[Report This]Date: October 22 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
Took me a while but better late than never. I know exactly what you mean, writing takes courage and patience... I have none, so I thank the heavens for blessing the world with people like you XD
About the latest chapter, Leah’s father really steals the show, forcing a full honest reaction even from Anna. And, yes, they all have serious issues - treating a meeting with there daughter’s as business trade is just sad.
But, we got to see the 4 once more stand up for Anna and even defend, in their own twisted sense, her status as a living being. Moreover, They proved They want her more than Money and that’s interesting because it got me curious about how far each one is willing to go to be with Poppy.
I would like Anna to give the giantessess some credit. They clearly care for her, even turning down their parentes offers. Which brings me to the aftermatch of what happened in this chapter.
First things first, 3 giantessess will be angry at Poppy for reacting the way she did, all except Leah. As unlikely as it might be, I am betting she will empathise more with Anna’s angry towards her father nasty low blow of using her own mother as bait. Leah is probabily familiar with the governor ways and be more understanding because of some bound feeling, and will get the others off Anna’s back.
There is also the problem with the tinies. What will be Anna’s reaction after seeing yet another carnage? Will she finally break? Or will she try to reason with the 4 and convince them not to take part in the parents madness? After all, the feast is just another move to smooth them laid by the governor.
But the most exciting is the file. It’s obvious the governor has information about all the hardships in Anna’s life, and the giantesses reaction to her past is another chance of bounding and being redeemed, at least a little, in her eyes.
Yes, I am gonna bet the 4 can be redeemed and trully love Anna... as warped as that might be it’s not impossible... I think... I hope... I don’t...know kkkkkk
Also, before I forget... DIE OLIVER! DIE! JUST DIE! WHAT A BORING CHARACTER!! Sorry, but I just find him infuriating as some sort of romantic end game for Anna, simply plain and annoying.
Sorry it’s not as detailed as some of my other theories, but it’s been a rough couple of weeks. Your chapter is one of the few good things that happened, loved Anna swearings. I didn’t realized before, but are you perhaps familiar with portuguese?
Author's Response:
Mr. In A suit, your hatred for Oliver will never not make me laugh. Though if I were in your shoes, I would probably view him as a hindrance also.
I also love how you see the giantesses as defending Annabelle--something she has yet to acknowledge. I can't say too much, but I'm really excited for the next few chapters.
As always, your predictions are fascinating. Sometimes your ideas are honestly better than what I have outlined. And I am familiar with Portuguese, but not enough that didn't have to check with some friends and google translate, before I wrote the dialogue.
That's the thing about making characters ethnically diverse, I end up having to double check everything. I'm not complaining though. When Annabelle's familial background is delved into a bit, it'll have (hopefully) all been worth it.
Thanks again for your review, they're always so interesting to read.
[Report This]Date: October 21 2021 7:37 PM Title: The Beginning
Yet another amazing chapter as is expected of this story, once again I reiterate that this story rivals curious girls and if by far the best story on this whole site. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter, as much as I love story the promise of action always gets me excited.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tigerchevy!
I'm glad you're still enjoying it. I know the plot is getting kind of dense right now, but I hope that you'll enjoy the ride!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2021 7:36 PM Title: The Beginning
I can't really reply to people or edit my comments on this website which is weird, but I wanted to add that Adamx's comment made me realize the readers are probably divided between wanting Zoey to punish the Formidable Four and wanting the Formidable Four to punish Zoey.
I'm on the formidable four's side because to be honest I think Zoey is a lot more fucked up than they are, probably because her bullying feels more real than shrinking related stuff, but also because she went above and beyond to make Anabelle suffer, and she just seems to me like the one that should be punished. I don't know is probably my favoritism talking, because at the end of the day they are both making Anabelle suffer because they "love" her. At the end of the day I wouldn't say either is the good side, they are all equally selfish.
With that said, team Leah or Harper ftw
Author's Response:
Yeah, I mean personally I love them all, but I understand that everyone has their favorites. You raised some interesting and astute points about everyone's "love' for Annabelle. I honestly cannot wait to for you guys to see the story progress!
[Report This]Date: October 19 2021 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Excellent dream sequence you really feel for Anna when everything started falling apart for her and the giantesses came for her.
I was right in my earlier idea of them being in an Area 51 type place given the power of the people involved.
The parents make the Giantess's personalities so much clearer with the cold, calculating nature they show towards even their own daughters at times.
