Well this chapter was excellent. Eve has such a rich backstory that subtly hints at the present character. That's oone of the positives of this story or any of your stories. Every character has a story and feels fully fleshed out. Precious Little Demons was literally structured on that and it made the story better. The only gripe I have is that everyone hasn't gotten the same amount of attention yet. Waiting for Ebon's story most of all! 

Well, this was certainly unexpectedly fast... I actually read it the thay it was uploaded but couldn't review until now, sorry for that.

Eve and Abby get to know each other even more, I found it a bit fun how the small one thought Eve was drinking blood and it was rather cute the vampire reaction when asked if she was the one that cooked. Also, Eve surely know how to set the mood.

Then the twins come in, poor little ones. Though, they might have enjoyed the ride...

The song part was a bit sad but I'm sure Abby is really thankful for that, Eve hit bullseye there. But, not so much with the next part. It was a really powerful scene, showing a side of Eve which we only saw in glimpses before. I know for sure Brook didn't mean to get the vampire that mad, I suppose not even she expected the Eve to be that... Nervous? Anxious? She certainly was very expecting about the date and Abby in general.

I wonder how she got to the state that Abby means so much for her, why is it that the fact that she can love a human is so amazing... I suppose this might be revealed in the next chapters but I'm certainly intrigued about it, about how she became that... Wary? With other beings and specially humans.

I couldn't stop reading after Eve snapped, I was worried about Eve, about Abby and about Brook. I hope the mermaid doesn't gets it too hard after all this. I mean, surely she'll be fine now but Eve might get her revenge somehow lol.

I liked how Eve revealed her red eyes in the dark, for some reason.

And now Abby knows some more of Eve and it seems she will even more revelations later on. I wonder if she feels relieved somehow? At the start of the chapter she talked about Eve as if she was in a totally different level than her. Now that she knows the vampire isn't almighty and that even she has flaws, I wonder if Abby thinks they're even closer now.

So yes, great chapter.

See ya~

Oh, visiting family can take a real chunk of time. Having no writing time can be stressing but do please try to enjoy your vacations ^^

I wonder if Kari's reaction towards Abby's little adventure has a deeper meaning, like if she had some encounter with alcohol in her past in some way. In any case, is nice to see how much close they're now. Maybe their little chat has some influence in Abby's future choices?

The poison part was a bit sad but that just shows how much Abby's mentality has changed since the start of all this, and it was a kind gesture of Eve to take away the page, even if she had acted out of her own hatred and not really to protect her, not completely sure which for now. "Bathed in someone spit" is an interesting way to put it, I didn't really think about it before hehe.

I feel like there's some kind of clue in Brook's initial behaviour but I'm not totally catching it. Anyway is nice to see her again, her way of teasing Eve is really fun. Really builds up excitement for what might come next.

Somehow I felt Eve was cuter in this chapter, is really adorable how she made preparation to have a date with Abby!! The way she silenced the little teenager was also charming. By the way, I wonder if she makes the dresses herself or get some familiar to do it or something, Eve trying to sew a miniture dress seems like a cute picture.

This time I found the chapter at a good time and could read it earlier than usual :D

I guess Abby know has a better idea of why Eve was dealing with Poppy the way she was. Congrats to her for not losing it, should've taken a lot of will power. The way the teenager and the oni interact was quite fun, I really hope to see more of these two. Poppy's reaction when Abby ended up naked was great. And it seems Abby is getting to enjoy more her new size, interesting.

Poppy's past... The change in the oni's behaviour, how she interrupted herself to drink, it built a really fitting mood for her tragic memories. About the past itself, I suppose we will never get to know what happened there exactly. I would like to think is all a misunderstanding but I guess that would be too much wishful thinking, that betrayal and to a girl that young... Poppy's tears and the way she asked Abby for answers hit me a bit hard.

Abby's mind keeps exapanding as she get more info of the world she lives in. It'll be interesting to see the final result all this lead her to and what she'll choose to do with her life later on. Also, I hope she won't blame herself too much for what other humans did...

Abby trying to hug Poppy is way too cute.

