rachel will recognize that it's Drake instead of Ricky. Or will she see some tiny guy and assume that it's Ricky and wants to punish him for round 2. If she does happen to see its Drake, well, I guess she does round 2 anyway. Haha!
Lots of reviews and read counts. Yep, couldn't agree more. You upload often and your content is entertaining. For the reviews, I got almost half of them, haha! I would love to see more reviews on here so we can have like a discussion and maybe predict stuff for the future. That would be fun.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I like the way you think. It could be a nice thing to open up a discussion in the review section. I'd be happy to watch all of you predict what is going on in my demented brain :P
[Report This]Date: July 21 2016 1:21 PM Title: Setting the Playing Feild
Damn she even told him she wanted him to fear her, yet he answered what he didn't like. Love how he was fine with pleasing her but she doesn't want his consent. I'm kind of curios what will happen if she finds out about her son, or even if Kaylee finds Ricky.
Author's Response:
My play here was to make the reader think, even if just a moment, that she was actually wanting to put him in her vagina. I conveyed that by letting her make Ricky think that was where she was going to put him as well. I plan on making the chapter with them two VERY detailed when they both arrive home for that evening.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2016 9:39 PM Title: Setting the Playing Feild
I can't believe Ricky didn't realize that what Christine was going to do when she asked "what he didn't like?" I mean, this was right after she said that she wanted him to fear her.
What was Ricky thinking?! He should have said that he hated feet or panties so Christine will put him there to intimidate him. Well, that's what I would have done. Fake my fear and then enjoy her putting me in a place where I like.
That boss scene was 10/10. I love the foot domination she did. Like the way she dragged her foot accoss his body and her boss had no idea when she was going to strike! Her foot was like a cobra, waiting to be unleashed.
The boss probably gave her a job in the first place becuase she was attractive. Her skills then granted her as manager. That combo of looks and skills will always land jobs even in the real world.
When Christine said the she let him out for fresh air, I was thinking "yeah, right. She is going to use him somehow". I was kinda right. She put him in her bum and he is still tied up which is amazing!
"Just wait until tonight". It seems like this ass detention is nothing compared to tonight. Will Rachel be there? Will she fuck him for hours? Will she make him sleep inside her? I'm just curious how her naughty game will be better tonight.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, next chapter will come soon enough :D should be about Drake this time. Then the one after that will pick up where Ricky left off. I hadn't planned on juggling them back and forth but it may be the best option. Then again, if any one of their chapters gets too intense for a wait, I may conitune their experience with the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2016 7:59 PM Title: When Life Takes Your Lemons
Whoa, wait a minute. So Jennifer was basically sitting her bare ass on her seat? Like if she stood up and bent over, you can see her naked ass? Wow!
And that's why a giantes should never put a tiny in their pocket. The place they are carried by has to be safe and secure like a cleavage or panties. Shoes would be another option but you need some cushioning with that.
I think to balance things for the readers, we could have some feet stuff with Jennifer and some panties stuff with Christine. Personally, I think I'm in love with Christine, so I would love her to keep being naughty. Jennifer, on the other hand seems like an excellent giantess but I still prefer Christine over her.
I think Jennifer has a naughty side to her too. She probably got it from her mom, Rachel. Imagine if Rachel finds Drake. Jennifer could bring Drake home with her and then Rachel finds him and thinks it's Ricky. Or Drake gets a threesome with Jennifer and Rachel. Wait, that would be weird for Jennifer. Ok, maybe Jennifr and Rachel pass Drake around. There are lots of option for this.
Will Kaylee even think that Jennifer has him? Maybe Kaylee just thinks that Jennifer is using a tiny vibrator, but it's actually Drake pleasing Jennifer.
Well, now I really want another surprise chapter tonight becuase I was really thinking that the Ricky chapter was going to be this one. Well, at least I'm sure it will be the next one.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 18 2016 10:37 PM Title: Christine the Godess
Wow! I'm impressed! By lots of things:
First, you uploaded another chapter today! I was fine with that one chapter 14 today, and now it just went to spectacular becuase not only did you add another chapter, but you added another sexy chapter which is arguably now my favorite chapter of this story.
2nd, thanks for shouting me out at the end chapter notes. I have been called a biggest fan before so this isn't new to me. I just love writing reviews and sharing ideas. And by reading lots of stories, I get even more ideas. I check this website an average of 5 times a day which usually allows me to get a good chance of being the first to review a chapter which is my goal most of the time.
3rd, you put all my favorite things together this chapter. You have the milf with Christine. Then you have the panty entrapment. Then she says "naughty". That's one of my favorite words to describe a giantess. It's a mix of teasing, playful, dominant and sexy. Then, Ricky is still in bondage! He is still has his limbs taped up while being trapped in her panties! Then, he is also trapped in a later of pantyhose which presses Ricky into her even further. In addition, it's a lace thong. Those undergarments are sexy. Lastly, she gave him a bondage blowjob and now wants him to return the favor. Perfect!
