Date: December 27 2016 2:21 PM Title: Day 2. Chapter 5
Maybe we can get a plot twist in Holly grow too. The current size of the giantess makes it hard for too much interaction and story progression. Let's see what's going to happen next great story
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Holly died by the end of her POV (after all, it's not as if Vicki left anything standing of the city). I agree that her current size make it quite harder to have the plot advance and definitely make interaction almost impossible. I still have a couple of ideas on how to progress from here, but eventually I will need to introduce another plot twist. I hope you will enjoy it!
Date: December 19 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
For a story that is supposedly "lighter in tone", you sure haven't cut back on wholesale destruction. Though I suppose with this character, it can't be avoided.
V seems to be very depressing. The idea that she can't imagine being able to not live like she is now suggests she had a miserable life when evidence pointed to the contrary. It's not like she was suicidal. If anything, she was pretty well off.
And tell me... is the mention of why Eileen chose to surrender going to come into play?Because otherwise it seems like a hole in the story that could affect the ending.
Author's Response:
Well, I guess that we could associate "lighter in tone" to "less focused on plot and character development" or just "cheesier". I think "I, giantess" meets both criteria better than Side Effects ;)
And yep, with a character like Vicki, wholesale destruction just can't be avoided. Sometimes she causes it just for fun, some other times she is just making a point (no matter how stupid that point may be).
I don't think Vicki is depressing. I'd say that the best possible description for her would be narcissist. She has always been a person completely centered in herself and just worried about how great she looks and she is. For someone like that, being able to suddenly get the unlimited power of a God is the ultimate experience. No doubt she cannot imagine herself not having her current size and abilities, when they have given her the status she has achieved. In that context, it does not matter that her previous life was more than OK, since it was nothing in comparison with what she has just got.
Honestly, I don't have a well thought out plot for this one, as I had for Side Effects as I was writing (or I have for a couple other projects I'm working on). I just have some ideas. In a few of them, the reason why Eileen surrendered comes into play. In some others it does not. It is implied, in any case, that she surrendered and reduced herself out of her own will, since there was no way she could be forced into that, which would be pretty consistent with Vicki's story (only that Vicky is not planning to "wimp out" anytime soon).
Happy to hear back from you, BTW.
Cheers!
Date: December 17 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Speaking of jewellery, Vicki should make necklaces and hold entire cities, just above her cleavage.
You should introduce a little person such that we can get their pov , show us how massive Vicki is , that would help when writing a story with a giantess whose height is in miles.
I would also suggest the governments start fighting back, send entire armies or even nuke her to stop her. She is now so huge she has to be a global threat.
LOVING all of it, and I am happy to see you're continuing it.
Author's Response:
Well, I would not bet for those cities to last too long... the hardships of travelling just above the cleavage of a 10-mile girl must be high...
I've got the feedback about introducing a third person's POV from other people, as well. I'm trying to think about what to do. So far, the story has been exclusivly in first person, so this would require a change of pace. It may help, though. I'll see what I can think of.
Governments will start fighting back soon enough. They already did, actually, by the end of Day 1, when she easily defeated the Air Force attack. No doubt, governments will resort to more extreme measures soon enogh. There has been no threat to the world like Vicki in the past (Kelly, at her highest moments, was waaay less dangerous).
I'm happy that you are enjoying it. I never wrote this story with too many expectations. It was more of a divertimento than anything else. I'll try to keep it interesting though. It has become a fun and interesting way to keep posting and getting feedback as I write some other longer, plot-driven stories, like Side Effects.
Please, keep letting me know what you think!
Cheers!
Date: December 13 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yes!! Make the tiny men as part of your jewelry even more!! Bracelet, necklace, everything!! Very powerful!!
Author's Response:
Yes, that's a type of scene that I think works very well :)
It was fun to write, too.
Cheers!
Date: December 13 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
How about a chapter when you're wanting sex and having a hundred or so people all over your body as you lay down? Ordering them to make love to you wherever they are on your body. Just an idea. I love the story so far!!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi!
I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. The next few chapters were already written, so I've you've got to them you'll see that there is plenty of sex but the scenes are a little different from the ones you are suggesting.
I hope that you still like it, though!
Please, keep letting me know what you think.