I'm curious to see where you go with Anna's mother, I thought at first she was in the box but that might have been too obvious.
I have to say the pieces are falling into place for Zoey to take back what's hers and destroy some great evils along the way.
Author's Response:
Adam I gotta say, I love your stan energy for Zoey. She's also one of my favorites (though I'm not sure if for the same reasons).
Anna's mother is a really fascinating character. I'm interested to see what you guys will think of her. Now whether you'll be seeing her through flashback or alive in the flesh...who can say?
Thanks for commenting again Adam, your reviews always give me good insight.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2021 5:07 PM Title: The Beginning
I'm a long time lurker. I have posted like, one or two reviews I think?but nothing as in depth as this wonderful story deserves, so I thought I wanted to give it a shot so you won't think no one is reading you. This is truly one of the best stories on this website. As in, is currently the only one I keep tabs on, and I try to recommend it to as many people as possible. I check on this a lot for new updates and get so excited when there is a new one!
So the parents appeared, finally. Molly's parents are stern, and strict so is not a wonder that Molly is actually deeply insecure. Naomi's are very formal and probably traditional, which probably is related to her being so punk, as a way to stablish her identity as an independent person. Leah's are just what I expected, specially her dad, who is a very hard case of like father like daughter. Ngl he ended up being my favorite of the parents, so if you don't mind I'm going to imagine he is hot, for my own personal enjoyment. Is a surprise that Harper seems to have the best relationship with her parents. They both seem to love her, her dad teached her self defense, and I don't see as much conflict with them as I see with the other girls and their parents. Harper has gone up on my favorite list so hard she is now very close to Leah as my favorite.
At this point I kind of want for the girls to know Anabelle's past, so they can bond, probably?and be on the lookout for Zoey if that is even included in the information they have. But hey, I'm a firm vocal supporter of an ending where Anabelle stays a pet and imprints on one of the girls, so there you go xDDDD I would be so happy with a harem ending or where Anabelle ends up with Leah or Harper like so, so much.
I'll be looking forward to the next update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Naoru! Your kind words mean a lot.
I love how you pegged all of the characters down cold. The parents are a lot of fun to write, and we'll be seeing some more of them since the FF have lost their bet to go away for the holidays (and ofc Warren is hot). I'm glad you like the characters so much! Based on the reviews I get, Leah and Harper tend to be at the top of the rankings.
I wonder if their popularity will only get stronger or weaker when the future chapters come out...who can say :)
Thanks again Naoru, for the review.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2021 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
While reading this ch. 20, I confess I felt like Anna and I just couldn’t believe Naomi's madness was... making sense! LOL!! It started with a very romantic mood and by the Middle I was like “WTF?! I can’t agree with her!”. Yes, I was preety much feeling as guilty as Anna by the end of the chapter. And that is the result of very good writing.
Good work with the moonlight and Naomi’s description. Anna is scared and confused about the changes that keep on happening with her and the giantesses – in a short span they went from sadistic killers to her owners and now to some kind of deranged guardians – and she is conflicted about how to react. So, she is making a escape her top priority.
Annabelle questioning if she is loving monsters and becoming a monster herself because of it is the logical conclusion of this inner conflict, and illustrates perfectly how Anna is someone that tries to shoulder the world, taking responsabilities even in this situation.
A smaller but powerfull chapter, can’t wait for the next one. And thanks for the kind responses to my comments, they mean a lot. Really glad the reviews are somehow helpfull and interesting.
Author's Response:
Yeah, thanks Mr. in A suit. As a chronic lurker, I understand that most people don't comment, but sometimes it can feel like I'm submitting my writing into a void lol. That's why I appreciate the comments (especially the ones that let me know what you're liking/what you'd like to see).
Speaking of, about the tickling—I've been working on another story and I may have added a scene that is very similar to your request ;)
Also, I cannot wait for you guys to read the chapters where Anna's psyche is explored.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2021 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Anna can't seem to catch a break even when the monsters are sleeping. If Poppy didn't cause that reaction than you've certainly created another hurdle for our fair heroin to overcome.
Author's Response:
Ha! Yeah more revealings to come...
