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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2021 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Amparo Gutiérrez’s first meal

As someone who isn't into Vore, I am liking this more and more. The whole cursed groundhog day mechanic with different characters with different personalities is very well written so far. I can't wait to see how this continues to develop!



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Thanks so much!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Amparo Gutiérrez’s first meal

Again, I don't like vore, but I am liking this story.

You did a great job at Amparo's discovery that he's a real person. 

That moment of "Oh shit" was great.

Nice work on this, I can't wait to see more. 



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