Aaaand Ebon out of nowhere. That I didn't expect, and it seems she wasn't ready to see Abby either. Why are Onis just B class again? I suppose Ebon is a lot weakened after her fight with Eve but the "Not even she hit me as hard part" makes me think that maybe Poppy could have dealt with Ebon that time. Though, Eve did mention in that fight that the dragon was weaker than before, I suppose it might be because of that.

And now that we've seen more of Poppy... I really like her! A lot more than I expected! Always looking for fun stuff and ways of entertainment is something I agree a lot with. Her personality is also really pleasant, she's just awesome and funny! The serenity she showed while telling her past and then crying in the end got a couple of tears out of me and makes me hope for a better future for her. She was badass while fighting with Ebon! The loyalty she shows towards her new friend is also admirable. Lastly, the fact that she's covering Abby in salty fluids might or might not be and extra bonus for me. About that last bit, I also found really fun the way Abby kept falling and slipping.

I guess the next chapter will be the "drinking party"?

See ya.

No need to apologize for the wait. I hope everything gets better on your side.

Well, that's a nice start. I always appreciate more of Cas. Is fun and charming seeing her jealous and trying her best for Abby. Though, I don't think I would mind some of that "rancid breath". Quite cute, pouting when the teenager got distracted.

And he rivality still goes on. I guess Eve got the upper hand in this round, she seem to be able to mess with Abby easily and the teenager seems to be more conscious around her. Though maybe the tiny feels more at ease with Casey? Anyway, whatever Eve has to do now seem intriguing. I'm at blank in this one, it might have to do with the way she gets energy but she said she would tell Abby about it later so that might not be that secretive. Also, since they're far from Casey by now, that means Abby is naked at this moment? By the way, typo with "ladder", I think.

So, Poppy. Since there's someone else that can shake Eve out of her usual behaviour. It was fun seeing her getting that frustrated while trying to give her message, even sending her flying. Good thing she's okay. Though, Abby might need some time before seeing that act again. And the little speech she gave about going against her if anything happens to Abby was amusing in many ways, showing her passion towards Abby, another aspect of her personality and simply the way she said it made me smile. Though, again, Abby might need some time to process what happened.

And about Poppy herself, I like her already. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, got high expectations for her. The personality she seems to have just looks quite fun, same with her speech pattern. And finally, I would like to remark, I want to believe that Abby fell face first into Poppy's navel :)

See ya.

Did I offend you, somehow? Just curious as to why your not answering my reviews.

No problem with your updates being a bit slow or a bit fast, just take your time and release the cahpter when you think is the best to do so.

Anyway, going into the chapter. The mystery of Abby's past just get deeper. I think the howl might be a clue but there's a lot of species that could do that. Certainly there're way less that can manipulate or survive on fire but I can't think of any right now. Also, Casey comforting Abby! >.<

I love to see how their relationship keeps growing, they seem closer each time. The imp are still very cute and Casey is getting better and handing them. Felt a bit bad about how she fooled them but they won't be too disappointed I think, if they ever realize what happened... H-hopefully they'll get something to make up for that.

A bit more into the different species' physiology is alaways interesting, I liked that bit of information about witches. And hopefully that's the only tax for using the time turning spell...

Wonder what is it that Abby's have to be able to command them. Though of course it isn't that powerful, everything would be easier that way. Maybe is just her aura as an older looking girl? Though it could easily have to do with the mysteries surrounding them.

I've also been wondering a lot what'll Abby choose to do when she "gains her freedom". Of course I would be glad if she decided to stay with the other girls but her thoughts should be in total disarray now. Sadly Casey misunderstood her intentions, hope that they can get clear with each other.

And well, clear or not they did got a nice moment together. Different from their first time, it made me happy to see they're both enjoying it his time. Great advance between Casey and her storeen (L)

See ya.

Loving the story man. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks man, :D

Pretty much the only story I check on for updates every day since there doesn't seem to be much else in the way of solid gentle content these days. Other than occasional grammar blips here and there I haven't much to say critically. Please keep up the good work, looling forward to next chapter!

I've told you before I look forward to any updates from you since precious little demons finished. I like your writing style and direction. You also put lots of effort into detail which is a huge plus for myself. You don't need a lot of reviews though to feel validated though in my opinion. I think read count is a big part as Well!

Keep it up man!