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Reviewer: Lorraine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Seems like Christine is a little jealous of James's new relationship. I think she secretly has a crush on him but she's confused because she had never been attracted to a boy before. But she doesn't just want to be with James, she wants to OWN him.

Reviewer: Shaman4313 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 7: An Apple A Day Won't Keep Christine Away

James is so lucky. I would definitely sacrifice my self-respect to have what he has lol

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 7: An Apple A Day Won't Keep Christine Away

I'm starting to wonder if Christine goes both ways. I mean, one moment, she's teasing him to the point she seems to disdain him like she's a total bull-dyke. The next moment, she's acting jealous of his relationship with Krisi (as if she wants him for herself)! Either way, she definitely doesn't respect boundaries.

Author's Response: Disrespecting boundaries and dehumanizing those whom she considers to be worthless is basically her trademark. She's got every physical quality of a femme-dyke, except for the fact that she's dominant as fuck. She's never had sex with a man before but she has been known to taunt and belittle them. As for her possible bisexuality, I don't think she's quite sure yet. It could go... either way. Pun intended

Reviewer: DinaDonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: An Apple A Day Won't Keep Christine Away

It's weird how I kinda feel bad for James but at the same time I wish Christine would crush him into dust lol

Reviewer: Shaman4313 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Just found this story and I am LOVING it. Keep up the good work

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

London is alright, but since they met, I don't see the awe if they first met. I was expecting them to measure up and stuff and take their time realizing how small/big the other person is.

Stefani was a surprise for me. I like her. She is kinda flirty and I think she would enjoy having a tiny guy as her pet. Would love to see more of Stefani soon. Maybe this is where Kristi got her sexiness from.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: This chapter was mostly about the young devilish girls but some more enticing stuff will happen between London and James later on. Stefani is definitely a flirt, unintentionally. As for Stefani, we certainly have not seen the last of her. You can expect some mother/daughter fun soon if you know what i mean.

Author's Response: This chapter was mostly about the young devilish girls but some more enticing stuff will happen between London and James later on. Stefani is definitely a flirt, unintentionally. As for Stefani, we certainly have not seen the last of her. You can expect some mother/daughter fun soon if you know what i mean.

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Just realized that the description now says James "goes from Virgin to Squirtin" Genius. There is literally no better way to say it. Lmao

Reviewer: SinisterDeviant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

This is my favorite chapter for sure. Kristi wasn't very active, though. Maybe she doesn't want her friends to know how she feels about James?

You can see how Mandy is torn. Shes not sure wether she wants to be a decent person or succumb to her natural desire to dominate. She seems to look up to Christine, maybe she will end up being just like her.

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

This one gave me shivers... I have to agree, definitely the best one so far.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

To paraphrase an old nursery rhyme:

"James knows London.
London saw France.
James got squished
By Christine's underpants."

Reviewer: BigFootMacro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 5: Kristi's Clitoris

Loving this story. All the girls are very beautiful. Maybe they got tag team on James one time. And maybe he gets steppes on soon?

Reviewer: BackwoodsBen211 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: Beer Pong Problems

Another great chapter. I'm going to read the rest of the story right now

Reviewer: BackwoodsBen211 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Very nice. This story working great for me

Reviewer: BigFootMacro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kissable Kristi

The feet parts are the best part to me. Wish there were more. Hope James gets stepped on one of these days. Great story though

Reviewer: DinaDonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 5: Kristi's Clitoris

Kristi did an ok job but i really want Christine to destroy that little midget already

Cant wait for chapter 6!

Reviewer: DinaDonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

As a woman with a fetish for tiny men, this story really resonates with me. Christine is going to be my favorite character I think. I wish I could be as effortlessly powerful as her

Reviewer: JackVale1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: Meet my foot, little man

Very good. Liking this a lot

Reviewer: HellRaiser13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 5: Kristi's Clitoris

This is good stuff. Hoping for another chapter real soon! This is my favorite story going right now

Reviewer: HellRaiser13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: James's First Party

Impressive writing. There's so little going on in the first chapter, yet it's so exciting to james. I'm going to read the rest right now!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Kristi's Clitoris

I don't know how I missed this before. But, it's so well-written that I tore through all five chapters in one reading!
So, I'm definitely going to keep an eye out for chapter 6.

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