Cheers!
Date: December 08 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am really glad to see this updated but I hope she doesn't grow anymore, 10 miles can really restrict the ways she can interact with the little people. You should have some pov of the people on the ground, then it'll show us how large and imposing she really is.
Author's Response:
I'm happy to see that you like "I, giantess" continued.
To be very honest, I made Vicki grow as a way to conclude the story, but I had no plans to write about her at 10 miles in height. Actually, I had not really made my mind up on whether I should continue on a day 2. I decided to go on because of the feedback I had got, many of it actually asking to keep Vicki at giga size. The qualitative feedback was confirmed when I posted a survey on my DA profile and the majority of the responses asked to have the story continued with Vicki travelling around the world at 10 miles.
This was a problem... since I'm actually not a huge giga fan and I was not sure that I would be able to write about giga. As you, I mostly enjoy writing about interaction, which is very hard to do with a 10 miles giantess. I decided to "accept the challenge" and give it a try, though. If any, "I, giantess" is the story that allows me to do more trials, since it's the lightest one in tone.
I also thought about the POV, but the truth is that the entire story has been written in first person and I'm afraid taht trying to move to one of the little people's point of view might diverge too much from the original intent.
I do not anticipate Day 2 to be overly detailed or even long, since the lack of interaction kind of limits the options quite a lot. I will try to explore the different possibilities of her current size as an experiment, though, maybe to learn in case I want to use any of the techniques in case I decide to go giga into one of my more "conventional" (not to call them serious) giantess stories.
Let's see how it goes. I'd love hearing your feedback about the results as I progress.
Cheers!
Date: October 29 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
She needs to get bigger and talk about her feet some more.
Author's Response:
10 miles is not enough? ;p
Date: October 23 2016 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really digging the mile high giantess scenes , she's so powerful and sexy altogether.
Author's Response:
Thanks! They are pretty crazy to write (I guess that also to read), but enormously fun. With Vicki I can do some of the stuff my "more standard" giantess characters cannot do, so it's fun to experiment :)
Date: October 23 2016 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love the destruction. I'm wondering where you are going with this, but so far I love it!
Author's Response:
Well, the truth is that the story has got into some sort of climax, so while it's the craziest part to write it's also getting into a cul-de-sac. Next chapter will close the current story arc (and craziness will get to the limit, I believe...). I'm still making my mind up on how to open a new arc up (or whether to do it). I have some ideas, but suggestions are very welcome :)
Date: October 23 2016 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome! Love her powers and power.
Author's Response:
Thanks! This story is a little crazy but very fun to write, actually!
Date: October 13 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just jumped in and read chapter 3, I'm really digging the story so far! I love your wicked and playful giantess!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
It's encouraging to hear that you are enjoying the story, especially coming from someone in the community I respect as much as you! I hope you will continue enjoying what's written of the story. I'm still working on more.
Please, keep letting me know what you think.
Cheers!
Date: October 10 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Simply put, Vicki is so hot :)
Author's Response:
She is, isn't she?
I hope that you are enjoying the story!
Date: September 12 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
FUn story! I know I've been on the sidelines a bit, but I've been here with each chapter (which ill go back and review each one). I like how she basically has no restraint. She just loves flaunting her power (do I notice a theme in your stories ;) ? )
Author's Response:
Thanks! This is a different story concept, cheesier than Side Effects, but very fun to write (and hopefull to read). I'll be looking forward to your detailed reviews!
Vicki really has no restraint. That's the "beauty" in her character (at least to me as a writer, since it enables me to do almost any crazy thing I can think of). As for giantess flaunting their powers... I agree it's a theme in my stories, but then again, what is a giant young woman with infinite power to do? ;)
Cheers!
Date: August 19 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
And why oh why does the army never show up on time?
I take it this will be a more conventional giantess storyline?
Author's Response:
In a story like this? I'm afraid the army will not show up until the story is in a cul-de-sac and it needs the army to get unstuck. If by conventional storyline you mean that I will not take care to have a carefully set-up plot to justify rampage scenes... yes, you're right, that's the intent for this story. It was kind of a divertimento and I ended up posting it I don't know why...
Date: August 19 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Sigh)
Why is it that your giants are always so self-centred? Not that it is a bad thing per say, but your last story (last one I read) involved severe cases of megalomania (Side Effects).
