Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 5:27 PM Title: Update!

It's all good we all appreciate the hard work you've put in this amazing story and life can get busy. Take your time and no rush at all! Glad to hear that the story will continue on!

Oh the reference is from Star Wars

Author's Response:

Congrats! You get to tell me what type of story you'd like me to write! You can decide if you want it to be a simple short story (1-5) chapters long or a moderate story (10-15) chapters long. Or have one as long as the one I'm currently writing! (20- 100+) chapters long.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 12:15 PM Title: Christine the Godess

@rhatt35 you are correct! I meant Rachel, not Kaitlyn  :) switched name's by accident

Author's Response:

No worries :D I'd hate for someone to get characters confused because that could make a reader get really confused via continuity xD

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 9:19 AM Title: Christine the Godess

Just remembered that Kaitlyn destroyed the shrink ray... oh dear! And Christine is the epitome of a milf fantasy!

Author's Response:

Ahh but remember that it was Rachel who destroyed the shrink device! She did so right in front of Ricky if my memory serves correct!

It can become really confusing even to me so I can provide a list of characters and who they are real quick.

Drake (First and main tiny)

Ricky (Second tiny and Drake's best friend)

Kaylee (Drake's younger sister AKA: The awesome one!)

Kaitlyn (Drake's older sister and also known as the tormentor you Love!)

Jennifer (Rachel's daughter who is friends with Kaylee)

Rachel (mother of Jennifer and Lover of Drake's mother)

Christine (Mother of Drake and Lover of Rachel!) May also be called Ms. Dobson.

 

Based off the chapters you have read, I believe that those are all of the characters you have run into so far that are of importance! I hope this helps!

 

Keep in mind I haven't went back and read these chapters in a long time so I may be wrong or have something mixed up so feel free to correct me if I'm wrong :D

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2017 8:21 AM Title: The Things We Do For Love

Kaylee is a true heroine! Bravo!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 4:03 PM Title: Heat of the Moment

1. I love the throwback to the chapter where Kaitlyn tried to get Drake up their sister's ads, nice touch and shows consistency

 

2. You keep saying "simulate" when it should be "stimulate" just a heads up:)

 

3. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 9:25 AM Title: Kaitlyn, the Witch

Damn this was a hot chapter! Wished there was a bit more detail, but still a good read!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 9:03 AM Title: The Dragons Come Out at Night

Lmao. I love how he mistakenly fucks himself over 😂👌🏼 good shite right there. Short chapters,  but certainly worth the read!

Reviewer: SoinaGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2017 7:59 PM Title: Wake up bro!

SHALLOWLY want my character to be shrunk. It doesn't matter to me, only if it is convenient to the plot. Oh and can my person NOT be a naughty bitch like Christina (Thumbs up good chapter bro)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 3:22 AM Title: Briefing

This chapter felt long, I like it.

When the group walked in on Ricky and Drake, you mentioned "Tom and Ricky looked on over" when it should have been Drake and Ricky. Hmm. I guess you are already mistaking me as the shrunken guy already. :)

And yes! I DEEPLY want my character to be shrunken. Not only shrunken, but found by a naughty woman too (like Christina). Actually, I think you already know what I want, so I will stop right there.

Shusha is an interesting character. Like a female version of The Rock. If Jessica's plan doesn't work, plan B is just to send Shusha in to get the guards.

Well, there are so many things happening in this plan, so something is bound to not got according to plan. Good thing they went over back up plans.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol dang, I was trying my best not to mix up names xD. This chapter had so many characters talking to each other that I probably accidentally wrote it. Not to mention there is another story that I read on this site that has Tom as a protagonist xD. Oh well, I'll have to edit it in later, but you guys know exactly what I meant to put. And oh yeah, you're going to be shrunk. I just have to figure out a practical way for it to happen xD. 

Reviewer: JTH2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 1:33 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Me? Alone? With Kaylee? Just as things are getting interesting? Can't wait!

Author's Response:

Haha maybe! By the way, do you absolutely want to be shrunken? Or would you be fine with being your normal height? I know Tom is going to be shrunken, but I have to plan ahead to see how I'm going to get any others shrunken.