[Report This]Date: September 26 2021 2:47 AM Title: The Beginning
Honestly the story was well worth the wait. Was hell waiting but the payoff when you saw there was a new chapter was incredible. Precipiceofoblivion is an amazing author and I still check their page hoping for the start of a new story all the time. The waits are bad for this story as well but there are always so many good stories that are getting updated on here that fills the time, example being the return of Eiko today. This is by far my favorite story on this site and it's worth waiting for new chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tigerchevy! I know the wait can be long, but I hope you're still enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2021 11:48 PM Title: The Beginning
Just saw you responded. I can honestly say that curious girls is easily one of my favorite stories I've read, kept me invested for literally years. To break in a pet has all of the elements that made curious girls such a wonderful story. Looking forward to the continued success of your story and glad I could lead you to more inspiration.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I definitely blew through it in like a day. I can't imagine waiting so long to see the progression and overall conclusion of such a dramatic story. (Then again, I guess that's what I'm doing right now with this story haha) Thanks again for recommendation!
Date: August 16 2021 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
amazing charter. you're the best gts content writer right now.
Author's Response:
Aww you flatter me! Thanks rubber!
[Report This]Date: August 14 2021 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
A lot to unpack here, so I just let my imagination run wild with theories a little. Sorry in advance for any confusion and/or mispealing.
First we have the inner dialogue of Annabelle but it’s different: the voice adresses giantesses, not as masters, but as passionate, fearsome protectors, a role we’ve seen the “goddesses” fully take on the last couple chapters - and this ch. 19 cements that.
While Bennet highlights the gentleness and care the four have - and that usually goes unseen by Annabelle – Leah getting aroused on such a tense situation just by having Anna betwen her toes (great scene by the way) shows how deep her lust for Poppy really is.
Also, this chapter leaves beyond any doubt the fact that the four have every move carefully surveilled to a suffocating degree (and I am not just talking about that huge ass security team) as well as the fact they straightout fear their own parents, highlighting the bubble they live in... maybe a bubble the four built around themselves to protect each other.
The story had already hinted sometimes that Leah, Naomi, Molly and Harper feel loonely and are forced to act roles they did not necessarily choose... but they choose to keep Annabelle close and have her inprint, they choose to take the role as her goddesses. And I think if the Type 0 is affecting them, it’s because they choose Anna... and now Anna has to choose them.
Anna has to choose, not Poppy (whatever she really is). But what does it means to choose? With the long awaited introduction of the four parents their is a window for Annabelle to see her powerfull goddesses in a fullblown vulnerable state, more in need of her worship than ever before... and so she will try to help and choose... choose to worship them! This will be the final twist for these twisted relations. What will happen after? I don’t know, but if the families are willing to spend billions on researchs about type 0, it’s damn important and incredible to them.
I am guessing we will see more of the giantesses alone with Poppy and their respective families as each one will be eager to see... their daughters? No! The most wanted type 0! Take that for guilty Anna kkkkkkk.
Last but not least, I would like to point out the sweetest scenes of the chapter are with Naomi... call me crazy, but Anna clutching her thumb with Naomi gennuinelly concerned for her safety is just too cute. Also Harper punching Bennet, even fighting John so she could finish the bastard. Beautiful, Harper at its best.
As always, I can’t thank you enough for sharing your story with us. I am loving every chapter and how you are developing things. Long or short, if there is an update I will read and review it until this story is over.
Author's Response:
I love reading your reviews Mr. in A suit! Your analyses are always so interesting to read. You're picking up on some characterization that will be explored in further chapters (part of the reason why the parent chapter is taking so long).
Like always, I can't speak too much on your theories, though I will say when this story is over, it will be fun to re-read your comments.
Also, I'd like to mention that your little comment on Naomi and Annabelle's interaction was the catalyst for the little scene I just posted--so thank you!
Date: August 14 2021 2:51 AM Title: The Beginning
Another intoxicating chapter. Yours is the only story I keep coming back to.
Author's Response:
Thanks Elliot! Sorry for the long wait times though!
[Report This]Date: August 09 2021 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Another masterpiece of a chapter - thank you.
I'm not usually into giant content, but enjoyed the dynamic of Poppy being in the hands of an uncaring giant whose power over her was really emphasised. The idea that she would turn to the very individuals who murdered her friends and put her in this situation shows how desperate her situation is and perhaps hints that she's beginning to see the giantesses more and more as divine protectors. Perhaps beings worthy of true worship?
"Absolute physical domination over another person" - loving this side of Harper and hope we see more.