And while I would normally appreciate DC references, you shouldn't compare your giant's strength to Superman because his is limitless. Instead, use Giganta or Garganta both of which are Giant characters. Just a suggestion.
Author's Response:
Hello! Welcome back! (I've missed your comments)
Well, to give the short answer: I guess that anyone with mild ego issues would become very self-centered after growing into a giantess.
Having said this: Lisa was not self-centered. Kelly was and Casey... well, she was just a psycho. Vicki and this story are meant to have a much lighter tone than Side Effects, though. As I mentioned in the intro, it's a story meant for fun, without too many intentions to develop the plot or the character. This is why I introduced the comic super-powers as well. In this context, Vicki is as stereotypical as a giantess can be, with the added benefit of the super-powers and the touch of explaining the story first person. I don't intend to have too much realism in this story... it's meant to be kind of comical, if you will.
As for the DC reference: the one that referred to her powers as Superman's is Vicki. I can tell you this: she is not interested in comics, so she made the mistake in association, but she does not care. To her, Giganta or Garganta are probably unknown characters, so it would not feel right to have her think about someone she does not know. Superman is probably as far as her super-hero knowledge goes, hence the reference.
Cheers!
Date: July 26 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome. Its like a story dedicated to the sexy Kelly.
I like the fact that a giant woman has some honest to god super powers.
Her gushing over the pop star was something I could absolutely see happening if some random hottie grew to epic proportions. Would be sexy as hell if she was also infatuated with a female celebrity.
Great story by the way. Can't wait to see more.
aaron
PS if you're taking requests, I'd like to see her somehow force people to get a bath ready for her. Would be something to read about them trying to clean her. Then possibly giving her perfume or lotion along with a manicure and pedicure to complete the cleansing.(also waxing should be considered, lol)
Author's Response:
Hey Aaron,
Long time without talking to you. To be fair to Kelly, she never got so destructive so soon. She was trying to be a little bit more mindful as she played with the city after growing through the hotel. Vicki is not cruel, but she just does not give a shit who dies as she is having fun with her newfound stature and powers.
The tone I'm using in this one is quite different to Side Effects on purpose. It's meant to be lighter, for a more cartoonish type of story. I hope that you are enjoying it.
Were you familiar with Eileen, the original story it's inspired on? What do you think of the super powers (which one is your favorite, is there one that feels off)?
Vicki is straight (for the moment), but who knows what can happen when you have someone as cocky as her suddenly have all the possibilities in the world?
There is much more to come.
Cheers!
PS I'm taking requests. I'm not sure how I can make the bath fit in, but I'll definitely give it a thought
Date: July 26 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice story. I like your way of writing :) Keep on!
Author's Response:
Thank you! There is quite more of it coming, so I hope that you will continue enjoying. Please, keep letting me know what you think!
Date: July 25 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, lie where it's going, but as mentioned in the story, some foot worship would be much appreciated. Some butt and breast worship would be great too.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm in the process of writing a worshipping scene, although I'm not sure it will be exactly what you are expecting. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story, though :)
Date: July 23 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well the formatting was off and Vicki didn't seem too well developed at the start, kind of all over the place but your next chapters managed to clean it up and give us something better.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. The truth is that in Chapter 1 I tried to pay homage to Eileen, maybe a little too much, since I re-used the same wrong formatting that was used in there. I decided to fix in in Chapter 2 and I guess that once I had gone over the first few lines I ended up adjusting the character a little more, even it I don't mean to have a too well developped character in this story.
The truth is the story is meant to be light in tone and quite a lot of set pieces put together with a looser plot than what's usual in my previous stories. It's more a "just for fun" type of story. I'm glad that part of it seems to be coming out alright, though.
Please, keep letting me know what you think.
Cheers!
Date: July 22 2016 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
First chapter was alright but you've really made the story come into its own with the next few. Well done!
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad you like it and that you see it improving :)
I'm curious about your perception. What was the difference that made you e joy the last chapters more than the initial one?
Also, being this story an experience and with you being such a good writer and advisor in these topics, I wanted to ask you for your feedback on the approach and tone of this story vs side effects.
Cheers!