[Report This]Date: February 27 2018 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Been a lurker of this story for around a year but never got the chance to login and review. I must say that this GTS/Shrink story is one of the best I've ever read, and the character build up is amazing. Every chapter is been very interesting to read, and your writing skills are quality.
10/10
Author's Response:
I appreciate you taking the time to write such kind words!
I hope your review encourages other lurkers to send messages about the chapters and things they like about the story, it gives me more motivation and to write things based on peoples interests. Thanik you!
Date: January 12 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Hi
very very very good story
i love miranda character very much
Author's Response:
More Miranda and Ana on the way!
Date: January 05 2018 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 32 - A Choice for Breakfast
Hey! Glad to see you back. Hope all is well with you irl. Nice chapter. It's kinda nice seeing Lacy and Jessica becoming friends. You wouldn't think an outcast and a popular girl would get along. I felt the burn when Miranda told Lacy she couldn't use the shower anymore lol.
Hope all is well and Happy New Years.
Author's Response:
I always intended them to become friends, even when writing the little jabs at eachother's looks in the very beginning of the story. They defintely steal the show sometimes.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
ITS BACK! One of my favorite stories, read the chapter over and noticed the new part with Ana i love her character so much. Glad to see your back. Cant wait :)
Author's Response: Ana is going to be the focus of a huge upcoming chapter. Hope everyone enjoys it!
Date: December 29 2017 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Training for Pleasure
The biggest nuke they ever builded? wow .. dunno how reduced a nukes effect is when scaling abour 10 miles tall targets but a look at the castle bravo crater tells enough.. and even though if the temperature of a few thousand degree celsius isnt boilding the blood in her body and vaporizing her skin, the alpha radiation alone should kill her so close to her unprotected pussy. At her very least this should have caused her some serious pain but that she doesnt even feel as if sunburned .. is a joke sorry.
Author's Response: Hahah I think it’s pretty funny honestly. I know, every once in a while I want to put some type of realism in a story like this, but then I realized it’s just not possible.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
These interludes are a nice break and fun. Can't wait until the next update!
Author's Response: I can’t either!
Date: December 28 2017 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
One of my favourite series! Thanks for updating!
I am looking forward to more Jessica and Lacy! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, they seem to make a pretty good duo!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Interlude IV
So glad to see this back in the "Most Recent" section. Even more glad to hear about weekly updates!
I love Lacy's wicked ideas. That was a good long chapter. Eager to find out what happens to Ashton City (and maybe Kiyoko's snack).
Keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I actually made a mistake uploading the newest chapter. Only 3/4ths made it, I posted the rest this morning.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Been lurking this story for a while. Just thought I'd drop by and say that it's one of the best GTS stories I've ever read!
Extremely creative and detailed, and I'm very much enjoying it :) 10/10!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I really try to put detail into each chapter, sometimes it gets slow because of that, I know, but I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Don't be a stranger, write more reviews and let me know what you like!
[Report This]Date: September 21 2017 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 30 - War
I figured Jessica would win. Not like that though. Wonder what happens now? Jessica is going to love having new subjects. Can the girls do anything to stop her? Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: I always intended her to win, just thought Ana messing it up would be a turning point for everyone's relationship with her. What'll happen next? Good god, I wouldn't want to live in Ashton City, I will tell you that much.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2017 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Training for Pleasure
Amazin story! I love Anastázia
Just One question, shall Isabelle aparear again?
Thank you
Author's Response: Isabella will return, I've always been planning it :)
[Report This]Date: July 30 2017 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Training for Pleasure
War is coming! What a fun chapter. Love when I see updates for this story. Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
War is just around the corner!
Date: July 30 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
boringly texting your friends, while scaring of a mighty army of tanks, planes and hardened veterans with just wiggling you toes.
Now thats what i call a true display of power.
Lol. If even a nuke only serves sexual satisfaction for Jessica, it doesnt look good for the city.
That was there last hope. Jessica is indestructable for them.
There only purpose in life is to serve and entertain a 20 year old girl.
Very good chapter! This story still had a lot of potential.
Im also eager for your other story.
As long as it involves tiny civilizations being dominated by beautifull Woman, you got my attention sir.
Author's Response:
Oh, my new story will for sure! Glad you liked the new chapter!
Date: July 15 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Sabotage
Nice to see this updated. Hope to see more of your work soon.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I will finish this and start to expand into other ideas I've always wanted to work on
Date: July 12 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Still hoping for more submission and worshiping.
The girls have absolute power over the cities, especially over the micro countries.
They can make them do anything they want. Turn them into little slaves, make them worship her like a god.
Some of the cities still dont realize they are just playthings and think they can argue like they are equals. That misplaced attitude can easely be broken.
Serve your goddess or die by your goddess
Date: July 11 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Sabotage
I'd be so disappointed if Lacy just turned her shower on and washed away the bathtub land! But the possibility of Lacy crawling around the kitchen and whatnot on the hunt for whatever civilization she could find sounds exciting.
Mildly sad that Ana didn't fuck up Toy Town (not really though because that means Jess still gets to (maybe)).
Hoping for more soon! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Toy Town has a much worse fate
Author's Response:
Toy Town has a much worse fate
Date: June 11 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Interlude III
I'm personally hoping the girls can get past their egos and start having more fun with their cities, also I wanna see if other dorms have cities or countries transplanted into them. love this, keep it up <3
Author's Response: A few egos might get shattered after the war. Thanks for the support!
Date: June 11 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Interlude III
Yes, I'm your 50th reviewer! Miranda dressing up for the war that the CITY has to fight was a cute scene lol. She really doesnt realize the destruction she's caused.
Author's Response: Happy 50th reviewer! Hahaha Miranda, so intelligent, yet so dumb at the same time, that dissonance is going to get a lot of people killed. I'm glad you liked the dress up thing, I actually almost cut it from the story completely.
Date: June 10 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
great
very curious about this war.
And seems like Miranda secretly loves the dominating role.
thats more interesting :)
It would mean disaster for miranda's city if they fall in the hands of Jessica.
She aint merciful to her own city, let alone the city of her enemy.
Author's Response: That makes this war so important, I'm trying my best to write the best outcome for the audience.
Date: May 29 2017 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 26 - The Enlightenment Age
I love this story. I am reluctant to add an idea, espicially one you may have ciome up with, but it might be cool to show their tiny Priestess, Elle, transported to an even tinier city, like the one in the tub, where she's maybe a thousand feet tall, or maybe a mile.
Author's Response: Aww damn. You called a future chapter of mine! Nice job, I really hope the audience likes it. Thanks for the review, your story is actually one of my personal favorites.