Date: March 08 2024 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
So, it is at last the end ?
It makes now 5 to 6 years I follow this story !! One of my favourite !
If I could, I’d submit it for a movie adaptation, it would worth it !!




[Report This]Date: October 20 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Pilgrimage
The ending was worth the wait. Great work!
Author's Response:
I appreciate it!




[Report This]Date: July 16 2022 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Purges
I miss this beautiful story. One of my faves.




[Report This]Date: February 24 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 - New Arrivals
I am (almost) totally speechless.
Author's Response: Let me know more of your thoughts once you regain that capacity. ;-)




[Report This]Date: July 20 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Secret Goddess Discovered
I absolutely love this story, I hope that you seriously give it some thought to finishing this story, its been one of my favorites for years.
Oh and welcome back




[Report This]Date: March 19 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Secret Goddess Discovered
If she did that to a xenomorph, she'd probably get acid indigestion. ;-)
P.S.---Welcome home!
Author's Response: Glad to be back.




[Report This]Date: May 12 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Going Deeper.
:)))))))))) perfect! I love those fantsies! Keep on writing, please.




[Report This]Date: May 11 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Sweet Revenge
Poetic justice, indeed. And, thanks for not killing off Little Mike!
Author's Response: Thanks for your reading and support. I'm still undecided as to what his fate might be. He seems to have become somewhat superfluous to the needs of the story, so he may meet that fate sooner rather than later. Then again, perhaps he needs new attention.



[Report This]Date: January 11 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Reward
Hmmmmm! Why is she getting taller, indeed? The hypotheses you've presented are certainly food for thought.




[Report This]Date: October 21 2009 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - New Slaves
And, the (long-delayed) plot thickens!
Welcome back, dude.
Date: October 06 2009 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
interesting turn of events! Looking forward to more Karen worshiping!
Author's Response: You're quite welcome. I'm glad to show that I've just added another episode in the continuing story. Thank you for reading and for your comments. It's nice to know that I'm not alone in this enthusiasm.




[Report This]Date: June 10 2009 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Greater Power
Definitely, an unexpected plot twist.
Brilliant!




[Report This]Date: June 10 2009 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Law of Nature
Hmmm! Sounds like she's becoming a lot like Melissa from "Bugman Games."




[Report This]Date: June 10 2009 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Other Perspectives
Oh, I really hope she's teasing him with that "someday" stuff.
Btw: thanks for the resumption of this story.
Date: June 10 2009 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
I like where this is going. Very nice job of writing.
Date: January 25 2009 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Law of Nature
i love this becoming. i hope for a sequel ! thanks.
Author's Response: I'm happy to have finally done justice to you by adding another segment to the story.
Cheers
Date: December 30 2008 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
This is a fantastic story! This is just how I think it could really happen. Will you be writing more stories like these? I love the way he has accepted being her slave- scared but thrilled by it! keep up the excellent writing




[Report This]Date: December 29 2008 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
Love the story! I particularly like the whole firiend to slave/ girl to goddess transformation thing! hope you continue with some more chapters!




[Report This]Date: August 01 2008 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A new person on the scene.
Now, that's what I call a twist ending!
I was half-afraid it was going to be the cliche' where the installer happened to be a woman (which, even today is still a mostly-male field), who kidnaps the little man out of instant lust.
Thanks for proving me wrong. :-)
Date: April 14 2008 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help
Uhm! Is this chapter 2-b? Or, not 2-b?
Author's Response: Ha!
rnI thought I was editing the chapter, and then I found that not only was I not permitted to edit, the engine decided that I was entering a new chapter. I've aksed Jacen Solo to fix my error.