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Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2018 5:48 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

Omg. This story is freakin amazing!! Lots of booty and lots of gas lol and the vivid detail to this story is spectacular! If I could give this an 11 I would!! Please keep the chapters SUPER long and with lots of detail, booty, and GAS! lol maybe she'll order Mexican food... worse than chili haha 😈🍑💨

Author's Response: I’m glad you like it so far. There will be more scenarios to come, with a wide variety for everyone’s tastes, including a few that may never have been seen or explored before. At least one chapter or new story will be posted each week. Check back for more!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 6:57 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

Very nice! The dialgue between Chris and Shannon is well written and believable.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: I will always shoot for some amount of realism in my stories, despite their fictional nature. Check back each week for more!

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 2:50 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

love shannon's giant farting ass. please keep writing. maybe chris gets sexua awakening with her giant farts!



Author's Response: Technically, he already had his awakening with another older woman, but you’ll see just how much his attitude changes as he story progresses. Check back each week for new chapters!

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 2:45 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

this story is amazing please keep writing and updating this story. from your first fan chase



Author's Response: Plan to add new chapter(s) weekly. Will also post original “short” stories and other novels at a later date.

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