Yes, you are defiantely making me go with the Christine + Ricky combo. I'm amazed at how Christine has this naughty side to her which she hasn't revealed to her kids, or even to us readers. Even Ricky is hard listening to this and I don't blame him. I would be excited by that dirty talk too.
As I read the chapter, it got better and better by he sentence. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 18 2016 8:22 PM Title: Drake the Dungeon Diver
I just read the edited version of this chapter.
Interesting. So now Kaitlyn is aware of Ricky and Drake. Technically she is the only giantess that knows about both of them.
So, I guess Ricky is not on the strap on anymore. I kinda wish he was still stuck here. Just imagine, Christine arriving back home all tired and now she just wants some fun and Ricky is positioned perfectly for that.
Well, now Ricky will help mom with her work by being a foot cushion. He will absorb her weight for every step. Much different from a typical teen girl whose weight is barely anything. No, this is mom Christine who I bet has a much more mature body with curves in the right places. Yes, I can picture her walking, with the sway of her hips, all that glory Ricky will feel.
Wow! Ricky is all tied up too! So he can't escape and he is trapped in her high heels for a day!? And that includes this night?! Wow, so taped there for day and night, not just day.
I would love a similar situation with panties. I know Kaitlyn already tied up Drake to Kaylee's panties, but then you teased us! I wanted that to happen, so I hope you decide to have Ricky tied up to someone's panties (the front part) as she wears him all day. I hope it will be Rachel who does this.
While, I wouldn't say I'm a big fan of feet, I am a fan of bondage and being tied to some high heels is definately erotic. I just wonder if Christine will even know that he is there.
I think you could make Christine stretch her toes and wiggle them around Ricky so he gets a full show too. Also, a cool idea would be if she crosses her legs and Both of her leg weight goes on Ricky. Might be cool if she even gives a footjob. Like an unaware footjob. She is just sliding her foot in and out and in and out and Ricky can't do anything but to take it.
Are you going to tease us again? Will Christine notice Ricky in her shoe? Will Christine choose another pair of high heels? Will the high heels break and she throws them away? Will she trip in her heels and sit on her shoe?
Lots of possible outcomes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes indeed. I am glad you went back to check it out. Also, I purposfully wrote my latest chapter to be a little downgraded fron the rest of the content. I am trying to progress story and that gets challenging when you try and fit in a bunch of sexy into it. I am trying to find a good balance of sexy and story lol
[Report This]Date: July 18 2016 7:58 PM Title: Hygene is Always important
Going back to that last chapter, that "male" content was more erotic than this chapter. While Kaylee does seem like a playful character, isn't she 15 and his sister? Personally I find Drake's parts easier to skip over than that male content.
The thing about that male content was that I was expecting an actual male dick to show up. But it didn't. Usually, that's the signal that it's male content for me.
The focus on that scene was mostly on Kaitlyn and Brad. Ricky was just in the middle of it, but instead of picturing myself as Ricky, I pictured myself as Brad. Being strapon fucked just sounds so awesome, especially with a controlling girlfriend like Kaitlyn.
Sure, Ricky went in Brad's ass, but that was kinda nothing. Brad was tied up and Kaitlyn was having her way and that's what got my attention. It was how controlling Kaitlyn was.
Speaking of controlling women. Christine and Rachel are controlling women. Especially Rachel. I love her aggressive nature and I would love to be her toy. She can use me however she wants when she is horny.
Well, Ricky is in Christine's room still all tied up to that strap on dildo. I think it's time we get some 1 on 1 time for Ricky and I would love to see maybe some panty entrapment or something sexy with Christine. If not, then I hope Rachel shows up and performs it.
Christine could play with Ricky alone now, with no one to bother her. She could even sleep with Ricky pleasuring her. Just thinking about it makes me excited.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Don't worry. Ricky isn't tied to the strap on in the room anymore. I changed the male content chapter. You should go check it out! You may get very happy with what Ricky is doing now.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2016 7:50 PM Title: Hygene is Always important
Love the addition! Kaitlyn must be stupid. First she puts her brother in her sisters panties, now she gives up another oppurtunity to have a shrunken slave by puting ricky in her mothers shoes. Not so into feet, but looking forward to read what happens.
Author's Response:
I wanted to please my feet fans lol But hey, she gave him a chance. So if he lives, Kaitlyn may have some play time with him. Plus there isn't saying she won't find Drake again either
[Report This]Date: July 18 2016 6:49 PM Title: Drake the Dungeon Diver
I hate to say the male part so far was the most hot, don't know why you did a huge "DANGER WARNING WARNING ATTENTION MALE AHEAD PLEASE Don't READ" thing about it... Actually I would like to see male interactions again, unaware of course. The ass idea was awesome.
