Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 12:02 PM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

My goodness! Man, carnage. I feel bad now. I’ve ignored this story for months because I misjudged this story poorly based on the title and summary. 

And now, just these past 2 days, I binged all 20 chapters and I am impressed. Not just by the story, but also the erotic stuff. I may have been previously deterred from this story when you mentioned that it was heavily feet-centered, but it actually fits within the story and we see other erotic displays besides feet too. 

Some of my favorite scenes did involve feet and I almost can’t even believe I’m saying that right now, but yeah, Natalie makes toe timeouts sound sexy. But honestly, what made this story shine was the characters. 

I just want to give a shout out to Natalie in this story. Her character seems so iconic, that she should get an award in the giantess community. She feels so real, the way she interacts with people and the environment, is constant for the entire story and you could even predict what she is going to do based on what we have seen. It’s just like predicting what a friend of yours might do after you spend a while hanging out with them. I feel like I have seen so much of Natalie, that it feels like I know her. You’ve written how she is happy, sad, mad and everything that she feels complete. It’s such a thrill to watch her deal with every new tiny and the creativity she uses on them. 

Aubriegh was cool and also realistic. While not as entertaining as her mom, she was also a great character to understand. Young people, change moods often and that’s how I see her. Clearly, she hasn’t found her own path, and Natalie and the tinies keep battling for her attention and alliance. 

The other tinies were quite similar, but I love their conversations with Natalie or Aubreigh. I mean, some of this stuff was heavy. Especially that high school story with Mrs. Chen. That was deep. Who would’ve thought that a giantess story would’ve had some backstory that made me tear up. I mean, that’s just incredible. Then you got Thomas and Nate who like to argue back with Natalie and Aubriegh and their statements are so intelligent and make so much sense. Their comments were so damn good, that Natalie and Aubreigh literally couldn’t counter them besides physically punishing them. Lmao! Ok, but seriously, those tinies would excel in a debate class. 

Speaking of punishments, somehow, the entrapment underneath the toes is not redundant for me. Idk why. If this was any other story, I would’ve said, “hey, I know there’s a lot of feet, but you could mix things up a bit more”. However this story makes those scenes feel enjoyable for me despite not even loving feet in general. Sometimes there’s new people involved, maybe it’s for a different purpose, each time is new and interesting and made it fun to read. 

One character I’m rooting for is Ben. Man, this kid is like me. I’m in love with Natalie too and I would love to be her sex toy. I’m probably not as skilled as Benjamin to please her like that, but man, he got Natalie’s respect and that’s impressive. His 1 on 1 intimate scenes were some of the best giantess scenes I’ve read about on this site. They way she manipulated the contest on winning him from Aubreigh, his shyness and stuttering when talking to her, Natalie taking advantage of him and claiming he likes it. It’s just a perfect match made in heaven. Ben has more chemistry with Natalie than her own husband Andrew. 

Lindsey could keep Andrew while Ben could stay with Natalie. Win-win situation. Lol. Speaking of Natalie, I did think it was odd that she shrank right on Natalie’s driveway. Lol. I mean, that’s like some Hollywood drama where the hero is trying to disable a bomb and they manage to do it with 0.01 seconds left. Haha! That’s how crazy convenient this situation is for Natalie. 

But then again, seeing Natalie use her wits and sadistic nature is so fun to read about! While I don’t mind her being cruel, her naughty side balances her out for me, which is why I really like her character. She’s like this cold shell that rarely opens up, but if you are Benjamin or some other lucky soul, you could get that amazing moment with Natalie. 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey man, thanks for the detailed comment and rating! I'm really glad to hear that you are enjoying something you don't normally gravitate towards... it makes me feel like I'm doing something right! I know the title is ambiguous... I always intended it to be that way... but maybe I should revisit the summary... I wish I knew what would make it sound more appealing!

Binging all 20 in 2 days? That is impressive! I hope you enjoyed yourself reading it as much as I did writing it. It's interesting you say that comment about Natalie being predictable like a friend. Natalie is actually based off a real life friend of mine, although a different name of course. In fact, the story idea came to my mind when I was spending time with her. A lot of the scenarios in this story were inspired by real events that took place with her (various things she said and did) and then I applied those events to a shrinking/giantess setting). Even when things are taking place that didn't come from real life, I always stop and think, "What would my 'friend' do here in this situation?" and then I write what seems most realistic to me.

Aubreigh, on the other hand, isn't based off of anybody I know... so that could be why she is a bit lacking and always taking a back seat to her mom. But I've still enjoyed writing her conflicting feelings.

I'm also really happy to hear that you liked Mrs. Chen's backstory. That fact that you teared up really makes me happy! Sounds weird to say, haha! I almost didn't include it because I though it was unnecessarily cruel, but I'm glad I did. It really adds some variety to the tinies and their backgrounds. Again with Thomas and Nate, the most bold and brave of the tinies, I just imagined what I would say in this situation and wrote what felt natural.

Thank you for saying that the entrapment scenes under the toes isn't getting redundant and boring. I'm always worried about that. Each time I write one of those scenes I'm thinking, 'Didn't I say this already? How do I make this one different?' I'm always conscientiously trying to use different wording or focus on a different aspect of what that hellish torture would be like. I'll keep your comments in mind when I write future versions of that. It is my favorite thing to write/read and so I always want it to stay fresh.

Ben is all of us man, haha! He is probably the most unrealistic... but he is soooo fun to write. He's an excuse to indulge my fetish side a little more. Your kind words about his 1 on 1 interactions being the best you've read on this sight is making me blush. That's really nice of you, thank you for saying that. (And I have a lot of ideas for Ben and Andrew coming up as far as the 1 on 1 interactions are concerned.)

I know that having Lindsey shrink that quickly and conveniently would be lazy writing... but I just wanted to move the story along and not bog it down. I already felt like the story was bogging down so I glossed over it...

Man, thanks again for the nice review and all your kind words. I was already excited about writing some of the upcoming chapters, but your comments really lit a fire in me. It also made me realize things I wasn't aware of that I need to be mindful of... (such as balancing Natalie's cruel/naughty sides). I hope you keep reading and that you enjoy what's coming up. Take care!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 5:47 PM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

Forgot to add a rating! Also I loved how Aubreigh got off to dominating Lindsey.  Wonder if she will enjoy grinding against whole buildings! Might lead to a flood in the streets...

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 12:42 PM Title: A Tiny Betrayal

Really liking this story and can’t wait to see sexy mrs. Beaumont walk in a tiny community. I’m also really interested to see what happens with the tinies and hope you decide to include a couple scenarios from their perspective. Like how it feels to have the giant Beaumonts stomping around and maybe the tiny dishes rattle a bit or what have you. Also is this sanctuary guarded by some kind of security guard that Mrs. Beaumont needs to seduce to not only get in this area but possibly have the cameras turned off as well.
Anyways I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Ps how does Timberland keep out animals let alone people, is it in some kind of warehouse or something?

Author's Response:

I'm writing that chapter now and yes, I'm doing most of it from the tinies' perspective rather than the giants POV. The sanctuary city's were always, in my mind, as being in big warehouses, safe from the harsh elements as well as intruders and other animals. Thanks for reading, I'm glad your liking the story!