Date: March 09 2021 2:52 AM Title: Hearts Made and Hearts Broken
I apologize for not putting reviews on this story until well after it is finished! I have been very busy.
Right off the bat, I just can't get enough of Veronica's devotion to her new owner, and Maria's playful domination of her pet. I love how she mentions Veronica's family and tells her how vauable she is and then immediately tells her why she is better as her pet. It's so hot, and neither one of them have any problem with it. They both totally accept their new roles in life.
I also just love Maria's possessiveness of her little toy person when Xue suggests taking her as a replacement for Sophie hehe.
Poor Chad. I almost feel bad for the guy, but more importantly, I really do hope that Julie finds her happiness. She really does deserve it. ^^
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2021 1:54 AM Title: Hearts Made and Hearts Broken
Nice !! I loved Maria and Veronica in this chapter, so sweet.
Also from the last chapter, I echo Tiny_Significance when I say I hope Sophie's plans go nowhere, like really anti-clmactic and she's put back under Xue's feet.
And Xue deserves tinies XD
I also think Sophie may be hallucinatng the voice she heard XD She's can't except the reality she's in, so her mind is dissociating. But yeah, hope her plan with the needles is some hallucination (or doesn't work at all)
Chad uurgggh, I hope nothing comes of his leaving. Like he just decides it's safer not to poke the bear that is Stephanie and her friends and just stay away.
Chad's a dick (and literally was a dildo)
I'm kinda hoping none of the tinies grow back, except maybe Veronica (who would still be with Maria, maybe shrinking sometimes for fun)
Anyway, another great chapter (and sorry for not reviewing the last one)
Can't wait for more.
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Oh and I kept thinking a really weird/satisfying AU idea when re-reading about Xue's husband dying due to Sophie's dad.
I thought what if Sophie's dad was also Stephanie's dad (like Stephanie's 'dad' Xue's husband was infertile, and Xue was working for Ronald at the time and Stephanie was the result of an affair, and when Ronald found out he fired her and later Xue's husband's death was intentional as a warning for her to keep her mouth shut)
So Sophie would be Stephanie's half sister.
Again, just a weird AU idea (I wouldn't mind writing it myself if you were cool with it XD)
Sorry for the rambling tangent here.
Author's Response:
For me, Maria and Veronica have been one of the nicest surprises as I was writing this story. Given Veronica's own insecurities, I felt like she needed someone like Maria in her life. At this point, they are smitten!
Haha you will see what happens with Sophie next chapter. All I'll say is that I think you'll like the result.
As for Chad - he was just really freaked out by being used as a dildo and is just trying to sort things out. He may do something at some point but he's a scared little boy inside.
And interesting idea on Stephanie and Sophie being half sisters. I kind of see how that could work.
Given the kind of guy Ronald is, I could see Ronald intentionally killing someone to hush-hush an affair.
You have my permission to write your AU idea. :D