My ultimate hope for this story is that we get to see more of giantess Zoey - I really enjoy her character, she is incredibly powerful and your descriptive writing give us a fascinating window into the complex relationship between her and Annabel. The idea of her imprinting on Zoey is absolutely terrifying for poor Annabel, but as we can see with Poppy's inner musings it's something they're starting to consider. I would love Zoey to become the ultimate Goddess :)
Author's Response:
Thanks redfoot! I know giant content can be hit or miss on this site, but I was hinting at it in a lot of chapters leading up to this, so I hope it wasn't too jarring for the readers. Harper's physicality will be explored in further chapters, as we really delve into the FF's personal backgrounds.
I'm glad so many of you guys are liking Zoey! I had only mentioned her a few times before we got that interlude she stared in, so I was worried you guys wouldn't take to her. Zoey is a huge part of Annabelle's past, so as we learn more about Annabelle's trauma, we'll see just what their relationship dynamic was.
Thanks again for commenting!
[Report This]Date: August 08 2021 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
Part 1: The catsuit fits perfectly in this living nightmare, like another way for them and the universe to drive home the point to Anna that she is nothing more than a pet to these vile girls no matter how much she wished otherwise.
I am shocked they teased eating her again so soon after the last time nearly cost them their precious ""Poppy". I know they're evil incarnate but I would have thought they'd care just a bit about her PTSD on the matter.
I am rooting for Anna's triumphant win when this is all over...however you've dangled the Zoey carrot in front of us. A horrible girl through and through but damn if the big jock bully fan in me is not kind of rooting for it now...I'm horrible, I've made peace with this.
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Part 2:
Jesus Christ...you just can't let poor Anna have a bit of peace can you? First she gets scared by the thunderstorm without her trusty and noble bun bun and then she gets a chance at escape but gets shanghi'd by a massive pervert with an obbession for the very people who took her life away. If I didn't know any better I'd think this was a fetish website or something.
I will say though I am rooting for them to fuck up his life proper though. Smite somebody who actually deserves it for once instead of the poor souls they usually ruin.
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Part 3: Even when her life was in mortal peril the giantesses still found time to gain immense pleasure from her suffering, she really is fucked if a hail mary doesn't come soon. The way they systematically broke him down while being a simp/not in his right mind due to booze shows how truly powerful they are alone or as a united front which shows what Anna is really up against here.
The ending while light hearted still seems like a punch to the guy for Anna knowing they'll get off scot free with the only real comeuppance coming to anyone being the perv possibly and the poor soldiers trying their best to do their jobs.
Author's Response:
Hey Adam, as always you pick up on some interesting details. Yeah, the FF's response to trauma is not recommended by the American Psychiatric Association. And Don't worry, I'm also a Zoey stan. So far she's only been a few chapters, but damn it if it isn't fun to write her. She'll definitely be making a reappearance.
Thanks for reviewing Adam, your comments are always fun to read.
Date: July 06 2021 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love the long chapters. And can't wait for the next one top drop.
My ONE criticism is the overuse of the word "cooing" which I notice among many authors. Other than that, this could be 1000 chapters and I'd keep coming back.
Author's Response:
Thanks Elliot! I actually agree! I cntrl "F" the other day and saw how much I was using it lol. Thanks, I'm always trying to improve my writing. Hope you keep enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wasn’t fully satisfied with my first comment, so I deleted and changed it a bit. Now it’s good. Sorry for any confusion.
I don’t usually write about the sex scenes... but boy the depiction of Anna and Molly having sex was HOT!! And that’s because you prepared the mood so well, making a perfect transiction of a sentimental part (Molly genuinely opening up to Anna) to a sexy (Anna tickling and turning Molly on). Perfect. Just perfect.
In a past comment I said didn’t like Molly Much... I FULLY TAKE IT BACK! The depiction of her room as lacking personality and seeking approval and carnal attachment from HER TINY! So much emotions in only one chapter.
I think this story is especial because you are playing with appearances and expectations, and it all culminated in this two chapters, with a Molly full of lust and adoration saying “ I don't think I really understood what being your Goddess meant until recently” (great dialogues by the way), with Harper and Naomi expressly saying Poppy deserves to be WORSHIPPED!
They started as cinics, answering the espectations of society, while internaly fancing themselves as goddess allowed “breaking” in ocasional sprees of violence disdain and hatred for tinies, But see them now. They still think They are superior? Yes but they are showing outside signs of turmoil, to and for a tiny nonethelss. That, i see as the irony of the story, as well as kind of the tragedy of it’s antagonists.
You can theorize the giantesses inprinted on Anna, but I think it’s too early to draw conclusions about what imprinting really is and about the feelings of each character. It’s twisted relations all over since the beginning, with Harper “crush” and Leah’s amusement of Anna wits, and that’s what is so good about writing: you can portray any relation in all it’s complex contradictions (also why I don’t like Anna x Oliver. Too predictable kkk).
