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Reviewer: Enoch Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2024 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

So, it is at last the end ? 

It makes now 5 to 6 years I follow this story !! One of my favourite !

If I could, I’d submit it for a movie adaptation, it would worth it !!

Reviewer: DLee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Pilgrimage

The ending was worth the wait. Great work!

Author's Response:

I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Nothing_Really13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2022 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Purges

I miss this beautiful story. One of my faves.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 - New Arrivals

I am (almost) totally speechless.

Author's Response: Let me know more of your thoughts once you regain that capacity. ;-)

Reviewer: tinyfootlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Secret Goddess Discovered

I absolutely love this story, I hope that you seriously give it some thought to finishing this story, its been one of my favorites for years.

 

Oh and welcome back

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Secret Goddess Discovered

If she did that to a xenomorph, she'd probably get acid indigestion. ;-)

P.S.---Welcome home!

Author's Response: Glad to be back.

Reviewer: playhh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Going Deeper.

:)))))))))) perfect! I love those fantsies! Keep on writing, please.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Sweet Revenge

Poetic justice, indeed. And, thanks for not killing off Little Mike!

Author's Response: Thanks for your reading and support. I'm still undecided as to what his fate might be. He seems to have become somewhat superfluous to the needs of the story, so he may meet that fate sooner rather than later. Then again, perhaps he needs new attention.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Reward

Hmmmmm! Why is she getting taller, indeed? The hypotheses you've presented are certainly food for thought.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 21 2009 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - New Slaves

And, the (long-delayed) plot thickens!

Welcome back, dude.

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

interesting turn of events! Looking forward to more Karen worshiping!

Author's Response: You're quite welcome. I'm glad to show that I've just added another episode in the continuing story. Thank you for reading and for your comments. It's nice to know that I'm not alone in this enthusiasm.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2009 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Greater Power

Definitely, an unexpected plot twist.

Brilliant!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 10 2009 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Law of Nature

Hmmm! Sounds like she's becoming a lot like Melissa from "Bugman Games."

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 10 2009 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Other Perspectives

Oh, I really hope she's teasing him with that "someday" stuff.

Btw: thanks for the resumption of this story.

Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2009 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

I like where this is going. Very nice job of writing.

Reviewer: 8cm50 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2009 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Law of Nature

i love this becoming. i hope for a sequel ! thanks.

Author's Response: I'm happy to have finally done justice to you by adding another segment to the story. Cheers

Reviewer: Boz Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2008 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

This is a fantastic story! This is just how I think it could really happen. Will you be writing more stories like these? I love the way he has accepted being her slave- scared but thrilled by it! keep up the excellent writing

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 29 2008 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

Love the story! I particularly like the whole firiend to slave/ girl to goddess transformation thing! hope you continue with some more chapters!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2008 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A new person on the scene.

Now, that's what I call a twist ending!

I was half-afraid it was going to be the cliche' where the installer happened to be a woman (which, even today is still a mostly-male field), who kidnaps the little man out of instant lust.

Thanks for proving me wrong. :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2008 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mike calls Karen for help

Uhm! Is this chapter 2-b? Or, not 2-b?

Author's Response: Ha!
rnI thought I was editing the chapter, and then I found that not only was I not permitted to edit, the engine decided that I was entering a new chapter. I've aksed Jacen Solo to fix my error.

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