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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Beer Pong Problems

Fantastic addition! I vote for Christine, love the domination dynamic and it's clear deep down she likes it too.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Hmm. Interesting story so far. I like the size differences, so it seems like James is the size of an action figure, maybe 5 inches since Mandy held him in her hand comfortably.

While these girls seem lovely, I'm wondering if they have any hot moms that would also be interested in James. Also, if these girls are that tell, imagine their mother!

Even John's mom could be a factor. I know I'm really pushing this idea and the story just started, but since it's a possibilty, I will just throw it out there as a suggestion for now. I think that Leggy Leah is stuck in my head.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Amazing start, you built a really cool world! And the characters, super intriguing - especially this Christine girl, love her abrasive demeanor. Looking forward to this beer pong for sure!

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