Author's Response:
Haha well I've been kind of doing a lot of everything to make people happy. I am glad you like it though. I only put the warning there just so nobody accidentally stumbles onto it and actually doesn't want to read it.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 10:15 PM Title: Drake the Dungeon Diver
I like the back and forth between Ricky and Drake. Drake's anal experience seemed too tame, but he was being nice I guess. I like the more nonconsenual stuff, then again kaylee is getting there a bit when she tricked her brother in. I loved the ricky section, actually wish it was longer. Male content doesn't bother me and it was a great situation. Love Kaitlyn lol
Author's Response:
I am thinking of going back and editing it to make it longer.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 10:01 PM Title: Drake the Dungeon Diver
What I love about your story is that you have 2 parts to it. There is the part with Drake and the part with Ricky for each chapter.
Kaylee needs to find a boyfriend. She seems to find love with her own brother which will soon be awkward when she tries other things with Drake.
Holy shit! When Drake was in Kaylee's ass and she was getting the dildo, my heart almost stopped becuase I thought she was going to insert the dildo into her ass forcing Drake even deeper inside it. Like, that is total domination. I can totally picture Kaitlyn doing that soon.
Speaking of Kaitlyn, I would love her to be my girlfriend. Being tied up to a bed sounds hot. I prefer a dominant girlfriend and Brad seems to be in the same position as me. While being strapon fucked is fun to watch, I'm sure it hurts as hell when it really happens.
Cmon, Kaitlyn. You tied Brad up, but you didn't gag him? You have to take one of your used panties and shove inside his mouth. Then you put tape over his mouth so he can't scream shit. That's how she should have done it. I guess she preferred pillow smothering instead.
That male content was barely anything, haha! Your chapters are fairly long, that I was planning on a lot more male content. It felt like "Kaitlyn inserted the strap on inside Brad". (Then next sentence.) "Brad went limp from it". Lol. All of a sudden the chapter is over.
Ricky back in mom's room. This should be fun. Looks like they get some one on one action. Next time, I hope Rachel takes Ricky to her house and keeps him with her forever. Like, I wish there was a side story that was just about the R combo, (Ricky and Rachel.) that would be awesome.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hmm you had some interesting input. I may go back and edit the chapter to include the panties gag. I feel like you're right and Kaitlyn would do that. Male content I may also change slightly to give Kaitlyn the opportunity to have more interactions with a tiny character.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 9:53 PM Title: Drake the Dungeon Diver
Not a huge anal fan, but the way you write it... Is actually really good to me. Another great chapter! Hope to see some feet action eventually (maybe what I previously suggested? Love unaware forced punishments, especially when Kaylee will discover him eventually lol)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I had no idea I was writing it in an enjoyable way xD I think you mean Kaitlyn? She is the only one that doesn't know about Ricky. Well Kaylee doesn't know either but she is with Drake and won't find Ricky any time soon.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 11:27 AM Title: The Things We Do For Love
Nice Game of Thrones reference. I love that phrase. It fit beautifully into the chapter too.
Part of me felt like Kaylee knew she could have gotten Drake out more simply, but she wanted to tease him like always and decided to lick him and put him in her vagina.
I think she could've just take him with her hands. (I'm sure she could still be gentle.) Then she can put him in between her toes behind her while still looking at Jennifer so she doesn't suspect anything. Then Kaylee can stretch her foot out behind her and release her brother away from the action on the far side of the bed.
Also, since Kaylee is considered the expert by Jennifer, Kaylee could've taken advantage of this and make Jennifer do all sorts of things to stall her and Jennifer might believe her. Yes, Jennifer was impatient, but I think if Kaylee told her to "be patient she will enjoy it more", then Jennifer will understand and wait.
Also, couldn't Kaylee, just say, "this is making me wet, let me use the bathroom first" while she had Drake in her vagain?
While I think there were many methods of getting Drake out safely, I'm glad you kept this approach becuase it was very entertaining.
Yeah, Drake and Kaylee will defiantely have a talk. Drake might say "was that necessary sis?" Kaylee might blush and then say "yes" with a smile on her face.
Wouldn't it be more fun if Kaylee just told Jennifer that her brother was in her panties and you could play with him? That way, Kaylee didn't have to go thru all that and also she can see Jennifer and her brother bonding. (Sort of.)
Great chapter nonetheless. I can wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Ahh yes. The outcome you proposed could be good for an alternative version of that chapter.
For this chapter though, I wanted to attract readers to the idea of Kaylee trying to hide her brother, while trying not to be sexual at all. Kaylee didn't even want to do it in the first place but her friend provided her with an opportunity to get Drake without her noticing. While your points of the different ways she could have taken him and kept him safe were good, the path she chose was the least obvious as Jennifer just simply thought Kaylee was trying to be sexy. Even after Jennifer violated her friends ass, she still was oblivious to the fact that Kaylee didn't actually want to do it. She was just trying to protect Drake. So that talk that Kaylee and Drake will have isn't going to be the best of talks. Kaylee does Love her brother, but right now she is trying to determine if what she did was worth it.