Date: February 20 2021 2:58 AM Title: Blossoming Relationships
Wow. This chapter. I knew that I was right to be excited about the individual scenes!
First, Brian and Amy's scene of intimacy here was so sweet, and the actual act that they performed together was so erotic and just plain hot. I love them toegether.
Next, the scene with Chad and Julie genuinely surprised me! I, like Julie, thought that Chad had changed, but it seems like he hasn't. :( Julie is so sweet (and her dominance is honestly so hot)... If I was in Chad's place, I would enjoy doing whatever Julie wanted to do, and I'd wait for her for as long as she wanted! I think that he's honestly missing out on a wonderful girl...
Lastly... Maria and Veronica ^^
This section was. So. Hot.
I loved it!
Veronica finally embraces her new role as Maria teases and seduces it out of her. When Veronica says that Maria just wants her as a tiny slave, she doesn't deny it! Only strokes her and says she can be nice to her. This is most telling when Maria says:
“'I love that so much, little pet', said Maria, 'keep going and I might reward you.'”
Maria keeps commanding her, too! Veronica's sexual arousal and relaease is just a reward for her tiny pet. Like giving catnip to a cat~ ;P
I can't wait for Vernoica to slide even further into pethood as Maria dominates and dehumanizes her even further, all sweetly, like taming a horse and breaking its spirit, making Veronica love being nothing more than her tiny!
(Speculation: I love how you said that Veronica had the most sexual fun of her life there, after only breaking up with her boyfriend hours ago! Like I said in a previous review, Veronica will realize more and more that she isn't worthy of a person's life: including love and relationships. Maybe this will make her sad sometimes as she looks back on what could have been if she was never shrunk. If that's the case, then who knows? Maybe Maria will let Veronica be with a man again... by sharing her toy with her future boyfriend! ;P That was a lot, lol, but I just had to put it out there!)
As I will always say, this is amazing!
I can't wait for the next individual pair scenes! And you just know I'm looking for that Xue scene! XD
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Brian and Amy make a great couple, they bring out the best in each other!
Chad, he thinks that he can manipulate others into getting what he wants which clearly isn't working so well for Julie now .. but he might eventually turn over a new leaf, to be continued.
I've been having a lot of fun writing about Maria and Veronica. They're both really into the whole dominant/submissive relationship even if Veronica isn't fully ready to admit that just yet!
Haven't written much about Veronica's past but she's spent her life following more dominant personalities.
And interesting ideas about Veronica's future- thinking about the sequel!
Also, already writing the next chapter, Xue is in it ;)