The giantesses are opening up to her, they love her. What about Poppy? She has to open up about Zoey, but not before coming clean about her fears about the 4 themselves. As I see it, Zoey and the mighty families are the true villains here... and will be instrumental for bounding Poppy to the giantesses even more than imprinting.
Sorry for any mispeals. I can’t imagine how much work you put into these long chapters and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Been waiting all week to read this. You always manages to surprise me!
About your question, I like long chapters - you can work more than one storyline at once, mixing many elements without rush - and think the length of this last chapter was good, it ended right were it needed... I ended already wishing for more Kkkkkkkk.
On a side note: any chance of a scene where Anna willingly ends up under a giantess sole and tickling her feet? Than, as pay back, Anna has her own feet worshipped... kkk
Author's Response:
Thanks Mr. In A Suit! I'm glad you're warming up to Molly. I may be a little biased, but I firmly believe that all of the giantesses have something special to offer Annabelle. Now whether she'll end up accepting it or not is another story.
As always, I love your analysis. I can't say much but both Annabelle and the giantesses are going to be forced to open up and get vulnerable in order to achieve the things they want. How each character will react to one another's' past? Who can say?
As for your side note: we'll just have to see, won't we ;)
Date: June 28 2021 6:56 PM Title: The Beginning
Another amazing chapter. So as for the length I'll reference literotica.com and say stories like Curious Girls or Sorority pledge are the best on the site and they have pretty long chapters so always the longer the better. Another plus to long stories is you can further the plot and add some smut without causing a conflict. Speaking of smut idk if you just arent a fan but we haven't seen any buttstuff yet with Naomi the last we haven't seen use Anna for pleasure maybe she could be into butt stuff? Or as I'm sure Zoey will get her hands on Anna at some point maybe her. Could be about her pleasure and Anna's torture with Zoey.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I actually checked out Curious Girls after reading this review. I see what you mean about the long chapters and the butt stuff lol. I will say that I was planning a very specific scene for that tag, but reading that story has given me a few other ideas so thanks!
Date: June 27 2021 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved this chapter. I'm glad we're back to the giantesses interacting with Annabelle directly. The necklace chapters were certainly well-written and enjoyable nonetheless, but in my opinion nothing beats having them interact with her openly. Love all the teasing and adoring they do, seriously the best part of this story for me is the unique relationship where the goddesses truly love Annabelle in a unique way that is honestly hard to describe.
I'm surprised it's been awhile since we've seen the alter-ego of Poppy show up. With how things were going here I thought for sure she would pop up near the end bit with Molly. Have to wonder how much playing along is pushing her psyche more and more towards that of "Poppy."
Cannot wait until the next chapter, honestly this is the best ongoing story on the site for me, the other ones I was interested in seem to not be getting anymore updates unfortunately. I have absolutely no issue on how long the chapters are, genuinely there is no such thing as "too long" in my book. That being said, I can only hope the fact that this chapter being broken up leads to a quicker release of the next installment!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Huggler! I have to say, I'm glad you like the dynamic between the giantesses and Annabelle (their interactions are also my favorite part to write). We're slowly going to be finding out a bit more about "Poppy" in the upcoming chapters. Stay tunned!
[Report This]Date: June 27 2021 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
You win some and lose some, Anna won the mission the of finding the chef's daughter and even managed to possibly find a weak link in the terror chain with Molly's new found self esteem thanks to her.
That said she kind of lost the war of not ending up as a sex toy yet again but at least it was the closest to a heartwarming moment as we may ever get with a giant person in this story and anything naughty coming from them.
As for the chapter length they are long yes but with things like this, Endless, The Fire story(forget the name but the one with Isobelle and Sabrina etc) the read is more than worth it.
Author's Response:
Thanks Adam! Annabelle has these little moments that give her motivation to keep keeping on. Whether it'll lead to freedom, we'll just have to see.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Another wonderful chapter - thank you!
Wonder what the giantesses will do if they find out what Poppy really thinks about Zoey. Will they see the fear she instils in her stepsister and crave dominance over rather than love for Poppy?
Just love this story, and am so pleased whenever I see an update. My personal preference therefore would be for chapters to be as long and detailed as possible :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words, and I'm also really excited to showcase the giantesses' "discovery" of Annabelle's past life. A lot of fun things are coming up. :)