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Reviewer: QuietReading Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning.

Reviewer: test101010 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2019 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

You're really one of the best authors on this website. I was afriad you'd give up on this story and was delighted to see a new chapter. Please keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you, that means a lot and I'm hoping to do a lot more writing. Hope you enjoy

 

Reviewer: test101010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2019 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great one! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2019 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

*prays for a scene like the Estelle scene from Coming Home but with the mom*

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2019 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

love your stories, great start. i hope his mother uses him as a suppository.

Reviewer: Psn01 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2019 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start hope to see mother wearing him in her shoes

Reviewer: amazonianniall Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2019 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

So glad to see a new story from you!

I love seeing unaware stories with women who have more then a far share of extra weight in them so really looking forward to what's to come. 

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