Date: November 21 2016 7:37 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Maybe take some time for Oliver to get caught, make the girls frustrated and figure a way out from the collage of info he stumbles upon in meandering around fate, make this an adventure story, not an interaction story
Author's Response:
Hmm, there is probably a happy somewhere in there. We'll see how this progress. thanks for your input!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2016 6:49 PM Title: A Brooklynn dodger
Excellent baseball pun!!!
Author's Response:
How about an inside the park homerun? O-:
[Report This]Date: November 21 2016 3:22 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Hey-hey! LT's in the house. Welcome back!
The rhyme scheme was a little off, though. Half a star deduction. ;-)
Date: November 20 2016 4:26 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
Cam! Cam! He's our man! If Duggernaut can't have him fulfill our wildest fantasies, no one can!
Author's Response:
Whew, that's a lot to put on Duggernaut - good thing I've got big shoulders :)
[Report This]Date: November 20 2016 7:01 AM Title: Back to Work
I love you double-entendre-filled banter! Although, when it comes to verbal games of cat-and-mouse, Vesper is clearly more expert at being the former.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2016 3:24 PM Title: Back to Work
Can we all just admire how sexy Vesper is. I mean, wow, I wish my boss was like that. I wouldn't file a complaint in the slightest. I would embrace it and maybe take it to the next level.
She put her hot breath on him, she put her hands on his shoulders. She wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him into her. She pressed her sexy body into is, letting the contact increase as she wrapped him. She even put her teeth on his ear. I have no idea why it's sexy, but to me it's super sexy. It's one of those weird things that I like.
End notes are funny. Cam's situation is defiantely a dream in my book. Being surrounded by giantess women who want to play with you sounds like my total fantasy. (Well, one of them.)
Oliver's next Roomate: Duggernaut. Lol! What if, you put yourself in a story?!! This seems like the ideal spot. It would be tedious to write your long name all the time, but I think there would be no better roomate for Oliver other than Duggernaut himself.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2016 11:54 AM Title: Back to Work
Starting to get good, let's see where you take this!
[Report This]Date: November 18 2016 9:14 AM Title: Don't Sweat the Small Stuff
Gts-interaction, at last!
Way to go, Dug. :-)
Date: November 18 2016 12:21 AM Title: Don't Sweat the Small Stuff
Hmm, so I guess Sersei wasn't exactly kidding when she mentioned an obligation to their mother, with her planning to sell him out like that from the begining. And man, gotta feel for the guy, I mean if you wanted a way to break a guy down look no further. I'm kinda hoping Olivier gets to play hero eventually but for now, the fun starts.
Author's Response:
It would be a knife in the heart kind of betrayal for Cam from his sister and his mom, but yep, let the games begin!
Date: November 17 2016 10:33 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
I can't wait to read about the adventures Cam is about to have. Please more!
Author's Response:
On it's way!
[Report This]Date: November 17 2016 9:08 PM Title: Don't Sweat the Small Stuff
I call this "welcome to heaven".
A new life as a little toy to these sexy giantesses and these girls are claiming him, one after another so they can play, all day, everyday.
Also, there is no chance of escape, he is not property of these sexy girls, wow! This is amazing!
I would so want to switch lives with Cam right now. Imagine waking up to hot giantesses wondering if you were ready to play and the best part is that they all want to have a piece of you and there is nothing you can do to stop it! Yes!
Man, this story just got so much better!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 8:20 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story
Of course, the rest of us know what really happened to Cam. I just hope Sersei is touched by how genuine Oliver's concern for her brother really is.
Author's Response:
Mmm, maybe...
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 1:37 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story
Hmmmm. Well, since I know where this story is going, I can't wait for Cam next chapter.
If I was Oliver, I would show uneasiness to Sersei and make her know that I don't feel safe around her. She will question it, and then I explain why it looks sketchy and either she tells the truth or delivers a much more convincing lie.
Well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
He has no reason to doubt Sersei, besides, her presence messes with his logical thought...
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 1:23 PM Title: Sersei's Cover Story
Feel like I stepped into an episode of Lost. I like the mystery and adventure. Your slow reveal of Cam's true size I have a feeling is going to be epic.
Author's Response:
I hope it lives up to expectation, :O
Date: November 05 2016 2:55 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Carycomic,
It's a shoebox! Why? Well, Duggernaut referenced Jessica's sorority from Tom's story in this story and now he is referencing the shoebox story with a shoebox in this story! It makes sense!
Author's Response:
Very clever...
[Report This]Date: November 05 2016 2:18 PM Title: Morning After, Cam Awakens
Uh-oh! Cam is either in the second floor bedroom of a dollhouse (with only a detachable roof for the entrance); or, a shoe box.
Date: November 05 2016 1:21 PM Title: Morning After, Cam Awakens
Ah, this chapter explains everything. (Almost everything.)
Cam got shrunk. Love his reaction to the Oreos. Great job in describing the size comparison too. I was having difficulty visualizing his "room". Sounded like some makeshift doll house but I'm not even sure.
So Oliver did not shrink, but Cam did. I guess that difference between 2 and 3 ribbons. Cam is most likely in the Omega Pi house, maybe stuck in the playroom. Cam is also branded which is very interesting. Does he still have the ribbons?
I'm eager to hear what Sersei has to say to Oliver about Cam.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: November 03 2016 11:47 AM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Cam is gone, but not from Oliver's memory. Question is, do others know about Cam or is Oliver the only one?
This could be one of two things:
1) Reality has been altered, and Cam was never a normal student.
2) Reality has not been altered, and they simply took Cam's stuff to his new room, and they were very meticulous about it.
We also don't know if Cam is going to be in the sorority house full time, or if he'll be allowed to become normal sized and go to class.
There's also the question of Oliver's job. When he gets shrunk, will he be restored to work there or will he have to quit the job?
However, Oliver was presumably shrunk that night. Could it be that Cam is shrunk full time and Oliver will be shrunk occasionally?
Author's Response:
With the GTS content coming soon, readers will have a clearer picture of what is occuring. Well, at least that's the plan.
Date: November 02 2016 9:55 PM Title: First Time Away From Home
@Carycomic,
Oh no. Not the sorority idea. Its spreading.
Author's Response:
A house full of nubile hot girls? The more spreading the better...
[Report This]Date: November 02 2016 7:28 PM Title: The Morning After, Oliver Awakens
Moral of the chapter? Never drink anything that might leave you Omega Pi-eyed.
Seriously, though: I like the mysterious cliff-hanger! We readers know, just from this story's presence here, what most likely happened the rest of that night before. But, gradually seeing the flashback through the eyes of the still-mystified protagonist is a plot gimmick that is rarely exercised, here. And I find your use of it, with this story, refreshing.
In fact, I'll go one step further and say that this whole story being centered around the titular sorority nicely compensates for the absence of such a plot gimmick (re: Jessica Lindholm) within TOM'S STORY!!
Author's Response:
Pi-eyed, nice. I would have also accepted Omega Pi-ckled. There has been a considerable drag and story to get here and i appreciate your commentary surrounding the usee of plot devices to msintain an element of suspense (even though as your say, readers will have a pretty good idea where its going) it was the use of Omega Pi for Jessica's sorority that prompted this story.